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2008-12-27
Such beauty Arti!
I'm in awe.
"bipolar sky" Wow
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| Future Dreaming
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2008-12-27
Such a sincere beautiful poem!
Love it!
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| Stone Skies
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2008-10-29
The five last lines are superb. That's what it's all about. And you nailed it.
*BOOKMARKED*
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| And Your Light Went Out
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2008-10-21
What a beautiful ode!
Remembrance is everything.
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| Dying
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2008-09-22
Beautifully. Really nice rythm.
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| Flames of melancholy
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2008-09-22
WOW!
This is mezmerising, painstalking beauty.
I have longed for this, and I didn't even know it.
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| The Vase
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2008-09-22
Pure beauty dear Kathy!
The last lines are PERFECT!
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| Beauty
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2007-12-25
Such a true and heartfelt poem!
Zoya at her best. :)
Hope you are doing fine!!!
HUGZ
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| Elation
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2007-12-25
Lovely heartfelt feelings.
I could almost see you smiling in front of me. :)
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| We Are The Lighthouse ~ Poetbay's Hope
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2007-12-09
Yes, a lighthouse it truly is.
I've been hiding in the dark, and what joy to come back to this!
HUGS to you Kathy!
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| September 28, 2000 - The Day of Nightmares
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2007-09-20
My Dear Kathy!
It's always a mystery when the devil walks the earth.
Beautiful write, followed by a million hugs.
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| A better time
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2007-09-20
Such a beautiful cliff!
Where the f**k is it? I've been trying to find it my entire life.
;)
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| A beautiful world
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2007-09-20
WOW!
What a flow, such delicate words...
Speachless...
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| There Is A Fountain
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2007-08-16
Dear Kathy!
How has it been possible for me to live without your words?
This is truly beautiful. Love radiants out from the screen.
I'm glad to be back!
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| The Two Wolves Within
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2007-04-27
Yes, those Cherokees knew wha they were talking about!
And Zoya has spread another wisdom! =)
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| Heart in a Jar on a Shelf
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2007-04-26
This was truly indescribably good.
Especially liked this stanza:
There's something about this hole in my chest
It itches, it talks, it won't give me some rest
It says to me: "Fill me with stone! Fill me with stone"
Talks like every one else with muscle and bone
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| Imminent love psychosis
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2007-04-26
Yes, you truly have a point here! Recognizible and beautiful.
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| Inside The Storm
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2007-04-26
Oh yes, that's what it's like.
Heartfelt description and a good rhytm.
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| Little Voice
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2007-04-26
Oh, how griefstruck you leave me Dear Kathy.
But hopeful yet.
A beautiful write.
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| Eyes to Eyes
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2007-03-07
Yes, this surely flows like cream. :)
A whirlwind of letters and emotions. Thanks!
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| Mixing up
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2007-03-06
What a beautiful ode to your love.
When reading the first lines I recognized myself as the part that causes swirlpools and shallows.
And then it all becomes beautiful, shear beauty.
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| When You Look At Me Like That
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2007-03-03
Oh, what a magical ode! :)
And it's true you know. It's just like that!
How are you my dear Kathy?
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| Love-From Infinity to Eternity
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2007-02-17
Beatiful words as always!
And Love Oh Love, where art thou?
;)
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| When Love...
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2007-02-16
A heartfelt contribution to love.
But what is love?
And what do we love and why?
Just some friday night thoughts from D. Daybreaker. :)
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| returns again
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2007-02-07
gives me an image of circles that always surrounds us.
life as one gigantic circle.
dust to dust.
good write!
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| My burlesque queen
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2007-02-07
WOW!
This was awesome! The words just float, transcends into my mind.
Bookmarked!
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| Dance of Unity
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2007-02-07
Well, you know i adore this form. Short and intensive!
GREAT RHYTM!
*stomp my feet and dance the beat*
:)
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| The pasts of the future
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2007-02-04
This is a brillant text! You really capture several aspects of everyday life and the expectations that we create. A straightforward text, this is how it is. And it is!
The rhymes are great and the
"today is so black"
just sends me to a place I really don't want to visit.
Thank you!
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| maybe
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2007-02-04
I like your texts. They are still, and express a feeling of thoughtfulness. Soothing.
Maybe "washing" is a better form in the last line? what do you think?
Thank you for a delicate read!
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| Shell Seeker
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2007-02-04
Wow! This was really good my friend!
"How do I stop this rushing to shore?
Will the next wave bring me a cure?"
Beautiful! Pure magic!
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| if I told you
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2007-02-04
"bending me into incognito."
what a beautiful sentense.
the poem makes you wonder what you are about to say...
beautiful poem! thank you!
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| Sentimental Serenade
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2007-01-29
Oh my, the softness of the words just amaze me.
It truly is a whisper. Let us all stop talking! Let's whisper! =)
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| Make love, not war, Mr President!
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2007-01-29
Very well written and some excellent points!
Nice to see an expression of critique!
Thank you!
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| Who Knows Where the Journey Ends...
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2007-01-19
A tribute to life! And a beautiful one!
Sometimes I wish I could know where the journey ends, or at least where it will take me. Curiosity keeps me worried, yet alive.
A beautiful image as well!
Thank you!
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| The Pain of Love
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2007-01-19
Yes, do we reach the other side of love? Ever...
beautifully grasped.
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| My fragile angel...
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2007-01-19
Yes, this was truly beautiful! So romantic, yet sad.
Thanks!
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| Sunbeams' Trance
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2007-01-14
As you now, I'm quite fond of these shortliners myself!
A great read!
Thank you soo much!
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| I am an Island
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2007-01-14
Wonderful words and a great flow.
Natural disasters are horrible. And to make that feeling of horror, into your own sad thoughts, that sad day.
It, like the sea, overwhelmes you.
Beautiful.
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| The Workoholic's Dilemma
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2007-01-14
So true in deed!
Unfortunately I have to say that I recognize myself in your words.
Greatly captured.
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| Higher Then The Clouds/Lower Then The Dirt
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2007-01-11
Yes, isn't it horrible!
Some people just don't know how to keep you smiling! =/
Great captured!
PS: then in line 1 and 6 should be than. =)
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| Daybreaker (The end of the world as he knows it)
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2007-01-08
Wow!
Great song, and as a former speaker already said: Really wish I could hear it!
Obviously I myself identified with this song a lot. Not just cause of the title, but for the themes as well.
Thank you!
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| I Love Her
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2007-01-05
Absolutely beautiful. How difficult it must be! But what strength!
I hope your daughter feels better soon!
Great write!
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| where angels sleep
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2007-01-02
A very beautiful write in deed.
But not just soothing, it is sad as well.
where angels sleep - angels that do not watch over you.
Excellent write.
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| Ol' Couch
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2007-01-02
Beautiful. Yes, the old things are so precious. They carry life within.
Thank you!
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| Where Do The Words Go?
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2006-12-25
Excellent expression of thought!
And oh yes, I do recognize! ;)
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| Rain and Pain
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2006-12-23
Nice play with words and their meaning. I really enjoyed the read.
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| Clouds of Change
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2006-12-23
Sad thoughts expressed beautifully!
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| Skinner's rat
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2006-12-15
This was really good, everyday boredom just appeals to me. =/
Especially liked the lines:
"he's paid his dues
he's sure of that
though long forgotten why
but he will continue to entertain
until the day he dies"
oh, what rythm! =)
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| A contrast of want and need
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2006-12-15
This truly starts the thinking!
Great work!
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| Joy Comes In The Morning
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2006-12-15
Oh, what a splendid write! And some insights to the relations on the bay, in deed. :)
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