| Emporium
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2007-09-30
I like this. It's playful and clever. I like the line about "toothpaste smiles"
^_^
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| The angry brain
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2007-09-28
I really like the title and the concept of this poem.
Keep up the good work.
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| Hope...
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2007-09-28
Very well written. I like this a lot!
"Hope is a needle from the past
to pierce the eye of the future" That's brilliant, can I quote that sometime? =) That part reminds me of Dahli and Buñuels film "An Andalusian Dog"
Very effective way of describing. It's pure wisedom.
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| The worst is still to come
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2007-09-24
You might say depressing, but true.
That's life. Great little poem. =)
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| Red Nose Day '09
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2007-09-03
Sublime and cool piece of poetry. Like it .
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| TRAVELLING ON WITH A BEAUTIFUL MOON
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2007-09-03
Good as always. I like this style of poems. Really nice rhymes from you.
Rubriken gillar jag mycket. :D
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| Leopard Changes its Spots
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2007-06-22
I love this 'Survival of the fittest" poem. How evolutionary. You really catched it all in there. Makes me wonder; What are we doing to the world? Great one!
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| Keep Our Love Alive
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2007-06-22
Way, Stevie Wonder FTW!
I really like the opening, that's really affective.
It is really woth keeping our love alive, perhaps just as important as keeping ourselfs alive.
Great one.
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| The unavoidable end
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2007-05-17
I love this "it's all coming to an end" poems. I like the way you choose your words.
I like the first line the best. I think it has got a pretty uniqe feel to it.
Keep it up. :D
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| Stop!
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2007-05-17
Yeah, it actually makes more sense to read this slowly.
I like this little poem, it has got a very sincere feel to it.
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| Shortly
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2007-04-20
Yeah, shortly and beautifully. Nice one. :D
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| ...Darkness vs. Light Challenge...
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2007-04-20
I love dark/light poems. Day/night, black/white. This is really great.
Pull down the curtains, that works really well in this content.
If I knew about this challenge I could have made one of my own.
Interesting stuff guys.
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| Raw Woman You by M.A.Meddings
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2007-04-20
That's life as it should be.
That is truly the source of love, or at least a way to describe the adoration of the female sex. (If you excuse me for being so Freudian" :P
Great written!
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| Heat
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2007-04-20
Yeah i can feel the heat in this one. The mid-section is the best.
You write great.
Poet is thy name. :D
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| Space
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2007-04-20
This is interesting. This poem actually says a lot and with very vief words. (Or the same words over and over again) :D
Nice one.
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| Eternally
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2007-04-20
There sure is strength deep within this poem.
I like it a lot. Really good written. Bravo.
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| Blind, Deaf and Dumb...
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2007-04-18
Very nice poem. I like it a lot. It has got a great message to it.
Everything ends up just fine in the end. Thnx.
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| Anticipation of Autumn
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2007-04-09
I can feel the autumn in this poem.
It got a really nice and effective form.
Incredible well written.
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| LOVE'S LULLABY
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2007-04-09
This have a very good tone to it. Especially the title.
Daybreaker you rhymemaster. ;)
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| The Strength Within
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2007-04-09
Exactly my opinion.
Thanks for a very good poem Zoya. :)
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| Between the Breaths
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2007-04-09
Good one. Fine rhymes.
"Within the halls
of silent walls"
Applaud for you. :D
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| Sometimes it . . .
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2007-02-05
True. It happened yesterday actually.
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| People like flowers
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2007-02-03
Makes perfectly sense to me. Good point and well written.
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| The Greatest Contradiction Of Them All
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2007-01-15
I kinda understand what you mean.
I am so afraid of my life
that I cannot enjoy my death!
Ångest är min arvedel.
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| Daybreaker
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2007-01-04
Off to a good start of the new year i think. This poem came to life when I was writing lyrics to a new song and when I was thinking about the future and my life.
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| Christmas Adam
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2007-01-03
I'm just tellin'
This has nothing to do with different sexualities as the previous post suggest.
It's just a play on words that doesn't have to mean anything. It's up to you what it's about. Off course I have an intention, but why should my opinion of the poem be more important? Read along. Thnx
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| Your the only one
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2007-01-03
Run, Stop, Fight. Sounds like a good advice to me. ^^
Sounds like a good piece of poetry to. Some ppl run, some fight.
I like this.
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| Then
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2006-12-10
This is brilliant. The the message and the structure is really great. It really feels like this poem has something to say. My poem "Jar o' Flies" is about just the same thing, same message, or least I guess.
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| TAINTED TOWN
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2006-12-06
The rhythm and the rhymes are flawless. Great poem. It really captures some dark moods of the human psyche.
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| George
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2006-11-16
Haha. At first I didn't get it. But you wrote great new lyrics to this great song. Really inspiring.
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