melanie sue

2022-06-20
https://youtu.be/iU8Z1lW3kvs

2020-04-17
You stay home. I am going outside and enjoy life without the influences of deception and Tyranny.

2020-03-24
"unless you are deadwood"
[no edit feature and I'm a typo tempest]

2020-03-24
Excellent expression. I felt yours AND mine-- it's universal in our humanity-- uness your deadwood and feel nothing at all. I have missed reading poetry...and writing too, for that matter. Anyway, to continue my ramble, discernment of what I can and can not change, state of mind- full, empty, positive,negative.... I would go to work so sad inside, but for the sake of others- fake a smile...and in a little while the fake smile transformed into an authentic one. State of mind.

2020-03-24
I cherish friendship. What is the ultimate commandment? Love God and each other. So simple. It is not your fault. The whole world is deceived. Watch. Be ready. Prophecies unfolding.

2019-10-25
What? No tribute to his "whiteness"? May I remind you that he is not the first American "Black"President. He is half black and half white, like our twin grandchildren.

2019-08-27
Writing has always been good therapy for me. And "be kind" shouldn't be so hard. But for many it is. All I know is that God wants us to love him and each other, being imperfect beings requires forgiveness- 70x7. and more-especially to those who ask for forgiveness and are repenting.Those lacking that ability can't truly love. Truth

2018-06-03
Beautiful. Most important to life is the water! I see the gem as being the water. Love this, Nils. A very soothing and refreshing read. Thank you, sir! [much needed]

2018-04-30
https://thefederalistpapers.org/ebooks/the-constitution-of-the-united-states

2017-10-01
no, they are standing small

2015-01-07
You were missed! Happy New Year, Jim!

2014-10-07
*****stellar*****

2014-10-07
***giggle***

[thank you-I needed a laugh to start my day!}

2014-06-26
....interesting twist on it....love that last line

2014-06-02
Shells, this is beauutifully worded. I relate to this poem very much. I survived this phase and you will too! And when the grandkids come along......awesome and wonderful!(we havew sons ages 23 and 33 and one daughter age. 27...and in 2 years time went from 4 grandchildren to 8 (3 from previous relationships.) We are 60 and weathered it thru....and you can too!

2014-05-02
Superbly written and one that I definitely relate to. My father, mother and younger brother did not go gently either. Thank God for the morphine that eventually helped ease them on into the afterlife.

2014-04-29
A toast to the Light of the Moon and the Goddess of the Hunt.

[very good poem-great title]

2014-04-13
*excellent*

2014-04-13
I enjoyed this immensely. Creative rhyme imparting meaningful message very well structured. Thank you

2014-02-12
Stellar!

2014-02-01
very clever...love that last line, Elle....[like your expressive work-contemplative,evocative....and definately not boring!]

thx

2014-01-08
I think this is an excellent expression taking a glimpse into the scathing reality of some. Very well done, Ivan. I applaud your work. Thank you

2013-12-28
Welcome back Lizzy!

This is excellent! Looking forward to reading more. :)

2013-11-15
*****STELLAR*****

2013-09-29
Such a pleasure to be reminded through the reading of your eloquent words! Much appreciated.

2013-09-23
I like the syllables and sounds in the word "merdivorous". It sounds so much better than "shit-eating".

2013-09-14
simply is.....


Love this.

2013-04-23
Beautifully expressed, sweetly sentimental. [one possible typo to correct-sat should be say, correct?] Enjoyed this much!

2013-03-18
I needed to read these words to be there....and no regrets...it was worth every syllable. I loved reading and absorbing every word of this. Fantastic write.

2013-01-30
This is the perfect poem to start my day with. Refreshing!Thx

2013-01-19
LOL! thx

2013-01-19
*****STELLAR*****

(these soothing words found me finding them)


Thank you, Nils. :)

2013-01-03
Thank you for clarifying! aND THANK GOD for this alternative route to communicating!I was totally dumbfounded because all I was receiving in your messages was this:

--------------------------------------------------------------------!

I didn't know what I did wrong and did write Anna about it. I never want to hurt anyone especially you!

2013-01-02
*PS Forgot to mention or perhaps ask....."at what age does one become OLD and loses the desire to go?"......"what takes the desire away---the pain of the mind or the body or both?"

2013-01-02
Thank you very very much for sharing this. I have heard of this place so I googled it to see if the landscape painted in my head by the words matched the actual place. I wasn't disappointed.Now I know I want to go there on our next excursion out.The vivid words conjured up visions of our own recent experiences.Not to be confused with "jet-setters", we think of ourselves as explorers and we study LIFE. We left in a 1994 Gulfstream RV in early Oct. and have just returned home on Dec.15. We went on a journey that traversed the U.S. from coast to coast. The highlights (of which were many)included hiking down to the bottom of the Grand Canyon and back up; and to the top of Grandfather Mt. and some of the Appalachian trials and everything in between!America is awesome in its beauty!!!

I wish all a Happy New Year and Life!

2013-01-01
I read this and raised my glass-a toast to you and your wonderful writings! HAPPY NEW YEAR ESPECIALLY TO YOU, STAN!

2012-12-31
Thank YOU very much, Country Fog. I meant to add an author's note that if you have ever eaten a pine nut seed, depending on variety, it can be either bitter or sweet. The brown seeds that come from the variety that grows near the Grand Canyon is sweet and delicious...My experiences are both literal and metaphor......HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU and ALL!

2012-12-26
Belated wishes of good will to you, Ken, and to all mankind. ~hugs

2012-12-24
Reading your work always always brings a chuckle to my day.

2012-09-23
True. But it is that determined effort to smile that brings on the genuine...such is the potential of the magical power of the smile.

2012-09-10
I love this. Gives my heart a chuckle. :)

2012-08-22
Why all the doom and gloom? Liberals claim that this is the conservative agenda. I assure you, it is not and if you truly believe this,IMHO, you have been deceived.

2012-08-22
And you are exactly right, Countryfog.
Thank you, Editorial team. :)

2012-08-20
What nation would that be, Ken? Many lies going around these days, ya know.

2012-02-03
How can we not relate to this? You always have a way with words that touches and connects to others in an easy flow of rhythm so pleasing, even if the message/content is not so pleasing...I have missed reading your work. Hope all is well with you.

~Mel

2012-02-02
Wonderful! I too, admire you and your work. Once again, thankyou, Stan!

~Mel

2011-12-08
funny ......the flow was impeccable....
.........it makes me chuckle as I drink from the mug of muddle,

lol

2011-12-03
I love this! (sorry, I am short on words today)

2011-07-27
I wish I could lose myself within this beautiful setting, painted with words. Excellent writing, my friend. I enjoyed this immensely.

2011-06-28
And Love IS so universal, that anyone that knows love will understand these words more than instinct. Your words caught my eye and held me. I love what you have written and the way you expressed it. Thank you so much for sharing it.