| Sometimes I try. . .
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2007-02-27
holy crapppp mannn
marysia you're uh...
super wickedly talented, madame
jeez
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| Somebody Call A Poet!
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2006-12-23
this is really cool!
my favorite line:
Embark on a mission, and damn the comission!
Discover as much to your heartbeat's permission!
very cool
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| lennon
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2006-12-08
thats suck a sweet poem
i miss john lennon
and i wasnt even born yet when he died
but he was one of the best,
and this poem shows that
*bookmark!*
--andrea
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| Sometimes
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2006-11-29
aww marysia thats sooo pretty!
i love this one specialy
*bookmark*!
lol
....is this about rodgers?
either way, its awsome!
<3
--andrea
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| Day Dream
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2006-11-29
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
marysia you're the best, i love your poems
beautiful, well written, altogether amazing!!
goodjob =)
--andrea
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| Something that I never did
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2006-11-29
awww masha thats emo!
but its good.
it creates an image
lol
an odd image. oh well!
great peice
welcome to the bay!
--andrea
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| Children of a Lesser God- Bonded Labourers
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2006-11-27
oh my.
im about to cry,
thats terrible
how thats a part of life
how children can be treated like that
just so others can be rich
its a beautiful and meaningful work
goodjob
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| Death of a spy
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2006-11-26
wow....
i didnt really understand most of that
but im sure other people did
but i still love it!
its well written,
goodjob!
=D
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| In Your Eyes
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2006-11-24
aww thats such a sweet poem!
good rythm and descriptions
goodjob!
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| Come Together
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2006-11-13
this is super cool!!!
i like it
(just wondering, is this a contribution to my challenge? prolly not, but i feel i should ask none the less, cuz im putting together all the contributions, and would hate to miss one)
but good read none the less
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| for Andrea's Beatle challenge
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2006-10-12
aww i really like that
thanks for doing my challenge
*goodjob*
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| Eulogy on Tuesday mourning
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2006-10-10
amazing write!
welcome to the bay!
*thumbsup*
--andrea
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| Let the Music Play (song lyrics)
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2006-09-29
wow........thats amazing
the hole part about the beatles was amazing =)
p.s. its spelt beatles with an 'A' not beetle the bug lol
other then that...its very touching, i LOVE music =)
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| Catharsis
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2006-09-29
wow...
thats pretty deep.
it reminds me of tom petty's new cd highway companion...
but that was...amazing, im at a loss for words..i never was good at commenting written works lol
so....super!! goodjob
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| PEACE.
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2006-09-04
wow. thats like...one of the truesr poems ever, im an anti war activist in my own mind, and i do believe you pretty much summed up how i feel about war in that poem! good flow and rhyme, goodjob!
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| The Junkie - I Used To
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2006-08-10
wow.
thats a pretty good write there
i like it, i do believe its worthy of song
its meaningful; being a junkie is bad
although you never think it could happen to you, but it does anyway
goodjob
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| Back Then....
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2006-08-02
aww what a great poem
about the down side of love
sometimes you're not the only one
and it kills to know the person you love
doesnt love you anymore..
a beautiful heart felt poem
goodjob
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| A lone man walks in the rain
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2006-07-14
aw thats a sweet poem
the imagery is exquisite
goodjob!
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| Goddess
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2006-06-28
yes, i know what its like to live in fantasy
seeing things you cannot see in real life
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| winterflower
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2006-06-28
wow....thats kind of scary
but its a really good write
i like!
*thumbs up*
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| peace of mind
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2006-06-28
that is suck a good poem
i could feel the spray of the ocean rain
i could feel your pain
a beautiful poem about love gone wrong
goodjob
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| the sweetest thing
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2006-06-26
well...thats an interesting debut poem
oh well...welcome to the bay
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| I MAKE YOU HAPPY
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2006-06-26
aww what a sweet poem!
i like
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| Run
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2006-06-26
thats a very emotional poem
i really like it
goodjob
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| In a nightgown
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2006-06-26
oh wow.
now that sounds more like youuu
haha love it
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| Soulful
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2006-06-26
lovely musical haikuuu
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| Glow on the bay
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2006-06-26
yayyyyy for muzikk
i <3 ur poetry, you are jsut so good!
love the imagery
p.s. im adding you as a writing friend
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| The ball, My hand
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2006-06-26
miss musikk i do belive ive underestimated you. i love ur poetry, keep on keeping on!
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| Easy come, Easy Go
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2006-06-26
YOU ARE AMAZING!
i didnt know you could write so well!
goodjob
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| Dreams Are Desires~Waiting
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2006-06-25
haha oops! double post. srry!
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| Dreams Are Desires~Waiting
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2006-06-25
aww that is such a sweet poem
filled with the hopes of love
and yet heavy indecision
i think it shows love for what it is
theres many sides of love
and you almost covered them all
goodjob!
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| Dreams Are Desires~Waiting
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2006-06-25
aww that is such a sweet poem
filled with the hopes of love
and yet heavy indecision
i think it shows love for what it is
theres many sides of love
and you almost covered them all
goodjob!
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| Angel of Music
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2006-06-25
this is a very good poem
full of emotion
great wording
i love it!
good job!
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| Tender Mercies
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2006-06-25
wow...
as ive said before
ur amazing!
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| Resurrection From Muddy Waters
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2006-06-24
its amazing.
YOU'RE amazing!
you have a gift
you can speak in metaphores
realising the similarity between to different things.
this spoke to me.
yay! your poetry makes me happy
=)
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| Autumn Leaves
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2006-06-21
wow.
i wish i could write poetry like you!
that was amazing!
loved it so very much, you have talent, girl!
such amazing imagery
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| Letters In The Attic
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2006-06-20
oh my. you are very taleneted
i read that and was transported right into the poetry. a hauntingly beautiful poem
good job!
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