| Winter Haiku
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2007-02-06
An excellent image I can feel the chills of coldness in my flesh
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| A small shining train
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2007-02-04
Happy to see active on this poetry portal...And happy to read your poems in English...And happy to be the friend of such a talented Palestinian artist, poet, journalist...you name it.
See my page here. You will find some interesting Arab poets whose poetry I translated into English in my attempt to let our good poets to be known worldwide......
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| LIFE - A TALE FROM A CONFUSED GRANNY
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2007-01-20
Very interesting poem ...I wish you would write in small letters not capital
Munir
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| You miss me
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2007-01-16
again you sing here...
You miss me
That's all I need
To feel you
Inside me
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| Agreement
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2007-01-12
nice poem I like the flow of it ...
Endymion
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| I love you
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2007-01-12
It could a song more than a poem
Munir mezyed
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| EYES ARE SEAS
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2007-01-12
I like the way u try to define the eyes ...people say eyes are the mirror of the mind ....But what makes ur poem very special is that u use images ...like
EYES ARE THE SEAS
IN WHICH DREAMS RISE
LIKE TIDES
And so on to the rest of the poem....
good luck
Munir Mezyed / Endymion
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| A Game
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2007-01-04
this is absolutely an exquisite poem, excellent imaginary...the best part I like the most of it although i like it all:
There are dancing silhouettes
in an unreal alley.
Poems, and smiles,
and fingers.
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| Frost
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2007-01-03
An exquisite short poem...!!
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| Frost
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2007-01-03
An exquisite short poem...!!
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| Life And Death
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2006-12-24
The Death is truth
And
Life is lie.
what more can i add to this poem...?
brilliant poem
Endymion
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| Sometimes I feel I am the Rain
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2006-12-24
Marvelous...!!!!!
endymion
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| Blind
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2006-12-24
The is a very powerful poem...short and full of depth and meaning...each one will understands it different.
Endymion
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| I-N-D-I-F-F-E-R-E-N-T
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2006-12-24
I love the music of ur words ...
Endymion
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| ~ Sleep walker of reality ~
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2006-12-24
Well, first the poem is brilliant and well- written...again it shows how much talented you are...I read most of ur poems here ...I find them all very awesome poems...
I like this part the most
From the chains of passion
From the chains of fear
Good luck
Endymion
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| 33) You are my Gift
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2006-12-24
This is pure love ...Love that makes every thing look differently...
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| A Dream Of My Brother
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2006-12-21
this brilliant writing ..u have all the tools of a good poet
I love the way u play with words
Such as:
I begin combing the nests out of his hair.
Scraping the dirt away from beneath his fingernails
cheers
Munir Mezyed
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| Blue Eyes Flaunting Great Seas of Knowledge
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2006-12-21
very romantic and sad
cheers
munir mezyed
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| Love Is Believable
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2006-12-21
i am so astonished to find a good poet who writes poetry in English form Syria ....I will read all ur poems ... I just read this poem now but all I can say: u are very talented, full of passion and love
Big toast for u
Munir Mezyed
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| I Will Think of You Tonight
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2006-12-21
I love this journey, a journey to the celestial world; this makes your poem as special because it is very vivid, full of emotion, simply is the journey of the mind ...
Munir Mezyed
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| A boy named Jack-a limerick
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2006-12-21
I really can not blame him if he sees these sexy asses
take care
munir mezyed
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| Lust..
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2006-12-21
wow , this is really amzing, very awesome poem ..short and very witty
Munir mezyed
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| The Ocean
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2006-12-21
ur poem as wild as an ocean... I love the sound of water " the murmur" this is what I felt – hearing the murmur of water and the waves dashing to the shore while reading ur poem.
Big hugs
munir mezyed
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| ~Dance With Me Darling~
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2006-12-20
It is very romantic and makes me wonder dance with the music or with ur words.
I love this part
Music embraces this
Sensuous enthrallment
Munir
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| Take care of me
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2006-12-19
Cute poem...short and to the point
U know i wrote a poem is totally
Sighing, writhing in pain...
When injected with love
Pain abates.
Amazing! Pain soothes pain
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| Midnight Healing
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2006-12-19
Beautiful and stunning imaginary ...I give u a big toast
munir Mezyed? endymion
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| Ocean Of Compassion And Difference.
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2006-12-19
This is a call for all human to come together. I really give u a big toast as this is really the poet's message top the world:
through the words of the poet's pen,
or lyrics of the muso's heart,
then yes,
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| Ocean Of Compassion And Difference.
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2006-12-19
This is a call for all human to come together. I really give u a big toast as this is really the poet's message top the world:
through the words of the poet's pen,
or lyrics of the muso's heart,
then yes,
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| Ocean Of Compassion And Difference.
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2006-12-19
This is a call for all human to come together. I really give u a big toast as this is really the poet's message top the world:
through the words of the poet's pen,
or lyrics of the muso's heart,
then yes,
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| The Memory Remains
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2006-12-18
I have a poem similar to it ..it is called NAY...I will post it some day and allow u to read it...any way..ur poem is Very romantic in away but at the same time full of emotion and love...But the question will always remain, are we able to delete the memories out of our mind?
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| Sanctuary
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2006-12-17
People sing by using their voices but u sing with ur soul
I love this poem as the one who can write such a poem is indeed a very heart full person with so much passion
I also love the flow and the music of the poem .
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| Souls
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2006-12-17
keep on writing these sensual poem till u make the world intoxicated with love and drown in a sea of nectar...U are amazing and ur poems too
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| Lourdes- the talented the wise
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2006-12-17
Like I told u before u really draw with words but what makes ur poems so special is the flow and the music of it.
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| The touch of the magic pearl
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2006-12-17
u are absolutely a very talented poet ...as more as I read ur poems I wanna read more and more
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| Faith
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2006-12-17
This is like a song of the soul
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| Depression
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2006-12-17
This a very nice poem, well written but a bit sad
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| 29) Will life without love will ever be Complete?
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2006-12-17
I totally agree with u as there no life without love or I better say no beauty without love
love is crown of beauty upon the head of life
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| Dream of Doom...
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2006-12-16
I have a poem similar to it
I will post it so u can read it
it is called
Shadow, Dreams and Death.....
love
munir mezyed
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| The night the moon fell down
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2006-12-16
Again this is a marvelous poem ...a journey to the mythical world ...if u allow me to edit ur poem as u have words which make the poem not flow...i mean words that u do not need ...
Gave the sword of the spirit
to the humanity
Brought the gift of untuition
into this world
this is how i edit these lines
Giving the sword of spirit
to humanity
Bringing the gift of(intuition)
Into this world
Big toast
Munir mezyed
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| Words of Fire, Writ in Heart's Blood, Over Surface of Water
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2006-12-15
You have all the skills of writing modern poetry.... u use less words than it needed where they are full of depth and meaning...u actually draw with words and above all you have a very artistic way of writing
Good poem lady
Big toast
Munir Mezyed
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| The night the lights went out
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2006-12-15
Before the lights went out
do u know that i have a poem called
when the light went out
what a coincidence
my best regards
munir mezyed
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| Welcome to hell baby (a repost)
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2006-12-13
Vampires will suck your blod
Nice poem...and well written...
I would like to draw ur attention about misspelled word:
Blood not blod
take care
munir
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| Running naked on the street
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2006-12-13
to be a writer needs to be free and you have a free soul..
Cute and nice poem
Munir
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