Cr4Ky

2012-02-02
Caught in ripples among the drift ice.
Here, is where our demons demise

2011-03-07
Thanks a lot!
It`s been almost a complete year i think, since i last posted, so it was time to do something about it:) have been busy studying and just never got around to do anything creative (except some notebook-texts like this one)

2011-03-07
Well written and easy to relate to, and it also keeps to theme of the song expanding the thoughts and words you find in hetfields version of the song.. i like this!

2009-12-17
Love for the beloved descrebid in a beautiful way:)
i feel strongly connected to this write because i sometimes struggle to find the right words, words to describe love... as you obviously did in this write:)
i also liked the image you posted to this text!
Thanks for posting this:D

-Cr4ky

2009-02-16
solitude.. a dangerous weapon of a selfdestructing mind unaware of the reality that solitude is a making of it's own

well written, nice flow. liked it a lot!
-Cr4ky

2009-01-24
This is the most genius description of a poet i have ever read!
This is the world of the poet caught in motion and described in a way that capture me totally.
I couldn't agree more!

"since it's natural for him
to break conventional dimensions,
since his home is timelessness."
WOW!

2008-12-04
you're on a roll liz:D wicked and good poetry must be thundering through your veins and building up in your head:D keep up the fantastic writing;) or else your head will explode^^

2008-11-18
Listening to the song and reading your poem at the same time was one WICKEDLY COOL experience! these stones rock!

2008-09-19
heartfelt hug liz:) and i like the feathers on your wings, they are so soft and warm:)

2008-08-31
Feels Fantastic to see a post from you again Liz:D it`s been a while!:D
Welcome back!:D

2008-07-31
Check your six - watch your back/look behind you:D

2008-05-21
i hope i won`t go anywhere.. i`d rather just float around in this world looking at the people in the streets without them looking at me.. and sometimes do a prank or two:)

This write is dark and powerful and i can feel the depth of how far you belive your rejection goes.. it drives me mad that the world could possibly do that.. but what do i know, right?
anyhow. remarkable good text and i liked it, like the mood of your text.

Sincerely
Øystein

2008-05-19
Keep up the good work S!! and by all means keep posting updates throughout the month so that this reaches every outpost of the bay;)

2008-05-16
absolutely!

2008-05-16
ready anytime:)

2008-05-11
a fine start! good rythm and flow.. could almost hear a tune in my head while reading this. a text with good potential of becoming a beautiful and heartfelt song! keep the spirit alive and feel the song in the poet inside of you!
Kindly
Øystein

2008-03-14
Yes! never look back but use the experience!
and to the work of art.. couldn`t agree more, altering the first completion or trying to make things "better" is a dangerous thing to do..
These truisms are as true as can be!

A nice text with good points and simple messages decorated by the craftmanship of a poet!

2007-10-11
absolutely fantastic. such images you create in this text! knocked me off my chair!

2007-10-01
Excellent images! i closed my eyes and saw the picture being painted.. sad, yet beautiful in the light of the sparkling river, almost felt real for a second:D

2007-02-24
yeeeeees! written well it iiiis:D
precious likes!:D

2007-02-23
Using time to read this was not a waste at all!
a superbly written text! it must have taken some time;)
well spent time!
great text!

Øystein

2006-12-10
It left me with a feeling of actually floating on the fog.. just dreaming away into nothing..

2006-12-10
a wonderful composition of words truly creates the fog in this poem and breathes a very heartfelt feeling of life and heartbeats into it
and the way this fog has stopped the time in a perfect moment really does show its outmost beauty!

2006-12-10
a very good reminder of how terrible the contrasts of our world really are!

2006-12-10
A strong text!
makes one wake up!

with a new will to fight: to find the life ment to live and never stop living no matter how the world treats you on your path.

2006-12-10
The fog is a beautiful place.. an inspirational place
but also a dangerous place.. i think we`ve all been there sometime
a well constructed poetic describtion of the mind fog!
There are many fogs to be within!

2006-12-10
This is a extremly good text aaron! makes me sit down and think of what i could have done differently in the past. a strong and true text!

2006-12-10
strong text! a good flow of flaming words!
the flames within are indeed able to light up again and make us feel reborn.. well done!

2006-11-03
wise words wrapped
in a
very viciously verdict
and the
thruth told towards
the
people playing perfect

2006-11-03
hehe.. it`s the chocolate love story:D
well written. chocolate sweet:D

dark, white or milk-chocolate?

2006-10-19
nice! this is a very good text and i believe this could make a hit;D

2006-10-19
you nailed it! this is a great song liz!
verse 2 really rocked:D enjoyed reading this!:D

2006-10-16
enjoyed this one;) nice!

2006-10-12
haha.. another frustration got it`s words on the bay! love this:D electricians are slow when things go wrong, and man! who doesn`t get pissed when the coffees cold??

2006-10-11
frustrated? guess so^^ i would probably be a person doing things like that.. just leaving the car and walk:D love the twist it gave at the end:D a higlight of this text:)
nice man! good write:D

2006-09-26
ooh^^ intense write! intense kissing!:D

what a woman!!

2006-09-23
love it!bloody wonderful!
i do the same thing form time to time..
just walk out into the streets to find myself^^ it`s a trip for the mind:D

2006-09-22
rock on! i "sing for the moment" ! nice tribute!

2006-09-22
you are Reina de la noche, but blooming everyday makes you quite exceptional! take all the time you need! and do take care of yourself!

2006-09-22
Write more of this!

"the show must go on"!;)

2006-09-22
nicely put! a good write.. nice flow, good choices of words!

2006-09-21
Clapton acoustic:D a good write:D
only missing claptons music! that would send this to the top!

2006-09-19
this is haunting!

A very good image.. a little scary to think about though.. but such a strong text!

Bravo!

2006-09-19
...i just almost blew my brains out^^

this is deep thinking... deep..
man... now i need some coffee to get my brain started again..

2006-09-18
GREAT! you are a superb poet! that`s for sure!

2006-09-18
hmm.. sounds fun:D looking forward to reading the final compilation^^

2006-09-08
this is a good text, it takes time to get over a lost love. you describe it in a nice way with this poem, very good images of the situation and a beautiful choice of words

"The smokey air blends perfectly
With the smell of my perfume."

really liked the imaginary of this particular part.

-Cr4Ky-

2006-09-08
A philosophers words indeed..

I like the way you center music as a part of the worlds exsistence! music has so much feelings and such a healing effect on people!

Nice!

2006-09-06
strong beatiful text with good sense and a very good mission!

*bookmarked*

-Cr4KY-

2006-09-06
a thank the world for whats been given and all the friends you have made ~ epitath

A beatiful thought lays behind this!