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2024-11-20
Now I think it is a very nice vignette
what are your influences in poetry ?
never dared to ask you before
I felt it when I read the last line
sounded very author-like
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| Lesson 48
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2024-11-20
very complicated for me but I can sense the beauty in it
I feel that I miss something here
cheers!
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| The Evangelist
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2024-11-20
in one way, one would say that in order to share the same faith you have to give allegiance to the same G-d?
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| Archeology of Understanding
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2024-11-19
Fleeting glimpses of understanding
all is abstract in this phrase
my opinion is that your poem is very out-of-reach but not mindless at all. The word I would use mostly is ethereal
like we were in space...floating in spirit, it mades me scared a bit couldn't grasp handles
very beautiful thank you
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| Lesson 46
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2024-11-19
you fly in high skies...
Being is a trap made me want to know more about your Lesson 46,
because for quite a lot of people, it means everything like if we were living in an ocean of Being
what is lighter, the dreams or the sand? good questions raised here
thank you !
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| Lesson 45
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2024-11-19
I am not used to manipulate the concepts behind the evil just that if you add a "d" it makes devil... sometimes I think it is very overrated because of his lack of definition...
I've enjoyed your Lesson 45 as usual
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| With Rain
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2024-11-19
I deviated from that part
Existence is cartesian...
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| Ultracrepidarian Twattling.. (Obsolete words Challenge)
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2024-11-18
what I feel about me is that
random thoughts follow unconscious patterns
only by learning well established poets
you might elevate yourself
otherwise you stir into the same pot
that's how I feel about me
trying to find my path in the dark
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| Lesson 44
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2024-11-18
I like your profound voice
strong like a good coffee
the opening lines are a trigger
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| The right to write right...
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2024-11-18
somehow, we have to build the paradises and not just imagine us there happier!
with a fixed idea, with a final goal, you may be disappointed when arriving at your destination
between the destination and the road, one has to choose or maybe not, to take both
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| Lesson 43
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2024-11-17
Love made a man of me. And the girl?
I like this very much, and the full stop too
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| Our First and Final Date
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2024-11-16
I remember a guy always inviting for dining beautiful and quite dumb ladies, hoping for their favors
once, he went into a fine restaurant
and she ordered a sandwich
exactly what you said
and the butler was smiling in his beard
it is something that has passed through the oceans
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| C O N T A G I O U S ;
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2024-11-15
it is a mode of conquest
we are its conquistadors
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| Lesson 41
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2024-11-15
some epic images
unusual images brought together
I once walked through buildings and buildings
it gives a sense of smallness
the Earth shall shake like...dogs with fleas!!
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| The Greatest Show on Earth
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2024-11-15
all their personal info got prompted out of AI, they're wondering how Trump became president!
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| Evergreen
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2024-11-15
smoke a joint and articulate when you puff
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| don't know what to do with this !
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2024-11-14
actually abstract used at the end of this text is not the right word, it is very concrete indeed...
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| Lesson 39
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2024-11-14
maybe we relive in bugs....and as bugs, we know it!
May be before June
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| Potato Time Travel
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2024-11-13
Hi,
potatoes originated from Peru...they were brought to Europe and they were used to combat major famines
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| Lesson 38
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2024-11-13
if you don't do it for yourself
at least, do it for Jesus !
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| I AM LOOKING FOR A PENNY BY ANN WOOD
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2024-11-11
go to penny lane (wink)
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| my daily dose of humanity
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2024-11-11
love who conveys life conveys death (the virus AIDS)
are you phishing? or fishing?
whoever comes here and comment will make the deal
you lack of self-esteem!
try to find a comforter, realize that you were born alone and that you shall die alone
have a nice week!
Albert
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| Note on the Refrigerator
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2024-11-10
learn how to be patient, go fishing !
I think patience can also reveal how powerless one can be
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| 2008
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2024-11-09
the price of goods always grows faster than the wages
it makes people sustain the pace
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| Lesson 33
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2024-11-09
some don't like surprises!
personally I prefer to have some good friends who are unpredictable and some "bad" friends predictable
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| That Old Crooked Cross
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2024-11-08
she is not racist, she overreacts the fact that everybody must be jewish
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| 2008
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2024-11-08
and if wages increase, employers have to pay more their employees, this is also reflected in the rising price of products
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| Joe Biden Speaks
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2024-11-08
watching on the streets staring at your feet you see the puddle that reflects the stars!
White House: Trump has emphasized the word white rather than "house"
white flat (appartement), flat white (coffee)
all this happen at a moment when the civilisation undergoes great changing in technology, it's how I sense it
to be honest, I am a bit scared of the times coming !
the world is moving
the stars are staring
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| A Fragile Hope
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2024-11-06
How can you hate so much your country and its citizens just because they voted for Trump ?
but I think I can understand your feeling...you feel trapped, you can't move away, you are stucked in a difficult situation and you watch it coming slowly with no way to escape
a big fascist tsunami
America is a land of contrasts, the country holds the best universities with some underdeveloped areas
Trump represents a man against the system that he will probably topple over and break off
it will be a Rodeo for 4 years
who knows what will happen...
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| Lesson 31
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2024-11-06
yes, probably that love doesn't need explanations
it is something that you understand while living it ?
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| A Call to Action
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2024-11-06
he was ready to shamble and ramble his own country for the sake of being president
he said "no wars"
I am curious of that
he doesn't grant his fellow Americans of high esteem
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| Ugly and Horrifying, but not Unexpected
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2024-11-06
it will be rodeo drive after the swing states
he got all locked up in a golf course
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| What’s more important?
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2024-11-06
most of the time, you are not in charge of your moments except when you are an actor, you recreate the world on stage
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| Lesson 30
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2024-11-06
you master English so much better than I
I am almost jealous
keep your spontaneity...?
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| Nobody Likes a Toddler
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2024-11-06
they invented the babbling, the mother of all languages and perhaps the tower of Babel
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| Lesson 29
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2024-11-04
the fact that we can be one person with 2 languages on the same level makes it very interesting...men can do more than one thing at a time isn't it?
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| [naming the need]
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2024-11-04
it reads like a prayer
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| Lesson 27
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2024-11-04
being a monster and being scared to the point it freezes you...does it make some sense?
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| Lesson 28
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2024-11-03
I like your style, bare, harsh
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| Stop the clock...
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2024-11-02
mind doesn't let you too much thinking
I wonder now what kind of generation will provide the trend lgtbqia+ to the world, they have been in my opinion so vindicative to the older generations but that's my point of view!
I like them for the breeze of freedom that have been putting in this world
have I been clear? I am not sure...
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| Much Ado About Nothing
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2024-11-02
Trump only says half the truth to the Americans
he will not make war to a foreign country but well to America...?
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| Time to Live (renrhyme challenge)
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2024-11-01
made me think of Blade Runner, (was it intended?) and the famous reply followed by "time to die"
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| Lesson 24
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2024-11-01
you might get scared of yourself!
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| Lesson 25
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2024-11-01
I can't buy time from...G-d?
but I can buy your time
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| Realizing My Potential
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2024-10-31
well, I've heard some people telling that life was a burden, a war, a hindrance or even a game
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| Daydream
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2024-10-31
maybe your soul doesn't touch your body from the inside, who knows?
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| It's Time for Them to Leave the Nest
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2024-10-30
take the good part of it
at least, you may have learnt some bits of Japanese conversations
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| RACE! RACISM!
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2024-10-28
very good
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| Trump and Sarkozy
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2024-10-27
America appeared so divided !
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| The Lights Are On, but No One is Home
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2024-10-25
support the fascists is not enough to be looked after them
it is even not necessary
to be protected by the fascists, you must be like them, not think like them, it's not a political opinion, it's a state of being !
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