Ivan R

2019-04-04
A great read

2019-04-04
A poem ( haiku) as good as it can be made

2018-08-26
"leaving four to better dreamers ..."

Think you are The dreamer, the thoughtful one ...

Such a marvelous poem ... it gave me such ease, such paus ... the wording just came to me (the reader) like waves ... I would never, ever think to rock that boat

2018-04-07
Poetry

2018-04-07
This one has a vibe that is great

2017-06-17
I like this. The exhaustion of a broken heart at it again. Great.

2017-06-17
A good lament actually works sometimes. And your last stanza, about the sillyness of being sad actually picked me up (I was just before I read these words of yours feeling really sad.) Thank you for this one

2017-06-04
So tender.

2017-06-04
Breaks my heart to read this.

2017-06-04
So honest, so naked, a plea that comes from the gut. A great read. Thank you for posting.

2017-05-12
Sad, beautiful tones of melancholy.

2017-05-12
Dense. Great

2017-05-11
I like this, it has a great punch to it, and I also agree; replication must not equal wisdom. It should only be celebrated in songs, like when the Beatles say :
yeah, yeah, yeah.

2017-05-11
A brilliant tale drenched in marvelous prose . But these wonderful, sad descriptions of love once lived scare me and I do not want to take 'em as truth, having just recently fallen deeply in love and thus can not see this ever happening to us. Or will this poem ring true to me ten years from now? If I still have her then, then I will sing this poignant and beautiful poem of yours to her and have her smile again.

2017-05-11
Superb poetry, pure life in this. Amazing.

2017-04-30
The tone of it, the prose, the overall feel of the poem; superb.
Love this one.

2017-04-28
This is so good. Its dense, it has a great story and a beautiful lethargy that is fascinating to follow, great poem indeed.

2017-04-05
I must agree. To be forced out of ones country hurts deep. I know this, being forced to flee with my parents at the age of 8 from a dictatorship, I was robbed of my fate. Strong poem.

2017-04-05
Knowing nothing about sailing, this poem still took me on a voyage that was much enjoyed.

2017-04-05
I feel it! ;)

2017-04-05
Beautiful! This washed my insides with so much beauty, a marvelous feeling it was to read this poem.

2017-04-05
Great text. I felt it.

2017-03-09
A gem. Heartfelt.

2017-03-09
Honest. It is always a good thing.

2017-02-27
Such a nice air to it, the words fly light, wondering,

the tone is so fine, I really like this

2017-01-18
Great write, great thoughts and feelings shared on something as important as what you portray.

2017-01-18
Interesting

2017-01-18
As a story, complete. Joyful, great to read, to feel

2017-01-18
Though this is knowledge, the way you say it, portray it, makes so much sense, it should be taught at schools, how you say it, makes perfect sense

2017-01-18
Yes! You are so right in this, to be human ...

2017-01-13
Unsettling, yet powerful

2017-01-13
To not know, is truly a hell of its own, yes

2017-01-13
Life as it is. Just nailed it. In poetic frame of thought, in poetic waves ... just great

2017-01-13
Hear, hear!

2017-01-13
The pictures come one after the other, many, coming, passing and new come ahead; still, the tone is the same, laconic, almost waiting for something to happen that never does ... this is a wonderful poem, beautiful, strong and bleak at the same time ...

A great read, a great write, a remarkable scenery that goes on and on and i never want to stop seeing.

2017-01-12
I like this, so much energy emanating from it, I got energized reading it, yeah!

2017-01-10
Twists and turns and beauty in the midst of dark, greatness emerges

2017-01-10
Beautiful

2017-01-10
Beautiful

2017-01-10
You write well, you speak out, you say that which is important, greatly done you wordsmith!

2016-08-24
This is such a good poem about such an original idea. What a wonderful way of living by making sure someone always has someone by their side at the last moment giving
reassurances of a life worthwhile and well lived. This is simply a beautiful poem, eloquently written.
Ashe

2016-08-24
This is so beautiful. A complete poem from beginning to end.
Enjoyed very much reading this.
Ashe

2016-06-06
Honest, nervous, sweaty poetry, like something one wants to wash off, turn off, tune out, this story is so well told and honest to the bone ... great words are this honest. Beautifully human

2016-06-03
Lovely as a rose petal

2016-06-03
Interesting, delightful, I feel like I am treading on eggshells now, due to the sophisticated manor of this poem ... lovely write

2016-06-03
A monumental poem

2016-06-03
This is beautiful! Really hot, lovely, with so much intensity, like watching the painting being painted at the moment!

2016-05-30
This is a fast memory, the way I read it of course, with picante details, full of flavor in the doings of something not accepted, a great tale, and a much enjoyed read ... what a life, what a freedom, what a joy to be that one

2016-05-29
Heartfelt,
deep in its devotion, hurting in its loss, wonderful in its exclamation.

2016-05-23
Beautiful! Amazing kid writing with the sense of a grownup, but asking the questions that a child asks, which are the important ones ... amazing