| lost for you
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2007-12-08
love the contradition.
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| IF YOU WERE GOD...?
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2007-12-08
Big question but no one can be GOD!!!!
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| Her source of happiness
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2007-12-08
strong write..
well-done
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| My age demands me to be in love
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2007-12-08
well love doesn necessary takes our freedom.
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| Love could be a gift
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2007-12-08
yes agree.
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| no rainbow
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2007-12-03
True tears are in the heart yet poured by the eyes.
All the best,Amanda
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| Who am i ?
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2007-11-30
sometimes it happens.well-said.
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| Cry or not
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2007-11-30
your words here are healing.myself now in pain since my health is not in a good state and a decision should made soon but that pain me made look at life from a different prespective and am trying to be thankful for what i have or had. thank you for this wise write.
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| How Could I Have Not Loved You by M.A.Meddings
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2007-11-21
Good one.
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| Bright days and thoughts
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2007-11-21
Am glad you could express your joy through nice words here.
all the best,
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| Im sorry
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2007-11-21
sorrow can break one's heart. I loved how you expressed it and wished if it was longer.
Take care please,
Amanda
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| The world
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2007-11-18
it's everywhere
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| Seed
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2007-11-18
I love the theme here. nice work.
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| Can't I Be
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2007-11-18
feeling of love flow here and it's my 1st time reading a poem of yours but i did sincerely enjoy it.
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| SAD ALL THAT IS GOOD COULD END
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2007-11-18
you have jusy said the truth.
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| The Truth ( A message for women) Explicit!!!
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2007-11-18
You made me laugh from my heart. TRUE!!!!!!!!!!!
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| Help For Lords Sake poet bay rats
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2007-11-18
it's ok man. there ups and downs
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| As true as true can be
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2007-11-18
very sensitive write.
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| I was older than you
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2007-11-18
i love the simlicit and the daring passion.
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| A quick sms
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2007-11-18
agree with you 100%
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| Love simplicity
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2007-11-18
well-done
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| Would You?
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2007-09-25
you made me pause and think. it provoked many questions. just loved it.
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| would you feel sorry
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2007-09-25
I loved how you started but why you didn't go on.
keep it up,
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| Sweet
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2007-09-25
I feel this write so honest and sincere. Enjoyed it.
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| TODAY IS THE DAY....
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2007-09-25
I could relate to it since my wedding day is soon. beautiful emotions expressed.
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| Look Into My Eyes....
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2007-09-25
I love how simply and plainly you express your feelings.
regards,
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| Nothing Else should matter
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2007-09-25
it's great to define one's priority and as they say Family comes first.
keep it up,
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| Once again my favorite writers on the BAY
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2007-09-25
MY God!!!!!! Thank you Will, fel glad not only for myself but also for the rest and what you wrote about wee2 it's true 100%.
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| The Remnants
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2007-09-24
I read it carefully and really enjoyed from that meaningful piece.
all the best,
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| A Man's Heart (Co-Write Rik & F.i.in.e Moods)
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2007-09-20
This is one of the greatest poems I have read here. Well-done guys.
kind regards,
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| If only I could fix myself..
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2007-09-20
that's a very remarkable work. I mean it.
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| You might have MONDAY BLUES
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2007-09-12
Yes, we should have the energy no matter what was the day.
well-done,,,,,,,
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| Things on my mind
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2007-09-11
Wow!!!!!speechless. I really admire this romatic work.
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| Mother Italy
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2007-09-11
Brilliant.
all the best
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| loneliness.
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2007-09-11
you used strong words to express the feeling. a very good work.
best regards,
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| Ex-Lovers
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2007-09-11
it's short yet express very true feelings.
regards,
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| INSPIRED PIECE (Stay Apart)
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2007-09-11
sometimes the most tough decisions are only the right. i am glad that you were inspired by my piece. i love this poem.
all the best,
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| Blessings of God
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2007-09-04
That's a great piece.
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| LOVE
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2007-09-03
I do agree with you. Those who are in love find joy and at times pain, but it's better than not having at all love.
regards,
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| ONLY YOU
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2007-09-03
words here are so sweet.
regards,Amanda
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| Do You Remember
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2007-09-03
sometimes when we look bak, we realize what we didn get at once.
well-done
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| I Remember.
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2007-09-01
that's a very specila write
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| Cover Your Face
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2007-09-01
well-penned but do you express here appearance or what the speaker feels inside.
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| Oh The Pain In My Arm
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2007-09-01
awful pain.
regards,
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| Let Us Talk About the Soul
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2007-09-01
Great words, full of wisdome.
Sometimes we are taken by life to nameless shores in short when we don give time to realize our mission and be with ourselves frank.
well-done
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| Little MISS Sunshine (thanx again Little One)
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2007-08-25
Happy to see how her presence means a lot to you.well-penned.
all the best,
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| Cant Live With Out It
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2007-08-25
a good text but lacks connetion in some parts.
all the best,
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| Thinking Of You
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2007-08-25
very sincere and lovely.
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| I Wish I Knew
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2007-08-25
well-done.Beautiful work
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| Listen! ~
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2007-08-23
that's so lovely. enjoyed reading it.
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