| Lesson 28
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2024-11-03
Oh My! still at it. Lesson 28.
a beautiful glass....and your poems are stained glass.
Amazingly unfiltered.
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| lin
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2024-11-03
Ha ha ha
Awesome and so well said, my cognizant friend.
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| THE POTENTIALITY
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2024-10-12
Yes, i get it. When its a different world we are inhabiting, one keeps wondering about whats ahead, the other worlds, the possibilities of them! An enchanting poem, indeed Allen.
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| A REALLY GOOD FEELING
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2024-08-28
ohYes! Simple joy of having a good time and then writing about it to safekeep it or just spend it away, one more time.
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| REVELATION
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2024-08-22
Pl tell us more. thanks
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| She Goes To Work In The Morning
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2024-08-20
Wow! Such an awesome job profile!
of both!! Beautiful
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| Someday
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2024-08-20
How do i appreciate this one. Its very nicely put- saying as it is and giving me perspective as how it really is. To let go to be.
Cant ignore and cant praise. Just debate and may be accept and respect but i cant and I wont.
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| morning crows
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2024-08-16
"the sky lightens with dawn" sounds and looks so beautiful. A lovely evocation of a memory.
The last two lines contain the entire philosophy of life. So sweetly,said.
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| DO DIABETICS HAVE SWEET DREAMS
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2024-08-14
ha ha ha ...Good one!
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| IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT
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2024-08-13
Beautiful beyond words and still to see it and feel it with your words. Transformational words, Allen.
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| Life's like that
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2024-08-13
ha ha True
said in such an unassuming but amusing manner.
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| ENDLESSLY
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2024-08-13
Aha!
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| Lesson 18
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2024-08-12
yes, This is so beautiful that its also tragic. This poem tugs on your heart. How well you have drawn the ache out, that its not painful but beautiful.
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| starts with t ends with i
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2024-08-08
Beautiful. such pathos and such a lyrical easy style.
loved it- "they approximate reality i say the reality was never that tidy". Need to read this many times to vibe with it.
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| masquerade
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2024-08-08
Yes, very well diagnosed and perfect treatment.
This poem says it all. To keep the senses sharp and response dull.
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| Lesson 15
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2024-08-05
An emblem of despair but one, which will be redeemed.
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| Lesson 16
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2024-08-05
Wow! A truly scintillating one
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| Lesson 14
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2024-08-03
Now, this one is so you, Sameen
A powerful, poem indeed
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| Letters Never to Be Sent : Mother
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2024-08-03
Oh! Dear
what do i say to you. You have already said so much, I am still processing. Do it your way, is what i d say, i guess. Absolutely your way and no one else's.
Take Care
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| PIXELS IN THE MIST
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2024-08-02
Ah! the feeling
beautiful, indeed
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| Lesson 10
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2024-07-31
yes! the heartbreak is something tender and warm from something- gone cold.
"wait for pain to settle"- How does one do that, ever?
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| Lesson 11
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2024-07-31
Ah! Beautiful
This is so so beautiful
Finally!!
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| Passing
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2024-07-25
yes quietude and such silence.
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| Lesson 4
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2024-07-24
oh my! Such a beautiful read, Almost leisurely i also flipped through stanza, floating over each image. A masterpiece.
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| summer pasture
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2024-07-24
I have always known what Sameen has just said.
Beautifully composed, Otp.
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| Lesson 2
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2024-07-22
oh my!
This is the most beautiful discovery of a gem.
Thanks for being there and writing here.
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| GAPS PERVADING
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2024-07-21
I love the way, this poem has been written. Its like a peek a boo of your memories, each worth dweling upon for some more time but i loved the show, Allen!
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| midnight
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2024-07-21
Ah! isnt that beautiful.
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| The origin of the text message
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2024-07-21
Ha ha cool.
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| Holding Up
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2024-07-21
this poem is saying so many things, without really saying it. Amazing!
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| Lesson 1
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2024-07-21
Aha! Wow! an enchanting poem, indeed.
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| Lion
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2024-07-21
Oh! Sad, very sad.
I dont know now, how to appreciate the pace and mystery of the poem, especially after reading your headnote. From high to low- a true roller coaster of a poem, keeping me on the edge. Thanks for sharing, IB M.
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| her name is lin
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2024-07-20
Yes, Indeed. How mysteriously adventurous is this?
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| Friend
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2024-07-19
ha ha ha Cool
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| R.I.P. F.i.in.e Moods (1989-2024)
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2024-07-18
Hey congratulations and welcome, IB M.
Beautifully said that all is well.
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| Calling Horses
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2024-07-18
Oh yes! Lofty indeed.
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| WHERE'S MY RHYTHM OF MY RHYTHMS
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2024-07-18
Rest assured! This one sure has your famous rhythm.
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| The 21st Day of Afterwords
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2024-07-18
Your last stanza moves like a song. I could hear the music of your togetherness.
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| The 21st Day of Afterwords
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2024-07-18
Oh dear
Thanks for sharing this one- your eulogy and requim for your beloved cat. I can barely imagine this for today only i was very happy pampering my two year old Shih tzu, Heidi to whom i am very grateful to have come into my life precisely when my son is growing into an fircely independent young adult. She is helping me big time in tiding over this transition.
A beautiful composition, befitting the stature of your king.
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| Fourteen More Lines on Whisky
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2024-07-16
what a pleasure it is to read and write about Whisky. One of my fav poets has even composed a song on it.
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| hydrology
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2024-07-15
oh Yes!
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| stepping out
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2024-07-05
Yes, Indeed. This poem is saying more than it is stating to say. thank you for this reminder in sweet harmless oblivion- the sheer carelessness to it and how much it could irk people, which they might also find attractive. But more than others, how good it sometimes feels. To be blissfully Oblivious. Charming, it indeed it.
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| kafka's klip & kurl
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2024-07-05
Aha! Beautiful Style, otp
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| tsundoku
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2024-06-22
oh yes! same here and thank you for this validation. I just like to feel that these books are trees and i live in a forest.
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| no pain, no gain
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2024-06-22
Oh so beautiful!
the last line does its job well and its so true.
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| Gates of Ill
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2024-06-22
Well said!
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| There is Nothing Reconciling
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2024-06-22
Oh! so sad, the last stanza and salute to your magnificent Gunwald.
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| WHAT IS LEFT?
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2024-06-22
Thanks for this one. i will be careful.
and what a beautiful relationship you had with her. lovely.
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| FAKEFUCKKILLYOURSELF.JPG
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2024-06-05
i see a beginning here. i like the analogy of moth chasing dim lights. what a way to say it. Beautiful blue birds is a grand vision. lovely.
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| Guts and Glory at 28
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2024-06-05
yeah! Life is not always an arena, sometimes its a trek. Happy Belated Birthday
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