Hagzissa

2008-07-12
Filling up the empty unwritten lines in the history-book....
the future...

Very beautifully written, as always, Kathy.

2008-05-10
Oh, I can so relate to this one!
And I can also relate to the feeling of victory when being able to move on and stand tall and say: You mean nothing to me anymore.
Great closure-text(hope I spelled that right).

Powerful writing indeed!

2008-05-10
Sounds like a perfect place to be...
Excellent write,Mike!

2008-04-21
What a sweet and tender text! I like it a lot!

2008-04-21
That is so sad! I do hope you get to see him often anyway, kids do need to know both sides of the families.
Well written and heartbreaking text!
Oh, and I don't recall your name here so guessing you're new here to poetbay? Very welcome!!!
/Jeanette

2008-04-21
OMG! This is excellent!!!!
Such a flow through the whole text. Instant fave!

2008-04-19
Actually.... I've read this several times now and I can't really grasp it. But I do know that I like it, a lot, it has something even if I can't get total grip about what. Still... I do like it!

2008-04-15
Welcome aboard!
Very happy to see that the poetbay will keep on going and my suggestion is that you simply put the same features here that there is on Poeter!
Nicer layout, better functions....
And I agree with Rob, it would be nice to be able to preview the comment before posting.
/Jeanette

2008-04-15
I like this one, especially at the end....
cause it's so true... fight for the tomorrow and tomorrow will wash away yesterdays sorrow.....
Well written!!!

2008-01-09
Heartwarming text and it sure made me smile.

2007-12-09
I hear you and there's a lot of us who'll stick around so there's hope for the bay yet. :)

2007-12-08
I'm not leaving either! I'll stay til they drag me away. :)

2007-12-08
I agree with Rob....this was interesting.

2007-12-08
I have missed what's going on with your health but I do hope it isn't serious?
This text do reveal a lot of pain but I can also see a fighter between the lines.
Well written

2007-12-07
Yeah, I've been thinking that when I'm observing my cats...especially the big furry male... he knows how to enjoy life and it just seems like such a pleasant life being him. :)

Lovely write here
*smiling*

2007-12-07
I love this piece! You truly are a romantic-hero and this text is so very easy to relate to. Thanks for sharing

2007-12-07
That sure was a inspirational piece! I'm too lazy to workout so I'll keep on enjoying my walks with the dog instead and will send a thought to everyone sweating in the gym. :)

2007-12-04
yeah, cause the love really has nothing to do with the words... the true feelings shines through the action which means that if the love is true you can feel it.
Sweet short text

2007-12-03
Aww....this is so sweet. Your feelings really do shines through very clearly in this one. Well done,Mike.
/Jeanette

2007-12-02
LOL
This was just excellent! Made me smile bigtime!
Thanks
Jeanette

2007-12-01
It was a sad one... very well described how you can feel one of those days when it's raining outside and on the inside.

2007-11-23
ouch! Yep.... it's not always a treat having someone in your life, is there?
Great write here,my friend.

2007-11-23
Aww...heartwarming indeed. Greatly expressed here as usual. I love this one,Kathy!

2007-11-22
*laughing*
this was funny. :)

Happy Thanksgiving to you too and to your family
hope you'll all have a wonderful holiday
/Jeanette

2007-11-21
A good one. *smiling*

2007-11-19
*sighs*
that's love ... :)

2007-11-19
I'm one of the fortunate kind of population who never catches the flu, think I'm immune or something... I usually gets the pneumonia instead but still , no virus. :)

But yeah, since the flu can be really ugly guess it's better being safe than sorry.
Well written as always, Kathy

2007-11-18
Welcome omboard then, I've already joined the rats. :)

2007-11-18
Oh so true....
:)

2007-11-16
Well,Dan.. you know as well as I do who owns this site. And considdering the playground the swedish site is I still find this a more pleasant place to be. But I do see your point and I also would like to see someone actually tending to this page instead of just ignoring its existance. But how to get the owner to pay any attention to poetbay... I don't know to be honest.

2007-11-14
no matter how much time you have never seems to be enough... I do know that feeling from longdistance-relationsship....

Beautifully expressed as always. Well done,Mike!

2007-11-13
OMG.... Kathy, this is so great!!!!!!!! I do sympathize with you, I really do, since I had a lot of bad luck with cars too this last spring... but the way you've written about it here just made me laugh so hard. LOL
Well, a new car should at least hold for a while so congrats to that and now enough with bad luck for a while I hope. :)

2007-11-11
I think that without all of those questions why we wouldn't get very far in life. We need to ask and need to find out in order to get our inner satisfaction.

Well written indeed. :)

2007-11-11
There's one red thread going through this text: HOPE!
I love it since it is so true. All the things that hasn't been said or done yet gives us hope on the future to come cause we still have the chance of making a difference.

2007-11-11
I think you are an extraordinary poet and you write well no matter what you print down, but you do bloom when you write about the dark. Poetry in its excellency!!!!!!!!! Well done, Elle!

2007-11-10
Oh, Kathy! This is an excellent text and very very easy to relate too since I grew up watching my mom get abused and nearly beaten to death and then I started walking in her footsteps finding men who abused me.....
There's only one way to get out of a destructive relationsship and that is to take the highway.

I do believe this text can make a difference and send that final strength to some women who are on the verge of leaving and just needs that little extra push.

*applauds*

2007-11-08
Very well expressed indeed. It shows the words comes directly from the heart. Wonderful text!!!!

2007-11-08
Aww...that is so sweet!!!!!!!!!!! *smiling big time*
Wonderful heartwarming piece here,Kathy. I love it!!!!!!!!!!!

2007-11-03
Life is tough sometimes and descitions can be hard to make but in the end,following the heart will lead you on the right way in the end. You do what you gotta do,right?
Wonderful writing here as usual,Will, and I especially liked the last part,made a great ending to the text.

2007-11-03
Amazing how love has that ability,isn't it? To make one stronger and complete. Wonderful writing here ,Mike. I really loved this one cause it revealed so many feelings in so few words and I find myself just smiling bigtime right now. Thanks for sharing

2007-11-03
Aww... I'm ready to start crying now. Beautifully described of that trip to England. I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

2007-10-24
Sweet with a wonderful sense of humor in it. Very well done!

2007-10-23
Perfect re-entry! Welcome back

2007-10-20
What a sweet dedication in your congratulations. Best wishes from me too to the newly-weds and many happy years to come.

2007-10-20
Excellent writing here. I just love the flow in the rhyming. Very well done!

2007-10-18
Could almost smell the soft scent of roses when reading this. So filled with warmth and love through every word. Wonderful writing here, Mike. Thks for sharing

2007-10-17
Yes, that true love does make one see oneself from a totally different point of view, doesn't it?
Wonderful writing here,Kathy, and made me smile bigtime since I'm experiencing the same kind of feeling of life and love.
Love really is great when you meet the right one to share it with.
This will be bookmarked!

2007-10-16
I'm a walking disaster when it comes to keeping my papers organized so this was easy relating to and you sure put a smile on my face reading this one. Thanks for that, Kathy. :)

2007-10-11
Happy Birthday, Dan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

2007-10-08
Colorful writing indeed. Me ,who usually hates the fall, actually found this poem very enjoyable and maybe I will try to look around and see the beauty in the autumns breath....... Lovely writing here, Kathy.