Drift
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2011-06-13 "I found the difference between alone and lonely"
Mmmm, great line, and quite a good place to be as well!
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Let love lead the way
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2010-10-27 This is absolutely true, and beautifully expressed. Thank you for this lovely poem.
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The Problem with Beauty
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2010-02-24 Perfectly summed up in the last two lines!
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With all Due Respect....
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2009-12-31 Nicely done, and I like the sentiment behind this poem too!
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I am still ALIVE
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2009-12-10 Welcome back!
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Morning Shower
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2009-10-20 Yesss!! Perfect, I love it! :-)
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Sea of love
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2009-10-15 Mmmm, a wonderful read, I love it! I feel a wave-like motion in the rhythm of the poem that fits so perfectly with the text. Beautiful job!
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Addicted
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2009-10-01 These words are easy to relate to, and well-written!
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Cricket
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2009-08-23 Well, got to congratulate those Poms for reclaiming the ashes anyway :-D
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Rose Coloured Glasses
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2009-08-12 This wonderful poem is summed up for me in this single line:
Say YES! This can happen to me!
So true! And so wonderful when it does happen. I'm happy for you, purple girl :-)
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The mystery of love
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2009-08-06 I do believe you've got it! Well put, and nicely written.
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The Coffee Song
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2009-08-03 I like this a lot, and I'd love to hear the melody that goes with it :-)
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I'm Still Around!
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2009-07-29 LOL, nice one, Purple Girl :-)))
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Afternote
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2009-07-21 I know this feeling so well, and I love the way you've captured it so perfectly.
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Ethereal
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2009-07-21 Mmmm, I feel it! Nice description of the indescribable.
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Sonnet on Frail Freedom
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2009-07-21 Very nicely done, a most enjoyable read, thanks :-)
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Deep throat
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2009-07-20 I'm in!
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A moment on the road
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2009-07-09 Mmmmmm, smooth as silk :-)
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Sarah Palin
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2009-07-08 Heh, this reads like a huge sigh of relief, which I'm sure is shared by millions of people around the world :-)
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Little Visitor
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2009-07-06 Lovely poem, full of wise words.
I especially like this line:
"What is a normal family then?"
...although I doubt that anybody knows the answer to that :-p
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Ab-scent
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2009-06-29 Welcome back to the bay! It's been a while, great to read your work again :-)
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Flirting
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2009-06-18 Nicely penned :-) I, too, am left wondering what happens next!
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What is love for?
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2009-06-17 Lovely text, and the last two lines say it all :-) <3<3<3
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Fragrancia Pura (The journey within - the land without)
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2009-06-09 A stirring, moving text, with a great rhythm and rhyme. Nice job!
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My Bengal Cat
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2009-06-08 Cute! (Both the poem and the kitty ;-))
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The Drive
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2009-06-03 Hahaha, nice write, and a great punchline! :-)))
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Sweet Earthly Angel
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2009-06-02 Such a sweet poem! :-)))
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my love
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2009-06-01 Beautiful, and so sweet!
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Words
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2009-05-31 Ah, the artist has spoken (and very creatively too!)
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Lilibonelle: Untitled
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2009-05-23 Now this is passion! I like the composition of this poem, and the way it snuggles down and asks to be read again and again. Great job!
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Guiding Lightness
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2009-05-19 Very sweet and positive poem, thanks!
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Sweet Fate (Limerick Challenge)
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2009-05-10 Hahaha, excellent, you're good at these, you know! :-) If this were a competition I'd put you a couple of furlongs ahead of the pack right now!
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Claiming (Limerick Challenge)
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2009-05-10 Nice job! This is one of the few entries to the challenge that have faithfully kept to the "proper" Limerick form, and therefore deserves an applause! :-)
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Perfect For Me...
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2009-04-30 This is really beautifully done, the way the form changes with the focus of the words. I love it!
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Drained and empty
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2009-04-26 You may feel down and down-sized, but I say
Your up and up-beat poems light the bay!
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As I Listen....
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2009-04-26 It never ceases to amaze me how certain sound waves can have such an enormous positive effect on the soul.
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Torn
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2009-04-25 Beautifully written poem of a very hard decision to make. Looks like you made the right choice.
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The Root Of Conviviality
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2009-04-22 This is so true, and very well-written. Thanks!
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BEWARE!!
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2009-04-22 Ouch! I feel your pain! This is exactly why those one-use-only virtual credit cards were invented, to protect people from scumbags like that!
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Trying to figure things out...
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2009-04-21 Not crazy, just human. Nicely captured!
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The Gig From Hell!
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2009-04-20 That was hilarious, I can picture the scene so well, especially the part about you crossing yourself :-)
And those last two lines were the clincher: made me laugh out loud! Great stuff :-D
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You Can't Win 'em All
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2009-04-20 This is so true, and so beautifully expressed! Applaud.
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Easter Sunday.
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2009-04-20 Moving poetry, beautifully written.
I can't help but wonder how often he looks back and regrets making that choice...
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Flaming Love
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2009-04-20 It's a great picture, I remember it from when I was that age. Nice to see that you were so wise when you were so young :-)
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Bits and Pieces
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2009-04-20 Beautiful, thought-provoking stuff, and so well-written too!
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My Londonderry Air
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2009-04-18 Lovely work! I could hear the song in my head as I read it :-)
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Why Do We Write?
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2009-04-18 For me, the act of writing releases a thought from the confines of my mind, giving me peace in the process. So yes, it's for me mostly... and for my muse :-)))
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Road Rage
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2009-04-17 I like this text. Not only for its rhyme and rhythm, but also for the reminder of the size of our community here on the bay. As your Friday draws to a frustrating close, mine is just beginning...
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Killing Kiln Time!
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2009-04-16 The time you killed
Has now been filled
With words that thrilled
You're twice as skilled!!
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Lest They Flutter By...
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2009-04-15 It's about time you made the front page with some of your stuff, and what better way to start than with this masterpiece!
Congratulations :-)))
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