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Wild Horses

2022-06-20
So lovely, thank you for sharing.


Summer

2022-06-07
I so love it when you do one of these. Thanks for the smile and the wonderful poem!


DARLING

2022-03-29
Very beautiful. I flowed through the thoughts quite easily.


SPIRALLING

2022-03-28
Hi Alan, I really love this one. 'When I travel, within myself' - my favorite line.


THE POET SAID - THE POET WERE TOLD

2022-03-27
I love this one Ken.


When Will We See Spring Again?

2022-03-26
One that I think everyone can relate to! I wonder if you play an instrument and sing these songs in your parlor. Great job!


Franciscan Brown

2022-03-25
ok, now you've gone and done it, Jim Croce is one of my favorites! Great job!


Paradise Lost, Condensed

2022-03-24
Fabulous once again!


FOOD FOR THOUGHT

2022-03-14
Hi Alan, did you know there was a restaurant in Washington DC that is called Food For Thought? Thanks for another chuckle!


Visions and Revisions

2022-03-13
This one is very familiar, so much so that it actually did make me laugh out loud. Love it!


REOCCURRING DREAM

2022-03-12
I agree, your work is always wonderful! I have many reoccurring dreams, so this is close to home for me.


After a Long While

2022-03-12
They often tell us to journal for our 'sanity', but I have to agree, there's nothing like knowing that others are listening.


From 2020: Social Distance

2022-03-12
You really are talented at this. This one is, again, amazingly well done. Weird Al has nothing on you!


GODS WIFE ASHERAH - DIVORCE

2022-03-10
Hi Ken, isn't it amazing how all of our 'Gods' stories seem to be more in line with human behavior? Loved this.


Sad balance

2022-03-10
Beautifully done my friend.


DIZZY

2022-03-10
Very intense and it tells a whole lot without actually saying everything. Nicely done, Alan.


For Cryin' Out Loud!

2022-03-08
Another great job! Works perfectly and is full of fun! You should be one of those "jingle" writers! or another Weird Al Yankovic!


the war of a step forward

2022-03-03
This is so very powerful for me. Almost as if you had a seat inside my head at some point. Wonderful work.


A RUSSIAN CAPTIVE PHONS HIS MUM (Enspied By A News Story)

2022-03-03
It's good to see that there is still compassion and love even in the depths of War. Thank you for sharing this Ken.


Peany Buddy On

2022-03-02
Awesomely done!! I didn't realize, at first, that it was part of my Theme! Great job, it sang so well!


Sinners 1

2022-03-01
Alan, what a fantastic stanza you wrote!


First day of March 2022 by Ann Wood

2022-03-01
Lovely, my friend. Happy Spring to you!


Men of Power

2022-02-26
This made complete sense to me. It doesn't sound like you're saying ALL but just some. Excellent words to make people think...or that's what it does for me. Thanks for sharing.


AMALGAMATION

2022-02-26
Again, such a powerful writing, I am always so touched/struck(?) when I read them.


Winter

2022-02-25
When I lived in Virginia we had to shovel the snow out of the window wells! That's one thing I don't miss anymore, all that beautiful snow!


The Greatest Sin

2022-02-24
I'm laughing so hard at that Alan! And yes, Moods, when a University Professor said this at some conference thing, the outcry was huge. It stunned me too when I first saw it, I wasn't aware of them either. Although, from what I've learned since I first saw this, therapists of pedophilia have been using this same rhetoric for a few years now. I guess it may have been on the 'DL' because it wasn't very well known until recently when it went viral.


ANOTHER RADIO

2022-02-24
A beautiful love poem, I love the way the last line of each stanza tells the story of 'love'. Could be for the love of a child or a parent or even a lover. Thank you for sharing.


MR PERRY WINKLE PART 2

2022-02-23
I need to get me a Mr. Perry Winkle! (I'm guessing he's the imaginary rabbit type?) I like how you first had him save you, then goes away to dance with a girl, loved that visual.


The storm Eunice by Ann Wood

2022-02-23
We had that happen here last year, it can be a scary thing!


MISTLETOE MILLIE CAN PART TWO

2022-02-23
I love this one Alan! Such a wonderful story it clearly tells.


Are They Joking!

2022-02-20
So true! and so joyfully expressed, thanks for the laugh!


POX ON THEM ALL

2022-02-20
The Dyslexict Wordsmith Ov Thanet
Took me a while to come to his planet
But now it's SO clear, his vernacular!
It borders on spectacular!

Thanks for making me think outside of my box Ken!


WHEN A WORK OF WORDS ARE READ

2022-02-19
Very nice, Ken. So true and wonderfully done.


ODD THOUGHTS

2022-02-19
This is how my mind works at night when I'm trying to go to sleep! I wonder about the silliest of things.


INVERTED THOUGHTS

2022-02-19
I can so relate to this! Good job Alan


UNWORTHY

2022-02-19
Wow, I found this so powerful. The way you spaced things out brought a whole new visual(?)/emotion(?) I really loved it.


centering

2022-02-12
So nice...really lovely. What a better world we would have if more people felt this way!


tangible

2022-02-12
I love words that make me think. This is so nice, and written so well.


Arti

2022-02-12
I love the way you make your words bring a smile and even an out loud laugh! And the rhyming is spot on! (at least in my mind as I read it, it is joyous and fun and flows from one verse to the next)


A Good Cry

2022-02-12
I completely related with this poem, great job


The fascination of evil

2022-02-12
You've hit the nail on the head. This reality is just growing and getting worse I'm afraid. Really loved this.


SKIN

2022-02-11
LOL...I love this so short and yet so descriptive


POTENTIAL UNKNOWN

2022-02-07
Excellent poem! That last line was a fabulous punch. I really loved this one!


Happy 72nd heavenly birthday to my dad Ilia by Ann Wood

2022-02-04
Gives you a big tight hug.


An Ocean Drenched in Winter

2022-02-03
I felt not only the bitter cold but also the emotional contemplative space. Very nice.


8 + 1 challenge

2022-02-03
I love reading this poem, yes plural because I had to read it a few times so that I can, hopefully, learn a new way for me to experiment with my own rhymes.


Faceless

2022-02-03
Very powerful, gave me goose bumps


What games do children play!

2022-02-03
This is so captivating, gripping the readers attention throughout the entire thing. Evoking emotions with each read. I love this.


In Stolen Worlds

2022-02-01
I really liked this. It feels akin to my soul, as if I've been there. Very nice.


And Then

2022-02-01
This sounds a whole lot better rolling off of your tongue if it's Sung.