| The Journey
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2010-01-28
reminds me so much of my childhood, this took me back 25 years or more, those rickety bikes teh noises we made...... great!
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| Friends or more...
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2006-11-19
Nine Months????? What you been upto child.
A wonderful and amazing write
Love
Audrey
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| Friends Who Have Yet To Meet
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2006-11-19
What a thoughtful but more meaningful piece my girl. You do have it in you just do not let that pen off your hand sweetheart.
I am so happy to know you my dear
Love
Audrey
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| If Tomorrow Never Comes
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2006-11-19
Hello Priscilla dear
This is wonderful, You do have some talent girl. I am amazed. Keep it up and do not ever let it go.
Take care
Audrey
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| The wait..
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2006-11-06
SO happy at last to have found that face.
Beautiful and lovely
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| I Saw You Outside My Window Last Night
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2006-11-06
I know what you mean, it has never felt me. Oh sorrow why do you haunt me so
Very well chosen words
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| For us to find (my contribution to Zoya/Aliena elements challenge)
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2006-11-05
Yes I found the meaning of love
But too soon it was snatched away from me
Whom shall I now blame for that
Wonderful work girl, how you been keeping
Love
Audrey
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| *~*ALL OF YOU*~*
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2006-10-30
Thank you, what a wonderful heart you have as well I know that don't I
Love you too
Audrey
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| THE BEAUTY OF NATURE'S DAUGHTER
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2006-10-29
WOW. These are words of love.
A very very excellent write
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| Israeli National Anthem (Censored Version by Edna)
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2006-10-27
Edna dear you do irritate a lot of people. Now you got Ananim on your tail
Well all in all this is a write with a meaning in it. I see no stupidity at all, On the contrary you are sending a message out people must read more carefully.
Take care now.
Audrey
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| story of a drunkard
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2006-10-27
Very well done, funny too but I liked
Regards
Audrey
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| A lost friend
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2006-10-27
Friends how we miss them at times.
What a lovely poem Had a lovely rhyme to it as well
Thank you for sharing this
Regards
Audrey
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| Heaven's door
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2006-10-27
I wish I had the key my dear, I am trying as well. That is one door we will never be able to open as and when we want. Try Knocking first after a while it will open up just do not give up.
Well fine words and good write
Regards
Audrey
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| The Night Herding Song
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2006-10-27
Now that's all cowboy. My idols Gregory Peck and Clint East Wood
Well this is indeed a well done piece
Loved it
Audrey
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| Now go on
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2006-10-26
I know the feeling.
Well done good Ryhmes too
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| Baby you are very special
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2006-10-26
Hello,
What beautiful words you write. If that is your picture then you have wonderful exotic features have anyone told you.
Keep your work up
Take care
Audrey
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| Memories of the Sixties
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2006-10-26
You are vulgar which part of the globe are you. Can I too meet you at the porn section coffee shop
Good one
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| The Midget Angel On The Battlefield of Doom
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2006-10-26
Hey Edna
This is cool, can you send that angel my way too
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| The Midget Angel On The Battlefield of Doom
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2006-10-26
Hey Edna
This is cool, can you send that angel my way too
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| Edna's Video Library (ADULTS ONLY)
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2006-10-26
Hey this is good keep it coming more often, how come the English war veteran is not making his ocmments on you lately
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| LOVE
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2006-10-25
Cindy - What a wonderful way Yes the ultimate thing that can save us all is LOVE with love all things are possible.
Lovely and beautifully written
Love
Audrey
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| Almost night by M.A.Meddings
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2006-10-24
No not yet, Heartaches go on even in the night
Again takes only you to do this
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| So Slowly by M.A.Meddings
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2006-10-24
WOW so sensual
Very Very touching
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| A letter from a friend
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2006-10-24
True freinds will stay for ever no matter what happens, please believe me, there is always a brigther tomorrow look beyond your miseries you will find happiness
A very emotional and beautifully written words
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| My friends at Poetbay
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2006-10-24
Hows the break going tamar. Missing you. Whats up. keep in touch when you have the time. Good luck with all those projects you are on to.
Love
Audrey
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| The Perfect Poem
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2006-10-24
Happy Happy Bah Bah Dee Dee Bahhhhhh Dee.
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| IF LIFE WAS TAKEN SUDDENLY
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2006-10-23
Life is too short, and most times suddenly we go. Yes we must all make it better for others do some good be grateful and help everyone along the way
Lovely thoughts put them all into actions
Love
Audrey
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| Road Of Many Travels
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2006-10-23
Your raod of many travel, have certainly brought you to me my friend. I would love to travel that raod of many travels.
Love you
Audrey
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| *Her Face She Calls Her Own*
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2006-10-23
Well what I can Say, What do I say Cindy Girl. We all do are at times forced to portray a different personality most times, not that we want to.
This is very wonderful write and those that read it those that are forced behind masks must take this advise
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| WHY OH WHY is the grass greener on the other side of the fence?
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2006-10-23
Oh very true, The grass is always greener on the other side until you reach it to find out that it was all brown and dying.
I liked this such advice.
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| Limp cocky
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2006-10-07
Oh shit how sad what a waste anyway
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| To Break Free
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2006-10-04
No no No walking away for you Cindy Girl. You must stay and fight the battle. No matter how much love you give and no matter how many times it gets rejected.Keep Giving that the beauty of love. The wonder of love is to just keep giving, one day those that shunned it will crave for it. Remember So tell me whom have you walked away from.
Good words Cindy
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| judgement day
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2006-10-04
Yeah just tell them all to fuck off
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| THE GREAT PUMPKIN
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2006-10-03
Hey cindy this is hillarious, So the picture the the Man Ass is that the oumpkin Ass well if so Cindy I sure think I am missing something can you send the Roger over to me
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| Handing Her The Rose
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2006-10-01
With a rose in his hand
a beautiful smile on his face
Yes he met her at the pearly gates of heaven
now hand in hand they float,
in heavenly bliss they now dwell
so just smile and be happy for them
This is so emotional cindy, hang in there girl. My prayers with you
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| SILLINESS, BOGGLED WAY TO BE:)
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2006-10-01
Where do you think you are going? I need to know as i will follow you too.
Lovely flow of words cindy
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| I WILL
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2006-10-01
Oh cindy what can i say. This is too much for one to bear, but then you have borne it well. and letting it out is the best way to deal with it. I know and do understand your words I do.
Just keep that head over your shoulders, stand firm and stand strong.
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| The Sounds In My Head...
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2006-10-01
So now you have some sounds up there. Well swat the bloody things go on do it.
Hey lovely write cindy good one here girl very good
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| John's got Two Jags, Four Homes & twice as many Mistresses and even more points on his Licence!
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2006-09-30
What a pair you and Edna are. There is so much love between the two of you.
Anyway Good write
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| When Daddy had an affair.
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2006-09-27
Dear Zainab
If this really happened to you I am so sorry. I was one who suffered cheating lying bullshit ways of a man. But I have long learnt not to dwell in that pain. Life is too precious to waste of such men, if he could do it to one woman doing to the next will not be a problem.
The world does not revolve around such people leave them alone to their own fate. You must learn from thier mistakes and grow up to be the better person.
Love
Audrey
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| The Bullet
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2006-09-21
Sir, I have read your works some of them hold great meaning. I do respect you for what you have been through. It cannot have been easy. My father too was a Veteran who fought the "World war two".
You should be honoured by England for your contributions in the War.
May God be with you
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| My Trumpet Voluntary
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2006-09-21
Edna, You are fantastic I have read all your work. I am just jerking myself off laughing. But you must agree you have really upset the "English War Veteran" He somehow does not seem to find your writing Great.
But then who cares what others think, I like your open frankness. So what happened to the trumpet???
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| Ode To My Dear Dead Husband Bert The Pervert
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2006-09-21
Richly funny was he that, at least he did something for you. Most men just give up on their wifes after several years of marriage and fuck the dog instead.
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| Farting In A Cathedral
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2006-09-21
Ha Ha Ha, This is so funny well be honest tell did you actually let it go..
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| Boy Hits Girl
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2006-09-20
Only a coward beats a woman. A man must first learn to appreciate his own mother before be takes a wife/partner.
How could anyone just ignore such a situation not me never me. I beat the hell out of him first before a raises his hands again.
Lovely work Keith wonderful
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| To Be Proud...I Am
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2006-09-20
Proud you must sure be
We are proud of you too Cindy
Lovely words
Audrey
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| My heart belongs to you
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2006-09-20
Oh now i am worried where is my heart and where the heck is my brain. Why wait. There are other fish in the sea. Time to take the next course of action. Those that are not strong in mind will never be strong in heart.
Lovely Poem though
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| Not you again
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2006-09-20
Oh dear, why not give another chance to see how it goes. This is very meaningful and so directly sends the message home. Good Words!
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| Mahai Ramazan
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2006-09-19
Could you translate your peom in English they do sound very interesting, but I am sure we all would love to read what you share with us.
I am sure you must be talented Poet.
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| REMINDED OF YEARS PAST
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2006-09-19
Did you write this for me Cindy. How did you know? Though I am finally free the trauma still lingers
Great words
Love - Audrey
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