sabereh lotfian

2023-05-04
Smart write!

2023-05-04
Oh, I'm so glad to come across this one! The witty remark you made here embedded in a nursery rhyme, makes it resonate with the reader even more, which is no result of levity!

At least Artificial Idoicy hasn't been demonstrated by machines yet, and I think that we should be thankful for it! Lol

Regards,
~Sabereh

2023-05-03
Alan, your experience of tinnitus is very well-pictured. It makes me understand the feeling in a 3-dimmensional way!
There is a popular belief in Iran that says if you hear a ringing in your right ear, a relative is mentioning you somewhere, and if your left ear rings, a friend is remembering you!

"Father with his *sergeant major's* voice. "( Are you saying that it was high? I think that's how they should sound! :-p)

Interesting to know that sometime in the U.K history, 21 was the age of adulthooh! Never heard of that!

*Now* in line 14 I think.

regards,
Sabereh

2012-12-07
Welcome back Liliana! We've been so waiting for you... :)

~Sabereh x

2012-10-27
Oh, how I missed yor writings Thomas...
Hope all is well :)

2010-11-17
Wonderful! Welcome to the Bay my friend. :)

Peace
Sabereh

2010-11-16
Hey! where are you?

2010-11-16
Just me and the wind
Is all that's moving

Nick I Love this! :) Bookmarked!

2009-08-25
hiii! I've been intending to write comments for your poems since the first time I visited your page. :) well, this piece deserves an indepth comment and I'm not going to write it now. :-P but I'll be back, hopefully soon. :)

this is so wonderful and welcome to the Bay. :)
All the best to you

Barmigardaaaaaaaaaaaam...!


P.S. By the way do you speak any Persian?

2009-07-30
Hi Courtney!
Your poems are a wonderful reflection of the different pure feelings you try to convey.And your dynamic spirit just flies out of your poems as I start reading them.you are a young talented, creative poet with beautiful poetry that really touches to the core.

I loved your "Deeper and deeper" the best. it is a heartfelt expression of your love.It seems you love to fall and fall and fall and deeper and deeper and deeper. ;) :-P so keep it up,since to love is the only job the mankind is supposed to do well, and be poetic always.:)

Love...
Sabereh ^^

2009-05-25
corecting the typo , * whisper*. :-P

2009-05-25
applause!! this is wonderful my friend! I hadn't written any comments for a long time here, but your poem made me do so! it is exactly one of those that when you read it, something within you wispers " don't leave without a comment!" :-p :)

my favorite lines:
"I need someone to make me real
To say just what they truly feel
I need someone to make me feel
That what they say is truly real "

so much wisdome lies within these words, thanks for the enjoyable read! it really made my day. :)
certainly a bookmark!

smiles!
Sabereh :)

2007-09-16
I am a machine? Mmm... well this world's been well machimed enough so how can we expect ourselves not to become mechines!;) You know I think something is always going wrong as the seconds pass & the hours rush toward us so fast, the more more we go through the new technology & new inventions the more we get charmed with them, I feel they have an strange power over us! they seem to be serving us, but these stupid machines have hired us and yet we're not aware of it!That's mostly why the hearts fall apart & humans are becoming strange broken machines!So much wisdom I see through these words Zachary. :)This is so unique.Well, I can't leave here without bookmarking this one. :D
I'll be looking forward to reading more of these unique pieces that is yours. :)

Smiles!
Sabereh

2007-09-16
Wow Joe!! So many poems you've posted here. :) :)
This one is really a great mirror refleting your feelings so very well!! I'm really happy you had a beautiful day of happiness . :D
But don't look for the happiness, try to make happiness from every moment of your life , Depression & all the other bad words will die just whenever you wish! :) ;)you'll be happy always, depending on the view you have toward this life.
Just smile whenever you see a frown ;) :D

My favorite lines:

"Gone are the days of black clothes and dark mind
Welcome my friend, to the joy we shall find

Life is good going out by mistake
Talking to friends and a cute baby face" :) :) :)

smiles!
Sabereh

2007-09-03
Wow! this is so beautiful ! the smile on my face went bigger & bigger as I moved along your words reaching to the white bright word"Peace".
I'm bookmarking it. :)

Peace!
Sabereh

2007-09-02
Wow! I love this wonderful piece of wisdom.
Things you've mentioned here are some absolute facts about so many "Our society"(societies) from around the world, my friend. :)
Plus this poem shows I'm reading the words of a very talented poet. I love some unique colloqations here:

gas-guzzling vehicles, wallets lose weight & ... .

Welcome to the Bay!

Love
Sabereh

2007-08-31
This is so heart-felt Joe , I love the beautiful paradox you used here:

The closer that i get to you
The farther i can see you through

I love the way the poemends, a very beautiful piece you pened here. :)

I'll try to sing it myself. :-p
Hey ! wait a minute ... I think I can here it . :D

smiling at you,
Sabereh

2007-08-27
Wow this is really a charming piece Lisamaree, such wisdom is nestled here! thanks for painting you canvas here, so beautiful!
Welcome to the bay with this great start!

:)
Sabereh

2007-08-21
You know what to do with the words flying in your mind so very well & a very true truth is expressed here:

Love is the best!
Love ends in strife.
Beauty will test
All of your life...

it's so well-penned, thanks for sharing it :)

Take care,
Sabereh

2007-08-09
The poem just shows what a wonderful friend you are, Mr Donobauer. :) The beautiful Imagination you have & and it's portrayed here, as I read I feel I'm watching the poetic canvas you've painted, to keep the memory of a Friend!

You heaved to
another shore...

sail away
the sea's your
harbour now

VERY insightful

With respect,
Sabereh

2007-08-09
mmmm..... What's there to say? I don't understand. but I liked the style, simply beautiful :) It definitely shows your talent in wordsmith :)

Your Friend,
Sabereh

2007-08-09
I like the layout Joe & your Bird of Imagination is flying into my mind too. :) I love the 4 first lines.

Keep your mind fresh. :D
Sabereh

2007-08-08
No It's not at all silly. :) It's beautiful, I think the poem is peaceful itself, though I can't completely relate to it. :-p

Keep Flourishing:)
Sabereh

2007-08-02
Very beautiful, simple, with wonderful colloqation, Musical language, with great Imagination & I specially loved 4 first lines. :)
Clearly shows your wonderful talent in creating poetic thoughts. :D

Smiling at you ,
Sabereh

2007-08-02
Well, you know the pain is to make us improve our personality, it always has a hidden unknown treasure hidden inside. :) what do you think? It's a blacksmith that heats the Iron to make a better metallic pot, & you're a wonderful wordsmith. :-p I love your well-penned poem. :D

Your Friend,
Sabereh

2007-08-01
I think you're so great at writing Birthday poems Dan. I love the simplicity of the poem.the wonderful way you express your feeling here. Though I don't enjoy reading birthday poems but I loved this. The story OF Kathy is so very well expressed here :D
I specially loved this line to the end :
my roses fall from the sky ...

Cheers,
Sabereh

2007-08-01
Oh YES! I LOve this story. :) I have the novel, I bought it when I was ten. :-p I've read it several times & I'm sure I'll reread it & enjoy it again & again, you just can't put it aside as you move through the words of Louisa May Alcott ! very fascinating it is. :)
I love her. :D
I've watched both the movie & cartoon. :D I LOve drawing & I paint canvas, my first work was Little women, the picture on it's cover. :) Though it didn't came all that beautiful but it's one of my favorite works. :-P I loved your poem, and this is bookmarked :)

Love,
Sabereh

2007-07-30
So true Liz. :) I can really relate to this for it is a VERY heart-felt flowing poem expressing a great truth ,that we're WONDERFUL
just the way you are, so keep shining for you are wonderful the way you are.

LOved it(especially the last verse) :D
Sabereh

2007-07-28
BOOKMARKED :D

Very beautiful & simple Justin :) very thought-provoking it is & clearly shows the beautiful , pure heart of the author :)

Keep shining
Sabereh

2007-07-17
Time jumping thru space and dimensions!
I love the personification for time, time is really nothing but sth jumping thru space and dimensions as you said:) just like some1 selfish who tries to crash into whatever is on his way, but I think time is also wasting the time! it doesn't even realize we're on our way to the Eternity that is the perfect purpose of human's precious life!

bookmarked:D
~Sabereh

2007-07-16
a very flowing bright piece with beautiful soft emotions running through!I specially loved the way you started the poem :
What words can I use
to express how I feel?
Such a beautiful heart you have

Hope all the best
Sabereh

2007-07-16
Wow, an scary black and white poem here! hahahaha:D
I like the lay-out and the poem has a really good a flowing rhythm
I loved the repetition here: She's as evil as evil can be
hope you're doing well:)

~Sabereh x

2007-07-16
There is a song that curses infidelity...
Well I think a song can also motivate a world to curse the infidelity! but I'm sure there will be a day that no one even knows how to spell infidelity and all the other dark words:)

Sabereh

2007-07-16
What a beautiful , pure heart you have! & your words are like the fresh air to breathe , we enjoy reading your works too! I assure you:)
Where are you Dejan ? you haven't posted any new poems. we are waiting, please hurry up:D

Hope all is well
Sabereh

2007-07-16
Wow! the image in your mind is so very well portrayed here!
And how very simple the cosmos is a black roof here! and your words are glistening in my eyes more than your stras!

I love the poetic mind here:)
Sabereh

P.S. I think you misspelled watching in the last line Dan:D

2007-07-08
Wow! this is so wonderful Lynn, poetically poetic, really a poem!
expressing the ethereal feeling of a true love! you should let him read this poem that is so beautiful to the core:)
wish you luck

peace
Sabereh:)

2007-07-08
Wow! a very shining soft poem expressing a pure ethereal feeling very heart-felt . seems the words are alive and I walking through them:)

2007-07-08
I like the lay out & the beautiful repetition here, and a very thought-provoking poem it is. you've portraited your feeling very clear & a good rhythm it has:)

so welldone!
Sabereh

2007-07-07
wow! very good colloqated, simple words yet they have so much more to say coming to the beautiful end:

but never the less,
I'm going to talk.

I think real freedom is that you never let evil satiate, well everyone can say I'm free but are we really free? are we?!

Peace :) :)

your friend/Sabereh

2007-07-04
simple poem expressing the truth about the life of many people round the world . I loved it , even though it had words I really hate, liquor & cigarettes ,the pills! :-P
hahaha :) the title was mysterious , well I couldn't really decide what it is going to be about! but it was absolutely a great work.

I liked the end:
Time will tell what the future holds
I guess I just have to see how my life unfolds:)

Peace
Sabereh

P.s. thanks for saving me as a writing friend:D

2007-02-13
Wise question begins this meaningful poem , through very simple words takes us deeply inside the mind of its author....!
very insightful:)

Peace
Sabereh

2007-01-18
Heeeeey! how simple & flowing these words are .surely a poet , not the usual poet a POET, should be able to write about anything easily ! the furthest thing may be a planet in an unknown galaxy or the closest , like an ant moving on the wall which your leaning against!!!!!!!

so very beautiful Aaron!
LOve,
Sabereh

2007-01-18
These words really let the reader to go beyond your poem , & to experience the light nestled in the depth of it . simply beautiful!

peace
Sabereh

2007-01-18
These words really let the reader to go beyond your poem , & to experience the kight nestled in the depth of it . simply beautiful!

peace
Sabereh

2007-01-17
Hey , that was *If* not *even*
by mistake! LOL

Sabereh

2007-01-17
Ooops! hey! :-p this was so deep that I'm not sure even I got the message or not. but besides I really like the end. you have the power to end your poems with a harmony of words:)

Regards
Sabereh

2007-01-17
Trees sway, young sprouts tremble so beautiful but one more thing is left!
The ROOTS stand firm ,always!
Thanks for sharing this one:)

Sabereh

2007-01-17
This peaceful words just reminds me of that poem written by Liam:

Walk with me....

Come with me, walk with me
That I may show you heaven
Stay with me, talk with me
Of the goodness we are given.....

Come with me, walk with me
Know the road to heavens gate
Talk of Me, believe in Me
Let not evil satiate.
I'm sure you'll find the gates to the Paradise:)
we Just have to open our inner eyes!

respects
Sabereh

2007-01-17
Heeeeey , (((Sabrina))) good to see you posting new poems , this piece is half dark ,half shining . but yet the light of your poem & the angels surrounding your words are crashing into the its darkness:)

"Let's introduce some blue scenes"

Hugs
Sabereh

2007-01-17
so very true , so simple & short ,yet very complex:)
you mean life can be a cold stream?

:)
Sabereh