| The quiet words
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2008-02-09
Lovely words - delightful piece. Happy trails.
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| I Remember.
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2008-02-08
Incarceration is never pleasant it dehumanizes the soul. Good write and well said. Happy trails.
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| I
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2008-02-08
Serious stuff this I am business. Good write I enjoyed it. Happy trails.
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| Animals in the Wild are Rarely Ever Mild.
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2008-02-07
Very nice write. The sad treatment of animals is a stain on civilized man how dare we think we're superior...the Eagle is more adept at survival, the Rabbit more prolific and the Fox more cunning. I enjoyed the sentiment. Happy trails.
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| if all poets were poets
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2008-02-07
Very clever write and a worthy title. I enjoyed that one. Happy trails neighbor.
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| Concerned message
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2008-02-05
Sounds like an exercise in futility, but nicely done. Happy trails.
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| Not the soundtrack of my life
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2008-02-04
Sounds like a sad lament about life. Why write such sad words on christmas eve its meant to be a time of celebration. Hope your better. Happy trails.
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| Furious
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2008-02-04
Very provocative write as well as a timely topic. With people becoming more self-centered rather than compassionate human relations, such as parent and child become more strained. It's a sad state of affairs. Sorry for the rant but your poem touched a sensitive spot. Happy trails.
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| My feeling
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2008-02-03
Be careful what you wish for it may come true. Love is the universal language of life, but often there's only silence. Nice write it stirs a memory or two. Happy trails.
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| geraniums
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2008-02-03
There's a gentle sadness in your write. Strokes are difficult for everyone, but sometimes the ones you love the most walk away.
Happy trails neighbor.
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| Sweet Memory
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2008-02-03
A very engaging write. The pleasure of our memories good or bad
is with us forever. I liked the sentiment. Happy trails.
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| Solitude....
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2008-02-03
A very melancholy write and reflects the pain one would feel under the circumstance. A friend of mine calls work like this "Angst Poetry." Happy trails.
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| Solitude....
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2008-02-03
A very melancholy write and reflects the pain one would feel under the circumstance. A friend of mine calls work like this "Angst Poetry." Happy trails.
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| Lost innocence - Hear me
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2008-02-03
A very introspective poem. You sound like a cheerleader for the cause "just say no." A clever ploy using the red to highlight action. Good write. Happy trails.
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| Harassed? princess Paris
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2008-02-03
The saga of Paris Hilton continues fed by the media frenzy and those who envy her position. It's a good write, still there's another kind of hell waiting for Ms. Hilton it's called old age. Happy trails.
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| My Hairdresser Is Only Five
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2008-02-03
Kids say the damndest things don't they. He's a handsome young man and you're a lucky gramma. It's a good write sweet, sensitive and heart warming. Happy trails.
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| Eclipse
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2008-02-02
Reasons to head south for the winter. Good write neighbor and well said. Happy trails.
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| Ambience
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2008-02-02
A great little poem and nicely done. I've had my share of third rate romances in bars from San Francisco to Memphis. Happy trails.
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| Stillness in Turbulence
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2008-02-02
Very well done and a smooth write - the song a free spirit sings.
Happy trails.
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| Flowering in morning light by M.A.Meddings
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2008-02-02
A lovely sentiment, a little flowery for my tastes, but a good write nonetheless. Happy trails neighbor.
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| The child
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2008-02-02
An interesting take on the child within. It's diapers at birth and again just before we die and so goes the circle of life. Good write.
Happy trails.
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| Night Soul Woman
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2008-02-02
Nicely done tribute to the shadowy world of darkness. Reminds me of a lonely stretch of desert highway, draped in fog, where not a drop of water flowed. Good write.
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| On the safe side of midnight
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2008-02-01
I enjoyed reading the piece. As a matter of fact I read it twice. It sounds like two lovers with their conflicts resolved. Let me know I'd be interested. Happy trails neighbor.
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| Lay Down Beside Me.
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2008-02-01
Sleep is the great healer of pain. Very thoughtful write. Happy trails.
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| The Art of Revision
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2008-02-01
Words painted on lifes canvas that would cause William Tell to salivate. Good job. Happy trails neighbor.
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| Continuing the Journey
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2008-02-01
Nice follow-up with an interesting message. Happy trails neighbor.
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| Journey
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2008-02-01
Very poignant words and well done. The Buddhist philosophy believes the essence within each man and woman (the soul if you will according to western beliefs) takes several journeys occupying many bodies over an endless span of time. Happy trails neighbor.
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| Shit & Poetry
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2008-02-01
True enough, however, one must consume food to shit and life to write poetry. Happy trails.
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| "Our Memories Are Convenient."
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2008-01-31
Ah yes the lamenting sounds of hopelessness for an unrequited love. It's an interesting read a little lengthy for a Haiku, but then who am I to judge. Happy trails.
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| Death at high noon
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2008-01-31
I'm not certain of your meaning, but the piece is interesting. The title suggests an end to something perhaps life or perhaps the day. I'd be interested in knowing. Thanks and happy trails.
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| Magnolia Springtime cowritten with Lastromantichero
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2008-01-31
I can almost hear the music. A lovely write soothing and melodic it's worth a ten on the richter scale. Happy trails neighbor.
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| If This Is My Last Day
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2008-01-31
Very poignant and a great expression of emotion. Good write neighbor and happy trails.
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| The Road Not Taken ~Aaron Style~
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2008-01-31
From the lips of physical therapists everywhere "no pain no gain brother." Nicely done though. Happy trails.
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| Strange....that's me
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2008-01-31
Why is that? Nice sentiment and very appropiate. Happy trails.
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| The naked fighter
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2008-01-31
Sounds like my ex wife. Good piece though. Happy trails
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| as we move
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2008-01-31
An interesting play on words and our cultural nuances. Good job - happy trails.
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| Blanket of Dust
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2008-01-30
Very provocative piece and a worthy sentiment. Even a non-christian like myself believes in the power of prayer if only for self-affirmation. Thanks for re-visiting my page and commenting on "Freedoms Land." I live 30 miles north of the Mexican border and see the consequences of clandestine immigration. Happy trails neighbor.
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| Prayer for all poets
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2008-01-29
Nicely done. One might add "when the work's all done we can sit and watch the sunset knowing who to thank." Good write neighbor. Happy trails.
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| Warning
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2008-01-29
This is a damn fine piece of work. It gave me a good chuckle. Happy trails neighbor.
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| Our reward
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2008-01-29
Very well said - when in love little else matters. Good write neighbor. Happy trails.
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| WORDS
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2008-01-29
Thoughtfully composed. Makes one wonder about our forebearers who lacked the ability to speak. A timely topic in these days of keyboards and cyber space. Happy trails neighbor.
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| you and me
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2008-01-29
A touch of the blues my dear and well said.v Happy trails.
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| Given The Choice, Would You?
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2008-01-29
Not a one. I enjoyed the query - it's well written and provocative in a way. Happy trails.
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| I pray
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2008-01-29
Very nicely done. My mind twisted and turned along with the text.
A clever play on words. Happy trails neighbor.
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from USA