| and the band plays on
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2019-06-28
This poem says so much in just a few lines. Very well done. This is an artistic piece.
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| THERE WILL ALWAYS BE WORDS
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2019-06-24
I love this! Truly, there will always be a word for every feeling or situation. Bookmarked :)
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| To the bullets
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2014-12-11
Powerful!
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| It's Like Sleeping In The Lost&Found Dept. Because
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2014-11-20
Seriously, this blew me away.
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| Tis Almost Winter Are We Discontened?
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2014-11-17
I love winter!
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| I am a Woman
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2014-10-14
Of course you can do anything; you're a woman :)
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| TC Purry
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2014-10-14
He's a cutie.
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| What The Gnat Who Took A Vow Of Silence Said.
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2014-09-13
Hahaha!!
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| Meet Tuxedo Cat
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2014-09-11
Awww so cute.
Is this poem based on true events? :P
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| Bacterium Arcana
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2014-09-10
Brilliant choice of words. You baffle me.
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| FEW ARE THE BEST TO HAVE
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2014-09-09
A friend is someone who never gets in your way unless it's the way down.
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| I HAVE THIS SHIP
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2014-09-09
I think you will love Sarah Kay's 'Ghost Ship'. This poem is written quite well, although a bit rough at the edges.
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| What A Leaf Does In The Fall.
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2014-09-07
Hahaha!! :D
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| SPINNING PLAITS
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2014-09-07
I like the metaphor! Awesome piece. Brilliant clarity.
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| Tall Beeches On Red Hill
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2014-09-05
Captured very well!
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| Why Did The Hydra Drink So Much H2o?
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2014-08-25
Haha awesome!
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| Why The Kangaroo Couple Adopted A Sexually Ambivalent Male Plains Buffalo
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2014-08-24
You just keep getting better and better at this!!!
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| Ballad Of A Thin Woman
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2014-08-21
Beautiful.
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| HE LOOKED AT IT
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2014-08-17
What?
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| Why The Marionette Who Could Not Fall In Love Fell
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2014-08-17
Awesome! You, sir are great! with puns.
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| Exmoor Pony
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2014-08-16
I love it! You really know how to play with words :))
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| Lowritta
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2014-08-16
Amazing use of words! But I didn't really get the pun...if there's any.
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| How A Pearl Keeps A Secret
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2014-08-15
This is so punny! I love it!
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| It's So
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2014-08-13
A very beautiful story, lovely writing. This poem reminds me of Edith Nesbit's work!
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| If You'd Like to Know Why...
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2014-08-13
You captured my feelings so well with this little piece! It's such a bad feeling, being near that person you really really like and fumbling and stuttering!
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| SHE SAID NO! HE SAID YES! (WITH THANKS TO NABEELA ALTAF)
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2014-08-12
This is a very important issue which people don't voice.
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| WORDS CAN COURSE INSTANT ANGER
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2014-08-12
Of course! Hazrat Ali has quoted once,"The tongue is like a lion. Let it lose and it causes instant damage."
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| She Likes Cats
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2014-08-12
Lol thank you :p
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| CastShadows~
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2014-08-11
Very different and sophisticated. Your poem gives the reader something to think about :))
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| DNA Love
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2014-08-11
Excellent! Brilliantly written.
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| Oh Mama
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2014-08-11
Brilliant! You have a gift at writing haiku's I must say.
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| My journey home
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2014-08-10
So sweet. Lovely use of words.
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| Words Without
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2014-08-09
Brilliant! I could almost feel the scene unfolding in front of me.
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| SITTING OUTSIDE THE CAFE
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2014-08-08
Every person is not an individual but has a world of his own. You listened and you became a part of that world. Listen away mate! It's better than talking :))
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| Don't close your mouth when you think*revised*
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2014-08-08
Very very nice. I especially like the stanza about the air in our lungs. Never really thought about it from that aspect but your poem has my grey matter fluttering!
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| Just In Rhyme
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2014-08-08
Awesome :))
You rock with rhymes!
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| Pandora
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2014-08-07
The title of this poem plays marvellous images in my mind. All there was left was hope.
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| Pandora
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2014-08-07
Forgiveness is divine. You are truly a brave person to forgive someone and I know it's really very hard to give mercy to someone you don't want to.
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| Oh! How I wish and how I know!
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2014-08-06
A bit sad but nevertheless a joy to read!
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| Magnetic Fields
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2014-08-06
Opposites do attract but it varies according to every person obviously. For instance, I would downright hate any man who dislikes cats :))
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| The Never Ending Journey
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2014-08-03
This is a marvellous piece of work! It is outstanding how you seem to make the simple designs on a tapestry come to life. Blown away. Good job!
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| Stars Watch
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2014-08-03
The last line is epic.
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| Wander River
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2014-08-02
Maybe Wanderer the River?
This little piece speaks a lot.
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| Resurrect
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2014-08-02
Indeed! A very deep and beautifully written poem. Your haiku's should have a collection!
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| The Caged Bird that Sang to Freedom
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2014-08-01
I have been reading a lot about Maya Angelou recently and I found your poem beautiful. A lovely, heart breaking piece about an extraordinary woman.
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| No Following
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2014-08-01
And a great woman she is! Very well executed.
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| DO NOT MORN
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2014-08-01
And now that you have written this down, you have nothing to fear :))
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| Random Excerpt #49
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2014-08-01
I have been tying to verse a poem on the very same topic but have failed so far. You have done a magnificent job. Halfway through this, I found myself nodding and saying; 'Why didn't I think of that?'
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| THE WOMAN IN BLACK WALKS
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2014-08-01
Have you written about someone in particular?
Any ways, this is a very different text. Beautifully imparted.
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| I n t o Y o u
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2014-07-31
I literally feel I'm falling
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