| I Have A Crack Where A Crack Shouldnt Be by M.A.Meddings
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2008-01-10
haha, good wit in a very bouncy form.
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| Wishes
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2007-09-07
that was amazing. i liked the line "innocence committed suicide at his touch" it struck me especially. this is really good, arti. i feel connected to it.
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| "We are the winds of change..."
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2007-08-09
it's a poem that's carved into the earth... i like it.
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| First Date (co-write with Lastromantichero)
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2007-08-09
sweet, kathy. glad to see things are well with you.
z
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| Can't Say/Can Say
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2007-08-08
cool.
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| Sunday Chapel Romancing by M.A.Meddings
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2007-08-08
inspiring... it's been a while, poet. i'm glad i found myself reading this.
z
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| she makes him like her
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2007-05-05
i like it, i like it alot. brilliant write on romance, rob.
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| In The Warmth of You
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2007-03-27
i like the poetic effect and strength it has on me that you put enchantment on its own line. it has a very good rhythm to it. good job, kathy. it seems like a lot of the bay is feeling love in the spring season.
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| In Your Black Hour Of Need
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2007-03-27
very good write here, compassionate.
z.
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| Cherished by M.A.Meddings
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2007-03-26
beautiful, is the only word i can come up with that meekly equates to the warm feeling i have inside after reading this poem. wonderful.
z.
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| Annoying Telephone Frustration[Tanka]
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2007-03-26
too true. when i speak to foreign friends, it happens a lot. you are quite expressive in such a short poem, good job.
z.
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| Barefoot Days, Green Grass Ways
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2007-03-26
i like it. i like it a lot.
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| For you I feel
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2007-03-26
it's been a while, malin. i like this write, a lot. i've missed you, how are things?
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| As You Sublimely Captured Me by M.A.Meddings
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2007-03-16
what a true thought here... quite the clever writer on love, michael. you definitely are a hero.
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| The Tulips All Have Died.
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2007-03-09
that's a beautiful thought - how that moment lives and changes and dies... i think now i know, before i couldn't fully understand your poetry, because i hadn't experienced death or loss. this is really good.
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| Here You Are. Here I Am. Here We Were.
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2007-03-09
this is excellent... i loved it. the brokenness of it all just seems so humane. really good.
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| Testosterone Antics by M.A.Meddings
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2007-03-08
haha.. how clever and witty. excellent job.
z.
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| Alive by M,A.Meddings
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2007-03-08
how alive you are indeed - excellent write, michael.
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| Only the Strong
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2007-03-06
i like this... i gather strength from it. good write, betsy.
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| Confession by M.A.Meddings
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2007-03-04
a beauteous write, michael.
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| When You Look At Me Like That
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2007-03-04
how clever and true. good job, kathy.
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| Broken
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2007-03-01
breaking away from the molds society gives us is necessary to be able to find who we are...
wonderful write, sara.
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| things go wrong.
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2007-02-25
things go wrong, when we try to be truthful. i wish people could really see.
good write, sara.
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| Amaretto di Amore
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2007-02-10
i like amoretto, it's strong though, fiery going down. although, technically, i shouldn't know that...
i hope you're not running from anything and just enjoying in small doses? i used to do the former, so i can empathize if you are.
good poem, z.
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| Needless to say. . .
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2007-02-08
it's such a beautiful song... good job on the poem, it reflects your inspiration well.
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| WORDS
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2007-01-29
ghalib's couplet must have been amazing to have inspired such thought and art, i want to read that now.
good job.
z.
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| Awaken your Senses
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2007-01-29
i can imagine this... i like it, arti, i like it a lot.
hope all is well where you are.
z.
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| After Tea by M.A.Medding
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2007-01-29
you remember the way it could be, but i think that is the way it should be. on sundays remeber to breathe, dear friend. i'm so entranced by this, bookmarked.
z.
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| Mignonette
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2007-01-20
i cry out, thanks for awareness.
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| Oceanspanning Haiku
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2007-01-20
i can imagine it.
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| She was drinking a beer. . .
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2007-01-19
wow, i like it. quite realistic.
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| Heartstream
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2007-01-18
wondrous. it kept my blood pumping.
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| Sentimental
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2007-01-17
i think your linguistic skills are excellent, and your grasp at life enviable.
but i'm just a kid.
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| I am an Island
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2007-01-13
i know the feeling all too well. don't fall under, breathe.
z.
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| A Celestial Fountain
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2007-01-13
i think i have eternal youth, what an amazing fountain indeed.
what art.
z.
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| wingless
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2007-01-12
i see a broken spirit in the midst of the wing shards.
good one - z.
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| annotation
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2007-01-11
such subtext, but bluntly stated. thank you for the footnote, i wish more people in the world read it... hard times these are.
z.
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| Heart failure
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2007-01-11
hope this is release so that you start feeling better.
i worry.
z.
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| Sleet Parade
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2007-01-09
there's more to it than that, i think...
excellent write, caila. you always captivate me - z.
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| Darkened Soul
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2007-01-09
soothing. hope the friend does better.
z.
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| And Who Is Cooking Your Breakfast Now? by M.A.Meddings
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2007-01-09
if time will allow
i could besmirch
a name like chance
but chances are meant to be taken, seen, live...
excellent as always - z.
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| This Love by M.A.Meddings
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2007-01-08
i come back from a sebattical to sweetly soothing bliss. excellent michael.
z.
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| eclectic epiphany
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2007-01-07
twas such a write. beautiful and magical and alive.
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| A few of my favourite things..
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2007-01-07
what an excellent idea, here you are madame:
running around outside in a thunderstorm, dancing and kissing with your love.
painting on an afternoon day, and allowing yourself to create something.
the rare "amazing song" that epitomizes everything you believe and care about.
nice naps under shady trees in the warm summer.
snow angels, hot chocolate, and of course reading by the fireplace.
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| Poor Ophelia...
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2007-01-06
i feel like i've lived this, making it more than shakespeare, but life. i think that's what you're getting at. how abstract. - z.
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| Trivial Flare-Ups
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2007-01-06
so real. i like it. long time no read, what goes down under caila?
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| Humanity
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2007-01-06
we all know we're going to die, but none of us believe it. profound.
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| Only for YOU
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2007-01-06
long time no read. excellent as always though.
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| Standing Ovation
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2007-01-05
reminds me of something i lived once... intriguing sense of deja vu.
nice to read you again - z.
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| Internet relationships - DEBATE: For or against & Why?
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2007-01-05
love is a hard thing. a hard thing to work out, a hard thing to maintain, an emotion, nonetheless. a relationship, can be passionate, intimate, secret, distant, dead, alive, loving, hateful, and it can be a relationship.
i have some pros and cons, and hope you don't hate me for staying neutral on this one, liz.
first: getting to know my friends over here on the bay or on other websites, i've really had good conversations that stick out from other conversations that may be awkward to inspire in real life... and i enjoy thinking, imparting thoughts ideas beliefs, it's all inspiring to me. and i think i've maintained a lot of my friendships with these people by talking online and such, and it's worked. and also know this: a relationship can be platonic, not just romantic. that meaning that these relationships do work, friendship, platonic ones.
next: like i was saying, love is hard. it's complex, and hard to maintain in a "romantic relationship." however, it's not impossible. i would say being able to connect over the internet is a good thing to stay in touch, but a complete connection over the internet just seems really difficult. but man seemed to find a way to fly, so i'm sure man can find a way to make relationships work over the net. just a question though, how do you know any of it's real? you don't, and that's scary.. trust is major in a relationship, and if you can hardly trust them, well it's not real.
that's my piece. thank thomas for telling me about this, and thanks for the excellent debate topic.
z.
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