Arunesh dixit

2016-05-31
How much we know about God?

2016-05-05
Very good use of spectrum to picture a failure and humiliated character. I agree with Ashe and also would like to see how a success and jubilation can be pictured in this manner. Good one.

2016-03-03
Heart leapt and those five minutes of trance are very well narrated and gives the reader a sense of joy and awesomeness. Fantastic work ....

Regards,

2016-03-03
Very inspirational. Thank you.

Arunesh

2016-02-26
this poem is fresh and radiates the gratitude in a unique way.

2016-02-12
Very cutely penned the pain. Separation and memories after are always the best subjects to express and you have done it uniquely.

Arunesh

2016-01-07
Four letters of Love !!! Four Eyes join to make Love !!! Two bodies and two souls merge together and make Love!!!
This "Love" diminishes all numbers and becomes One. Ideal case. Good thought and nice poem.

Arunesh

2015-12-23
Fantastic Pony. I am almost 20 years back after reading this Poem. This work which makes a reader feel younger, is absolute beauty.

Regards,
Arunesh

2015-12-23
In 4 lines you expressed the philosophy of life. Objective of a whole human life is in it !!!!


Regards,
Arunesh

2015-12-23
You expressed the happening around us very well. Nicely written Ken. It was sweet and expressive.

Arunesh

2015-11-04
Extremely romantic.

2015-10-05
You can't compare and shouldn't be compared. This depends upon selflessness.

2015-09-09
Nice one. It tells one version. Other versions are also there and should be respected if they are loving and compassionate and help someone towards bliss.

2015-09-07
Cute, honest and a sensitive girl with her surroundings and with a camera in her brain that converts pictures into words. Beautifully described. Smoothly flown...

Regards,

2015-09-07
Good one. History never dies and never a History.. it is future... :)

2015-09-03
This is very subtle and the images are coming out clearly. A nice poem.

2015-09-01
At the start of poem, "No one loves you" and at the end - "cannot hear anyone say"I love you" ", This is very puzzling and a complete turning of plot. I can see there is a point that being lonely and thinking that no one loves me, makes a person callous. eventually over the time the person is completely unable to hear those three words, even if someone says that. The poem is about how loneliness kills the emotions. Beautifully written.

2015-09-01
Really, anything for those little eyes and tiny fingers.. :) Nice poem.

2015-09-01
such scenes create impressions on mind.. which give joy for long. :) There must be someone at the base of ladder, may be the younger brother or sister holding the ladder.. :)

2015-08-31
Very mystical. Is that Moon? Vaporous in morning, lovingly haunting the world of words and music, lives way up north, and a dream to be realized. Nice metaphors, if I relate it to moon... though there may be more relates to this Ghost... Good one.

2015-08-28
Ashe's belief and your belief are not different. One is talking the open eye's dream (Ashe) and one is talking simple dream (you). But both are talking about dreams.
God is not for relieving pain or giving paradise or favoring someone.... When you say God, then you must say "I-lessness" and Ashe' you can take that Condition as Godly and absolute "I-less" being is the only God, which is not possible in this age of Kali. God is neutral, it is not going to help or harm anyone. But, "seems" to favor those who has Love and Devotion. In that sense, we also say Love is God, or Truth is God. So, God is similar to as Love or Truth do not care if some hater is getting hurt or liar is getting punished. They have to stuck to their rules. Hence, God is just for some and "Un"just for some.
Someone dying with cancer or a little kid is dying or ailing with cancer – it has nothing to do with God. It is the simple chemistry of our chemical bodies. Some have good compositions and others not. It is result of Karma, which is nothing but our consciousness for others. We believe in rebirth and souls (even there are lot of evidences for this and science is mum as they can't do it in a lab). Similar rules applied to Accident or any unfortunate event with someone. These are all bound by Law of Nature and Law of Karma. These two laws cannot be escaped.
God's existence is questioned? - For this you need to change the concept of God first. Then you will find God is everywhere, only our perception is incorrect. Everything in the creation is "I-less", and hence God, so we can say God is all-pervading. Only living beings having Karma bound consciousness, and lose the grip of state of "I-lessness" and hence lose God or even Discard the existence of that being / state in extreme cases. Regarding Paradise, so I can say as per my discussions of thousand years old sacred books and millions of Rishis, Sages, that it is in Heart, when you achieve the supreme Blissful Love to reside there forever, if, Karma are completely burnt and soul is free to happily reside with "I-lessness". You may refer to some literature from oriental/Indian thoughts/philosophy on this.

2015-08-25
Very charming and motivating. This is a good work.

- Arunesh

2015-08-24
This is the poem where various symbols are telling their stories with different moods and scenes. Almost all are good, but I'll go with mr. anno for sketching out delicate, innocent feelings of a younger bro through toys.. and then "I hate to draw conclusions".. :)

Regards,
Arunesh

2015-08-24
Clear steps for a happier life. Thanks for posting this. ... :)

2015-08-21
An intelligent example of Bed-space management, said through a poem. nice job .. pony.

Arunesh

2015-08-21
Well done Mr. Ken. You have spoken for a brave man in an elegant way. "Murdering a man is not an argument, it is really accepting defeat. But religions don't believe in dialogues, they believe in murder, in the sword—that is their argument. To me, it is their defeat. – OSHO

And you have voiced Al Asaad loud here.

Regards,
Arunesh

2015-08-20
It depends, Mr. Ken. A nice question, albeit. Creation is always out of Love, and miscreation is out of Chaos. But and absolutely, we should believe them as creationist. I think this question can only be asked only this way. :)

-Arunesh

2015-08-20
Thank you for sharing such a picturesque poem. While reading I could feel all the events in front of me running like a movie. Great piece of creativity.

Regards,
Arunesh Dixit

2015-08-19
This is strong and you have emerged as Superhero in a bit by voicing this cause. Nicely written..

Regards,
Arunesh

2015-08-19
Aah.. you have said that many feel afraid to say.. "The first Atheist".... And you exactly got the Namaste - "The divine in me recognizes the divine in you."... and .. "Bow to your divinity".. Well done.

Regards,
Arunesh

2015-08-19
Loved this. "torture our hearts to soothe our greed".. true...

Regards,
Arunesh

2015-08-18
The truth is not only which we see running, the truth needs to be understood from the point when the preparation for running was started and how the system was made running. Darwin only looked at the system which is running. Science only sees the system which is before eyes and makes assumptions of past events and extrapolates the future based on present. Both are not telling the truth in Totality. Truth should be told from the beginning till the end. No science, so far, can do that.

However, the flow of the poem is quite different and good.

Regards,
Arunesh Dixit

2015-08-14
Very nice.

Arunesh

2015-08-14
High intensity poem and lovely too. OSHO once said - "It is very easy to kill a Gautam Buddha. Any idiot can do it, in fact, only an idiot can do it. But that does not prove that the idiot's idea of religiousness is correct, nor does the death of a Gautam Buddha prove that Buddha's philosophy is wrong."

~Arunesh

2015-08-12
Excellent. Honest picture of modern life. We must pray for having more Human ingredients rather than to be robotized.

-Arunesh

2015-07-28
The interjection has brought a bliss when two converge to become One. Very well communicated in your poem. And, the silence is also loudly spoken. Smoothly flowing from beginning to end and made a "V"ortex of thoughts afterwards....

Regards,
Arunesh Dixit

2015-07-27
Animals to humans - all are same at 3:30 !!! Good one.

2015-07-27
Romance is at its peak in this poem. Very beautiful.

Regards,
Arunesh

2015-07-21
Hi Emma, As this is about your friend, I can say you have voiced him in a very loud manner here. Nicely written.

2015-07-21
true. It is like uncertainty principle if we try to measure it, we lose it.

2015-07-21
"If you know" ... this is the main point. And, this is where almost all fails. Rest is a matter of elevated souls.

2015-07-21
nice poem and a projecting good picture of earth and life relation which created some great things.

2015-07-20
Albert is looking nice and likable, but as Ashe's says he may become a danger if not being heard. However, people like Albert are needed to keep everyone on their duties.

2015-06-30
Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing with everyone. Your poem started with life's challenges and then at the end it is finished in a positive tone.

2015-06-17
very touching. Mothers are directly from God.

2015-05-21
Masterpiece.

2015-05-21
True depiction of writers situation. Good to read.

2015-05-19
subtle transition from march to walk... a good transition from bondage to freedom. Good one.

2015-05-14
Beautifully drawn picture with words. Good one.