UnforgivenAngel

2007-01-19
zoya, this is amazing, thankyou!

2006-09-21
now that is so sweet, i love it.

2006-08-06
wow, i shed a tear, this is so close to me, i completely understand it,yet another great write.

2006-08-06
im glad you can be strong, im proud of you, i hope you are proud of yourself. good write

2006-08-05
zoya, i've had an argument today with a friend about the meaning of life, my argument was that there wasnt a point, yet now i see i was wrong, thankyou zoya, great poem.

2006-08-05
thats beautiful, truly beautiful, thankyou!

2006-07-05
wow zoya,i know you wanted my opinion but i really am speachless! (((hugs))) luv angel, xxx

2006-06-30
very good. :)

2006-06-29
wow,thats really good,i love it. :)

2006-06-28
wow,i love it.

2006-06-28
this is really good,thankyou.

2006-06-03
dont worry,drinking is fine and its normal to fight with your mum,you cant keep cutting yourself tough. wearing black isnt all that bad,i only ever used to wear black, i was a so called 'goth' or 'emo' its okay,i promise,i know what its like to hate yourself,to cut yourself,hiding those scars are difficult but i suggest you put foundation on them,it hides them really well. but i really hope you find what you want to be.

great write,i understand.

2006-06-03
this is good,a shame about the spelling mistakes,but still very good.

2006-06-03
wow,i love this,i understand,i feel the hurt. its a lovly write,thanks.

2006-06-03
thats so sad,its very honest,thats whats so good about it,it makes me feel something,im not sure what but i feel it. great write,thanks.

2006-06-03
you dont argue anymore,thats a good sign, i understand it is truly hard to forgive someone for something they've done to hurt you when there suppose to care about you snd love you. but i do say that your mum does love you,and whatever she's done,may have been because she loves you but im not sure about what happend so i wouldnt know but yes,a great poem.well written,well done.

2006-05-25
its good,shame about the spelling mistakes but its good. i feel a hint of jelousy with this. i know how you feel,i have a few friends like this but you just have to let them get on with it,dont take notice,just be you,if your not as good as them,it deosnt matter,you did your best,thats what counts,dont let it get you down. as i said before,this is great.

2006-05-25
its good,shame about the spelling mistakes but its good. i feel a hint of jelousy with this. i know how you feel,i have a few friends like this but you just have to let them get on with it,dont take notice,just be you,if your not as good as them,it deosnt matter,you did your best,thats what counts,dont let it get you down. as i said before,this is great.

2006-05-25
its good,shame about the spelling mistakes but its good. i feel a hint of jelousy with this. i know how you feel,i have a few friends like this but you just have to let them get on with it,dont take notice,just be you,if your not as good as them,it deosnt matter,you did your best,thats what counts,dont let it get you down. as i said before,this is great.

2006-05-25
its good,shame about the spelling mistakes but its good. i feel a hint of jelousy with this. i know how you feel,i have a few friends like this but you just have to let them get on with it,dont take notice,just be you,if your not as good as them,it deosnt matter,you did your best,thats what counts,dont let it get you down. as i said before,this is great.

2006-05-25
its good,shame about the spelling mistakes but its good. i feel a hint of jelousy with this. i know how you feel,i have a few friends like this but you just have to let them get on with it,dont take notice,just be you,if your not as good as them,it deosnt matter,you did your best,thats what counts,dont let it get you down. as i said before,this is great.

2006-03-31
wow,i like this.
(((hugs)))
love angel. xxx

2006-03-26
zoya,how cauld i not forgive you? it was just a mistake,im sure everyone would be happy to resend there messages.

(((hugs for a clumsy zoya)))
lots of love,xxx,caz.

2006-03-26
haha,great,im scared of santa now,joking,great poem.

2006-03-26
haha.lol.funny.

2006-03-26
oh,love it,so true.

2006-03-26
i wasnt expecting that when i clicked on the name...so much anger,in such little words.

2006-03-26
i hope things get better,yet another great poem.
(((hugs to make you feel better again)))

2006-03-26
wow,you put alot of emotion in this.
(((hugs to make you feel better)))

2006-03-21
...no not your end, just what you believe it to be,its not the end,just find something that makes you happy and focus on that, great poem,there's alot of emotion in it,great.

2006-03-21
wow.noodles,really were found? wow,amazing.

2006-03-15
wow zoya,its powerful,im always stuck with stupid dilema's,what to follow? i love this... *bookmarked*

2006-03-08
im glad you showedme this or i would never have noticed it,thankyou.its very tue,thanks again.

2006-03-08
wow.you suprise me more and more with your poetry,this is such a tragic story,you tell it well.
(((hugs)))
love caz.

2006-03-07
there's just something about this,im not sure but it makes me think of something,altough im unsure what it is.i like it.

2006-03-04
this means an awfull lot to me,its the worst feeling to be parted from a love one.i just may have to bookmark this one too.

2006-03-04
'Whenever the wind blows
I still feel the pain'

thats unusual,its good.it kind of suggests tough that the pains not constant,that the pain comes and goes,very well thought about.this is definately bookmarked.

2006-03-04
you say what you mean,i like that.

2006-03-04
i've got tears in my eyes,this girl was so brave.wow.

2006-03-03
wow,i never realised things were really like that.i always thought the truth was so much better,harder to tell but better in the long run.but oviously not.i like this poem,im going to have to bookmark it to remind me about people in kenya.thankyou.

2006-03-03
sorry,i forgot to rate. oh and i forgot to say.its important not to give up half way through,when things start looking up,dont give up.

2006-03-03
wow,things have to get worse to get better and it seems things are getting better for alex and i hope they do,i hope alex things do get better but once again zoya,great poetry.

2006-03-03
you are amazing with imagery you really are.
from angel.

2006-03-03
yet more great imagery.i love it.
(((hugs)))
love angel.

2006-03-03
i struggle to really read poems,i mean i do read them but i sometimes struggle to really understand and i truly understand this one,i mean i can nearly feel the fog and hear the silence,its just like 'wow'.

(((hugs)))
love angel.

2006-03-03
everything you write is so brilliant,its amazing,i feel that this means so much.thankyou for recomending it to me.

2006-03-01
great *bookmarked*

2006-02-20
beautiful.

2006-02-20
as i started reading this i felt a sense of freedom.

its puts amazing images in my mind.

thanks,angel.

2006-02-20
great imagery,loved it.

from angel.