Escape From Reality
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2009-07-15 Clever words, Stan,
unfortunately, awakening from
the dream - all we find is reality
of life! The drawing is just great
zzz !
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H20
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2009-07-15 How right you are, Norma,
so well expressed and as usual
in a very flowing rhyme!
Clean water is like precious gold
it flows at places manyfold
at others there is barely any
to drill, for so very many.
Imagine survival without this liquid
you just won`t make it!
be careful, don`t waste it!
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The old maid's song
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2009-02-24 The tune is fantastic, where have all the
flowers gone...and Marlene sings it
heart touchingly well. Like some of her
others: (Peter, wenn du Geburtstag hast..)
Thanks for posting the text, Rgds, N.
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King Leviathan: Fibonacci Challenge
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2009-02-22 What a Leviathan Monster
you describe, to rule and
dominate! Reads like a fine
Fibonacci form. /N
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Doodle
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2009-02-22 Keep on to doodle, it can be
fun when one is a bit lonely and
the result may just be a surprise the
next morning.:-) /N.
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With Hope (For J. E. Higgs) The Fibonacci Challenge
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2009-02-22 Hope that J.Higgs will get your
lovely message! and all the syllables
in your name. Nice Fibonacci form,
very easy it seems. /N
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Challenging the winter deep-freeze
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2009-02-22 This text is just wonderful to read!
...and there was never any frozenness
without the thaw of spring to melt it
down. Love on its way, no more frozen
heart and tears. Rgds, /N
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Home Alone
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2009-02-22 A bit sad to read but then,
pull out all the memories and
you will hopefully feel better! /N
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Choco-holic
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2009-02-22 Don`t quit! You see, you are not alone
being a choco-holic, a sweet addiction,
fun write, I smile. Sweet drawing, too.
I love choco-mousse alright,
either black or white, that`s my dessert
deligt! /N.
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Perpetual youth
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2009-02-15 Even an old soul can get forever younger,
how nice to fall in love again to get yet
another life! Beautifully expressed, I did
fall in love! Thanks for sharing /N.
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You are my happiness!
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2009-02-15 May you find your happiness ever
after! A gentle little write, and don`t
convert to anything else! /N.
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Mr money maker
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2009-02-15 Blue fairy tales colors of yellow and red
your favorites, saw them liked them!
Congratulation to be chosen.
Hejdå, /N.
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Broken orkide
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2009-02-15 Silent word out of the emptiness!
A kiss that kills oceans of life,
my goodness what lovely constructions!
In pearls a lovely memory, so nicely
expressed, liked it a lot! / N.
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Pencil
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2009-02-15 The importance of a pencil!
Very useful in all colours.
How else could one put words
on paper, nice write, nice thought,
thank you, N,
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He Is Oh So Clever
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2009-02-12 Yes! Very clever, Stan, who else could
put together these clever words!
big smile, cool drawing too. /N.
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Like An Old Antique
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2009-02-12 Never underestimate antiques!
They are very valuable and carry
a long interesting story! Love the lady
in red! and I almost missed that one,
thanks! Rgds, N.
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If Life Were An Open Book
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2009-02-10 I read, no dust on a shelf!
A clever story, you would be busy writing
for a long while! And we would get to know
you very well. But then its nice to guard some
secrets too, Thanks for sharing your thoughts./N
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PeaceAbilities
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2009-02-10 So beautiful, with echoes ringing,
compliments to the fine rhyme, too!
Thank you for sharing /N.
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tonight's haiku
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2009-02-10 I do love Haiku, I try them once in
a while myself, not so easy as it looks!
Its a miss her at night" Haiku,
may I gently make a suggestion:
Last line: looking into stars!
Hope you don`t feel bad about my thought
it was so well meant. Haiku to you, /N.
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Hugs
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2009-02-10 I liked very much your additions to the
Hug collection, they are marvellous
and will be saved for later use!
Thank you and a big HUG to you!/N.
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Live and Let Live
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2009-02-09 You do write with such gusto
and confidence, feels good, seems
you know what you want! Nice to receive,
even better to give, so true and nice to read, too.
/N.
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Patient or Victim?
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2009-02-09 I shouldn`t need you, but I do...
Once its over you`ll need and miss her
even more.So well expressed emotions
angry and sad , it hurts to read, but you
are so strong, did all of it on your own,
don`let yourself down, its hard to comment
because you do deserve a really big warm
hug or two !/N.
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Compassionate Croon
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2009-02-08 A very beautiful poem,
thank you for sharing!
a big Hug to you! /N.
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To be, or not to be?
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2009-02-07 Don`t despair or get desperate,
after rain comes shine! Hope! /N.
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Right-handed
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2009-02-07 You have a wonderful sense of humor!
All the best from a lefthander without
a BA in writing but who can draw lefthandedly
/ N.
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The longest moment
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2009-01-24 Your poems are absolutely wonderful
to read, thank you for sharing your
thoughts, N.
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Backers
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2009-01-24 and no credit card will help
any more. May their love keep
them together! /N.
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The Inseperable Pair
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2009-01-24 A nice little write. From a childs view:
People in love hold hands
so that the rings don`t fall off
because they are very expensive! /N.
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Bathtime Fun
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2009-01-22 Haha, what a lovely ingenious tvist,
bubbly fun, thanks :-) !
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Twentieth of January, 2009
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2009-01-21 CONGRATULATIONS! A great day
it was not only for America,
full of hope are we all!
Regards, N.
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ONE DAY ON BALKAN
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2009-01-21 Lucky Bjanka, hope your love for
her is/was returned. Nicely written, thanks /N.
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I Got The Message
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2009-01-21 Entertaining to read, and then
this clever ending-twist! Thanks
/N.
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moonlight
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2009-01-20 You do have a warm heart, writing
such fine Haiku, thank you! Northlight
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Remember When
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2009-01-19 These were the times, sometimes rough
other times smooth going, oh yes, I do
remember it well, almost all.
But then, the show must go on, lets try
to make the best of it to come!
The drawing is just as great as your
words full of melodies! Thanks for the
memories, Northlight.
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The Sighing Sea
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2009-01-18 shhhhh - Can just visualize this
beautiful place, a distinct picture
well painted. Thank you. N.
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The Sighing Sea
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2009-01-18 shhhhh - Can just visualize this
beautiful place, a distinct picture
well painted. Thank you. N.
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Stood up by the Reaper
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2009-01-18 Very well Haiku`ed, a view from
down under thought. Rgds, N.
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The Shrink
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2009-01-18 For the patients a pill or two too many,
none left for the Shrink, he may have
needed them most! But so it still is, I`m sure.
Regards, N.
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Crying Paper
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2009-01-17 You tried it, I liked it, I hiked it, you tiped it, who needs a
crying paper for that? Fun reading, thanks, N.
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The Patient
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2009-01-17 Read it over and over, it reminds me so much of my own
experience not long ago. Seing a friend getting old, hiding in
memories. It may hurt more than the final visit. With deep emotions you expressed your thoughts so well, thank you. Rgds, Northlight
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New haiku
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2009-01-16 Enjoyed your Haiku,
another Haiku-fan!!
its fun to "compose" one or two.
Regards, N.
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Until It's Time
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2009-01-16 A whole lifestory from a beautiful place,
can feel the sound, sand, sea, wind
and the loneliness until the end.
Its more like a lovely painting, thank you.
Regards, N.
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Stop the world
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2009-01-16 Stop the world, you want to get off?
Don`t get off, there are still great times
to come for you! Thanks for your thoughts
with a deep meaning. Regards, N.
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Quite simply
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2009-01-12 You asked an important question and replied:
we can and must.....support the truth, peace
and love, now if that only wasn`t so difficult to
achieve if two do not agree....
Thank you for a fine thoughtful text,
Northlight
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An Innocent Child's View[Rhyme Royal]
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2009-01-12 An innocent child`s view inspired by
the present ongoings and maybe, just
maybe by the words "a childs grief"
the innocent children suffer the most,
Thanks for sharing your thoughts
Northlight
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The lost Jew
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2009-01-12 a difficult text, well written,
is there anything new under
the sun? Thank you for sharing
your thoughts, Northlight
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la la la la la la... =)
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2009-01-06 As Albert Camus said:
Don`t walk in front of me,
I may not follow,
Don`t walk behind me,
I may not lead,
Walk beside me
and be my friend.
and therefore: hold a true
friend with both your hands!
Rgds, :-)
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Naughty Or Nice?
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2008-12-17 delightful to read, funny and
a great rhyme, Thanks!
HoHoHo-greetings, N.
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DEMENTIA
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2008-12-17 How sad for you, to go through,
it hurts reading, heart bleeding,
have seen it with a friend who
did not know me in the end.
Wish you courage, regards, N.
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Hyacinths.
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2008-12-17 if you can tell the smell of
Hyacinths it`s Christmas!
Wish you many of them!
Regards, N.
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