cory Crook

2010-01-11
I love this peom its awsome I feel u get out the way or give someone the time of day hey hey hey I like this poem I will read more later nice job

2010-01-11
Nice poem its true u are amazingly beautiful . were are u from. I will read more by u. U intrigue me I'm curious

2010-01-11
I love the image I can see into this one good job keep it up

2010-01-07
Spring is the new beginning of many many things its the greatest gift

2010-01-07
Bro I'm so glad u can write like this keep it man u are already almost better than me I like ur style 2 good job I'm proud of ya

2009-10-08
Conspire the dam machine its raging agianst us the plot of the eletric design

2009-10-08
Unspoken words make brain wves stop add me as a friend what do u say

2009-10-06
Grasp ahold and only get let down on the trueness of what is real ponder

2009-10-06
This is a good poem of autumn reminds me of the good times and I need to think about buying a pumpkin

2009-10-06
I really like this poem it surfaces the good and bad of faith and will for any one has the capibility to rise agianst

2009-10-06
This peom has good context. I can see the rainbows clear u should add me as a friend hear

2009-09-30
Makes me think of the costruction of our own lives and the end makes me feel winter more power to the core

2009-09-24
I dig so much of a portrait in such short but long poetry mind may wonder in the dark thinkin of what it would be like to live in black. i like this peom be my friend comment back

2009-09-24
I enjoy coming back to this site after years of being away and my writes are still here, the site is only getting better go poetbay.com thank u

2009-09-24
I have read this new information and except and like what i read. its been awhile since being on here and publishing and its nice to come back after years and know the website has only gotten better. thank u

2008-04-13
writers block brings you down
maybe it is the poeple and things that go round
turn ya mind inside out
trying to fidgure it out why u cant think
try going on a walk in nature and read into life from a ver buetifal place

2008-04-11
zoya i have come back to poetbay and in trying to take in what i once was in my psyche. I have recently moved to another place and wonder what i left behind and what im taking in and if its for the better. thank you zoya for the comments in the past and look forward to your poems and writes in the future. cory c

2008-04-08
its been awhile agian since i wrote and read but look forward to your thoughtfull and incitefull poetry. good to see u are still writin. i like this one its the best i have heard and read in awhile. keep it up

2006-01-20
what it is to be in a state of mind which u have described and u are so right my friend when u project your thoughts into works of art on paper or on here in writing it gives u so much more to see when u write dreadfully and people feel ur pain and hardship, im hoping that u can find a way to become happier and look forward to the day, im in the same struggle, hard hard times life has to hold in your future and what is it to fret this, a lost life i dont know its something im having a hard time figuring out. right on write.

2005-12-22
This poem sparked a very good interist by the name, i sit down and read it and fall into it. the whole idea of hate on earth and the lack of care grabs me and then at the end the price for peace that u must pay to make a diff. that may have great conciquence. in an instance mohamed ghandi fasting for the poeple and 2 stop the war. The power in peace takes hate and love, it makes hate counter react in love and may not always have that outcome. the iternal fight of hate and love goes on. very good right very very good

2005-12-18
i like this shows an awaited encounter that your watching and then watching it go away shows u kinda suspended in time in the beg. and the end lines
wonderfull

2005-12-18
if it wasnt for the teachers and education than it would be trail and error. key word error. U are so right the foundation of our lives is to learn and understand so we can expand.

2005-11-23
nice

2005-11-23
i like this little flowing ryhme about being the best of the best, the man thats better than the best, believe. nice very very nice.

2005-11-23
i like this poem it rhymes well and flows like no other, i like your poetry. very nice very very nice.

2005-11-19
you are a good poet. i love your writing, ur my new friend, aight. the thing i like about this poem is the descusion and then the mind to say to god that u well sin becuase you fell that its the only way of satisfaction for love itself.

2005-11-19
this is a great peom i love it. i can understand the tear form a clown. this poem gave me a shock through my body when i read it. sarrow in the passion and love from a cowboy and his sport or his bull. A game of truimph bewteen man and animal can be sad. the happy clown that watch's is reversed in emotion becuase the animal truimphed. Bull riding a spectacular sport of a kind.

2005-11-19
your poetry is very imaginitive u give me a motivation. U can see and visualize this in a way whichever u percieve. Also i have to say that ur poetry has felling that shares. wonderfuly done.

2005-11-19
sounds like you reminece and then go on to say that the person u are thinkin about is wonderful and u will remember them as a fragile memory.

2005-11-19
poem that says so much, u are pretty bright. shine on my friend.

2005-11-19
nice i can imagine this this is a good short poem or whatever the bleep ya callsit

2005-11-17
oh ya great poem.

2005-11-17
i from this poem found another way to think when writing more inflated and imaginitive.

2005-11-14
yes, i love this peom. peace in the middle east every body come together hold hands and unite. so that everyone can get a good nights sleep tonight.

2005-11-14
This poem makes me see into what i relationships i may have and how important/disimportant they are. I love the part were you say
An empty shell without remorse
Emotions dead all drained and coarse

this emitionless source must have been in the time of a divorce.

2005-11-11
sounds like u got to drunk and took them off or mabye u got given some ruffies. I think this poem makes u think? i dig it

2005-11-08
i love this poem. I see into it as felling as if that nothing or anything matters cuz the way life is know. The only thing that matters is how shity u feel and thats what makes u real. IF thats what today is tommarow going to get any better?

2005-11-02
rosa parks R.I.P. Nice poem i really felt the soft strongfelt power in it. She really did give racism and seggragation a backflash to blind the blind that couldnt see. Were all the same, in this game.

2005-10-30
this poem is a thinker u have to use thought and understand how it would be to think and blank when its most important. To be secluded sucks. but u are freir that way.

2005-10-30
Havin a friend die that u knew and loved really takes it out of ya. left open for some thought what is your desire, is it why ur friend died or ?SWWeeet

2005-10-26
i hate trusting in something or someone, and in the end your trust was YOUR own weekness. For U failed to see what your heart wouldnot let u.

2005-10-26
i hate trusting in something or someone, and in the end your trust was YOUR own weekness. For U failed to see what your heart wouldnot let u.

2005-10-24
That is awsome how u decribe the becoming a child out of the dust and decay. I also love how he goes on and lives like he is raised with no understanding for whats right and wrong.

2005-10-21
sounds like an inner struggle of emotions and an understanding of how it feels to be torn and wanting to be able to never be ripped apart.

2005-10-17
i love the first stanza pretty intense.

2005-09-30
yes i know how u feel bing far apart and so close the pain of knowing and feeling clutches sorrow