| Yearning
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2010-11-24
Oh yes!
this's so truly & precisely described Tony!
AMNA
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| Rose
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2010-11-24
This couldn't stop me dropping a word for its appreciation.
Simply beautiful!
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| Boredom Town
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2010-02-11
and the seeds of bordome will grow some colorful buds around u;-)
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| I've got you
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2009-12-18
what else could have been said to express the deepest of your inside heartfelt longing for the luckiest her...
One of the finest romantics here to read!
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| The Times That I Had
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2009-11-12
well crafted stuff...nice in its theme.
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| Tuning In
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2009-11-03
and the real music itself slips and oozes from the words of the artists like you. The beats of the music are actually the beats of our emotions. very nice write!
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| Hope III
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2009-11-02
and crossing fingers is always a wise act for a smiling tomorrow:)
wise lines here...
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| The Unremitting Season
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2009-11-02
rains frozen tears
that slice the leaves and
bleach the colors
silently.
this is what sensible use of wods called as with a vivid flow of thoughts creating such a piece of brilliant art.
bookmarked this one!
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| The winter woods of Ellis Hollow
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2009-11-02
what an imagery!
this is one simple piece of artistic taste...
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| This Drowning One - Triolet
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2009-10-17
Liz, be hopeful onle HE saves us.Trust Him and the life will be like stars sparkling in a deep blue night!
nice lines:)
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2009-10-17
audible mind, translucent and keen...an eerie a lake...Beautiful!!
seems you really know her love:)
nice lines crafted here dear Michael.
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2009-10-17
audible mind, translucent and keen...an eerie a lake...Beautiful!!
seems you really know her love:)
nice lines crafted here dear Michael.
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| To My Illusive Love
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2009-10-15
Oh, what an expressions dripping poem!!
love the way you've let the tranquil but composed feelings an egress so well margined in every way!!
bookmarked!!:)
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| Love Lingers While Hope Grows
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2009-10-15
Not just a flower dear Kathy but a whole bunch will grow because this kindled hope will for sure one day bring a sunny day with smiling and dancing flowers around you. Nice one!!
Cares, AMNA
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| MY LAST DAY IN POETBAY
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2009-03-25
hey , why are you leaving?
regards
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| Chaos
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2009-03-18
Profundity leaves its ways to its core when your brain starts pouring the supple sparkling thoughts in an electrifying cohesion.
Beautiful personification... very well written.*
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| To be, or not to be?
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2009-02-07
Symptoms of depression dear friend and these words of yours seem standing at grey.
Well expressed*
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| Bricks of Love
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2009-02-04
No doubt, an adored and adoring heart can let flow words this beautiful way. Truth dripping thru each word of this poem and Dear friend, we can read and sense these tender feelings of yours.
Of course bookmarked!:)
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| Sweet little pain...
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2009-01-17
Yes it happens very much especially when one is sunken in truest emotions.The reminiscence of good times never let go pain yet the yearnings of its source maddens as well. So it's a real tough state and i can understand though.
Keep writing
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| The War on Terror
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2009-01-15
These are very profound expressions Michael, and i liked reading the internal rhythm of this craft. but who are the compellers of such cathartic thoughts??
very well written.
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| A cooked Love
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2009-01-14
Thanks dear Tai, your comment is much appreciated. but i guess you've misread the word "baloney" as "balcony" if you reread you'll find that. Secondly the word scum here suggests a crust that is worth avertable whereas smear if be used with clearing, wont make sense because both have simillar meanings. Thirdly dear pal, its not "deemed a jerk of fate" but "deeming a jerk of fate"
Anyhow, i really liked the way you've taken this text as because such critical reads make the writter learn. so thanks agian for the kind concern.
Cares,
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| Take your time
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2009-01-13
Colors on Bay!!
different approach, nice work!!
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| A letter home from WW1
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2009-01-10
The flow of words here is making itself a rhythm that actually has made me sing it . Trust me not for the second read rather it hooked me singing swining wheni read it for the first time. Plus the picture envisaged here is fairly vivid!
kudos!!!
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| Tears Of A Flower[Rhyme Royal]
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2009-01-09
Its just so beautiful Liz!
well done!
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| Knife
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2009-01-03
Smart write, cool!
regards
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| scarlett and thorns
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2008-12-29
how parallel is obscure delight here with pain, hankerings and sacrifice. A well balanced & worth pondering text lady!
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| Humble Services Sonnet
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2008-12-29
Michael!
i wonder reading your work, its much mature than your age that makes me see you fostering high with the finesse you possess within these brillant word play!
such a beauty carved here....amazing man!
Bravo!!!!
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| Lovability
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2008-12-20
A Heaven on earth this world would be, if every man get a dot of this piece!
the text itself is an appreciation.....
book marked!
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| Curried Nerves
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2008-12-06
Hilarious !
made me laugh , good one girlie!
regards
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| The Lost King
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2008-11-25
yeah!
it does sound obscurity whilst it addresses some wonderful memories of being in love which were ceased by the time and more by acceptance to some another dearly bond...any ways i liked it:)
keep writing !
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| Q & A (Question and Answer [Co-Write with Stine Mari Hansen])
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2008-11-25
A clever write arousing amusement!
Good one Man!
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| Dreams that Sing
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2008-11-08
this is beautiful Kathy!
it regaled nooks of my fancy and stimulated the strings of dreams:)
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| The Apology
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2008-11-07
maybe they see but do not discern because seeing needs just eyes while discerning.... pang of conscience!
nice write:)
regards,
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| I'm Bluish When I'm Fluish
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2008-11-04
too bad you caught it !
here in our region the cold weather has just taken over slightly but the real cold starts here in december with days and nights heavily foggy uh!
but yeah! the flu has its business started here too!
prayers for my fluish friend :)
take care buddy!
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| Age of Newness
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2008-10-10
thats right Kathy,
some times the awfull times have high waves which just have tears to wet the dryness of sadness. but really one being strong in the vision towards living life like a living being effaces all the crusts of melancholy. i'm happy for a newer you! :)
love & regards.
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| I'm out of time!
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2008-10-09
hey Joe, nice write friend----some thing really what we the bards of intangible arena roam within...:-)
keep writing
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| I'm Afraid To Write A Goodbye Poem
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2008-10-06
keep this true love of yours veiled behind the burly big heart that waits for some one gone--- and don't be gloomy for the unknown fright of your fate's fight that's only be won by the silent spell spoken to He Who can change the scene.
so never write that Good bye poem as what you've written here has commenced your new journey towards your love again!!! :)
cares & regards.
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| No Matter Where You Go
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2008-10-06
A smooth flow of feelings, really! like you said following like river not only to the recipent but we the readers too.
a typical mytype poetry---thanks for the share
bookmarked with echo of applause! :):)
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| Solitaire
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2008-09-17
true Elle, i can surely comprehend the blasts that blows your being in love, within.Its like daily death and i know what it takes for its rebirths. To love some one right however completes you but loving somebody wrong finishes you.
i hope you, like many of us, know the tricks to befool the world with fake smiles, but that doesn't matter because nobody can stich the torn opened wounds so people should not be bothered with some thing they just can be sorry for. And this to you, doesn't mean stop sharing yor feelings here...no. we all are here to read each others sorrrows and good times and i'll wait for such a heartfelt piece from you soon :)
so try living life of yours with your God's given values...i hope you'll be successful one day.
thanks dear for this post
regards,
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| The Vase
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2008-09-15
such softness does this poem holds in ts words, like some thing thrown on slippery surface of mind that can not stay just there but deeper in it where it decipher the otherness..
well done Kathy ...... no doubt you're a brilliant mind.
cares Amna
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| Paradise
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2008-09-11
what a passionate expression to sweetheart---takes in some else world of love..really nicely written.
whosoever is she should must read your purest feelings.
regards.
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| I Never Planned On This
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2008-09-10
though not ever near to your age yet i can undrestand this fact of missing the gone days, as i miss my childhood times that held me like a carefree blow of wind--- i can feel my self even now, being at your age because nolonger i'm too gonna be a victim of this rash, ruthless prey that its self remains young ever.
again a very realistic text, enjoyed reading it.
hugs this time. :)
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| May You Know Joy Again
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2008-09-10
this really has a soothing effect on my grieves and how nice are you to write for us.(some of the weeping souls on bay)
thank you for sharing a courteous text towards mankind generally.
love
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| Pink Boots and Curls
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2008-09-04
aw she is so cute!! and what a loving grandma has she, who wrote this beautiful kid, in pinky words.
kisses to her :)
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| Daydreams ~ of ~ Autumn
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2008-09-01
what a lulu text is this !!
"hugs to you"
:)
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| Sitting In a Taxi
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2008-08-27
sad to hear about your grief, grasp stoic firmly as it is the greatest strength one could have to live with inner bound with the outer successfully tackling the obstacles of life.
heal up your sores of soul and peep a bit forth.
love Amna.
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| The Ship of Poets
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2008-08-23
this is a poem reflecting your humbleness love and equity towards "ALL" i hope peolpe understand this..
a fervent welcome to the new editor on behalf of the whole crew.
thank you for welcoming on our behalf.
Love Amna.
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| Epiphany
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2008-08-21
Kathyyyyy!!!
this is just a wonderous work in poetry----to hold up a story along with the balancing is just excellent, you've showed here!
the reading adhered me til the end.
very well done!!
regards
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| Too much too
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2008-08-15
this really makes me leave my work for instance and start following the manic notes of this write that take me somewhere i could feel the real meaning of life for a hapless man within the shadows of hedonism.
a refreshing write to me,thanks for sharing.
regards,
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| Find Me by David Gates
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2008-08-08
Hey Michael! see how similitude is the state of your darling with your lines who just focuses up in the sky to see your single glimpse. Send your love for her single smile and we'll see the wonders of her brilliant lines.
take care Kathy
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