The later It Gets by M.A.Meddings
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2008-02-01 Oh I agree with you on this. This is very nice.
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When The Dust Is Settled Down
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2008-02-01 What an interesting poem and well it sounds like the typical American. You did very well with your descriptive passages.
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Magnolia Springtime cowritten with Lastromantichero
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2008-02-01 This reminds me of the deep South and yes it also reminds me of Sentimental Journey. You did well Kathy.
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The naked fighter
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2008-02-01 Oh yes this text is well worth reading and I must say good job. This one certainly makes you think.
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Given The Choice, Would You?
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2008-02-01 Our past is our history and it is our history that shapes us for better or for worst. The thing is what we choose to do with that in which we cannot change. Many times what does not kill us only makes us stronger. Never let go of a pleasant memory and even when tragic if you came out the better, wiser and stronger than that is not bad.
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baby sister
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2007-04-09 This is a lovely tribute to your sister. I hope everything does go well.
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Sincerely Yours
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2007-04-08 I agree this is lovely and well I feel that way about my husband.
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Wings of Poesy
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2007-04-08 This last month I have been busy working longer hours. But I had to come back and read your work. As always it is a joy to read.
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My Dearest Friend
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2007-03-02 This is very beautiful and I am glad that I read it as March 15, 2001 my mother slipped the surly bonds of earth and went home. What a wonderful tribute to your dearest friend.
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Night Soul Woman's birthday
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2007-03-02 Wonderful and I wish her the best on her birthday.
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Beware of
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2007-02-15 Yes to forgive means it ends because it is not what the person expects. Good show my friend.
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My burlesque queen
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2007-02-12 I believe that Zoya is correct and well in many ways it reminds me of all the tragic beauties that die too young
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The last Kiss by M.A.Meddings
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2007-02-12 You are correct we definetly will remember it and always.
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Newborn & Candle
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2007-02-10 This is unique and I like different as well as unique.
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Two aliens live inside me! (I§I)
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2007-02-07 This is very unique in its style. I liked the competition of two DNA'S within you. It gets confusing sometimes doesn't it?
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Life and Time
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2007-01-06 This is most excellent and it made for some really lovely reading this evening.
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2007***HAPPY NEW YEAR***2007
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2006-12-31 Happy New Year to you too and may this one be even better for you.
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An Ethereal Soul
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2006-11-17 I must agree this is hauntingly beautiful and written so true to your style. It really flowed across the page. What a delicious treat before going into the hospital.
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Lucifer's Great Fall
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2006-11-17 I just discovered your text here and what a lovely piece to read. I will definetly be reading more of your works. I think you summed up Christianity in these verses. That I like and found nothing to dislike.
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Beauty withers and dies
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2006-10-25 An interesting question to pose indeed. I like this.
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My queen
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2006-10-25 Well I found such a person in my friend and husband. It can happen, this is a lovely write.
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Little girl
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2006-10-13 Unfortunately this is the sad comment on the abuse that goes on in our society. You brought out that very well.
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ENOUGH IS ENOUGH
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2006-10-04 Well if I see a piece that I don't feel is my particular view. I try to read it anyway and allow people their freedom to speak. I have read some pieces that I have found very enlightening. But you are right if you do not agree with something a person wrote, there is no need to be nasty.
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The Face of God
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2006-10-04 I agree this is beautifully put and once again you spoke your heart.
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Why does and angel die
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2006-10-04 Many times this sad event occurs. I hope that you will read my piece called I Do Not Know Why. I liked the simple and poignant message behind your poem.
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You Can Die and No-One Will Notice
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2006-10-04 I would say that you do create highly descriptive images. Another excellent piece.
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The Light (haiku)
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2006-10-04 Oh this does speak out loud a lot more than just a few lines.
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Your name in my mailbox (to each of my poetbay friends)
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2006-09-28 I agree with the comment you have a magnificent heart and your love comes through. I enjoyed this piece a lot.
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Oasis in the Desert of Life
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2006-09-28 My former pastor said that the desert was his word for his special place of prayer. I liked this piece and I am glad that you sent it to me to read.
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Towards the tower
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2006-09-28 I can see the events of 911 coming out in this piece. Very graphic and telling.
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RIVER OF STRANGERS
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2006-09-28 I agree this is an exception write. I like the imagery in it for it flows rather well.
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Hidden Ashes
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2006-09-28 I wondered about the people killed when the twin towers collapsed. This is indeed haunting.
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You're mine, always
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2006-09-28 I agree this is an amazing piece of poetry. Very excellent handling of the English language.
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Can I have?
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2006-09-22 Well you take a moment we can wait as sometimes we just need to chill out.
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Sweet beer of mine
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2006-09-22 This is very clever indeed.
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A song for the bed (Rock on)!
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2006-09-22 I am beginning to get into your poetry. How interesting and artistic.
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Heaven without end
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2006-09-22 Now this one is something to think about.
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A goodbye never spoken(Carmen's Love story)
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2006-09-20 My goodness, I have to think on that one. This is rather good.
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Boy Hits Girl
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2006-09-20 This happens too many times, however in a situation that we encountered, a little talk was had with the man. He got the point, trust me he did.
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In memory of a child who didn't make it
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2006-09-20 This is very sad and well I remember my own lost son. It was 23 years ago.
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THE EYE OF THE BEHOLDER
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2006-09-18 Hmmh this is a form that I have not seen before but that is the beauty of clicking on something you have never tried. Very creative.
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Diamond on the Bay
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2006-09-18 Well I will indeed welcome him and what a nice piece of poetry for you to do for him.
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Let It Be
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2006-09-18 Oh how I loved that song. Yes they truly did classical music and this one is a classic.
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Slippery slimey smug arrogant deceitful thieving taxing Gordon
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2006-09-18 You know I must applaud someone would comes in and does a rant like this one. You certainly rank as a topper old chum.
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Oh starborn child....
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2006-09-17 My but you just seem to get better and better, a true pleasure to read.
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A Song Of The Sea
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2006-09-17 This puts a whole new perspective on walking the plank. Definetly gives you a view that one would not think of.
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Innocence Felled
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2006-09-16 A sad comment and pain filled piece. There is a great deal of depth in this one.
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What did God say?
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2006-09-16 I would say that perhaps God said, let it be.
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sacrifices
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2006-09-16 A very unique poem to read. Sad and filled with passion.
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show me
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2006-09-15 This is very good and I have two friends named Claudia. Yes I truly hope you will be shown.
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