| Christmas Wish
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2010-12-17
Sometimes the greatest gift we can give at Christmas, is that of sharing ourselves with people who love us. It's not easy to please everyone at once, in fact...it's next to impossible. Although your heart is blue for that one TRUE love...take comfort in the fact that you have warmed the hearts of those who have hung the stockings. :-)
Merry Christmas.
Hugs,
Dee
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| Red Hats in an Organ Loft
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2010-12-17
What ??? Is there something wrong with NOT wearing knickers ??? LOL
Nice writing Elle !
Hugs,
Dee
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| Shhhhh.....
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2010-12-03
Wow !!! This is lovely !! I just love the way it flows so nicely. :-)
Hugs,
Dee
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| ...On the onset of white stuff
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2010-11-27
Ahhh yes...things are indeed looking white out there ! :-) I do believe I smell Christmas in the air...
Hugs,
Dee
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| Last Ferryboat
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2010-11-11
I love the lines...Twilight remembers...All the offenders...
There's a price to pay for everything we do...sometimes, if we're lucky...we get a second chance.
Nicely written.
Hugs,
Dee
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| For a Coat Pocket
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2010-11-11
Beautiful piece of truthful poetry. :-)
Hugs,
dee
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| Plastic Poppies
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2010-11-11
Kudos to you for saying it as it is.
Hugs,
Dee
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| Carried Away
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2010-10-22
One wonders...is love supposed to be cautious...careful...well thought out? No...I think not. Love...no matter how short...is meant to be that whirlwind that you have described.
Hugs,
Dee
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| The Girl
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2010-10-19
Adorable! I have seen myself in this poem, and I have seem one of my daughters in this as well. To those who march to the beat of their own drums, I say...go forth and conquer !! :-)
Hugs,
Dee
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| Stagnation
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2010-10-19
Surely one who writes such fine poetry cannot be stagnating? Nicely done...enjoyable read about where I have found myself, upon occasion, lately.
Hugs.
Dee
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| The Wake
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2010-10-19
Wow...You write this as though you are watching it all unfurl before your eyes. Kudos to you for packing so much emotion and intensity into so few words !!
Hugs,
Dee
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| Street Child
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2010-10-19
A very impressive poem. :-) I love the last line. It's awful when kids are forced to grow up too fast...and yet...it's far too common in some areas. :-(
Great topic to ponder.
Hugs,
Dee
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| Today Was Beautiful
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2010-09-30
LOL...I think the comment by you before your poem was precious and says it all. :-) It could have been awful, but it wasn't...and you savoured every minute of it. :-) Nice writing !
hugs,
Dee
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| Twenty years
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2010-09-17
What a beautiful, yet poignant love story...two people who were so close...and yet so far.
Nice poetry!
Hugs,
Dee
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| Bloom.
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2010-05-27
Wowza !!
Hugs,
Dee
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| Love living, living love.
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2010-05-27
Wow !! What a beautiful portrayal of love and life. Lovely !!
Hugs,
Dee
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| I Saw Her In The Shopping Mall
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2010-05-04
Don't you hate it when that happens ??! LOL I usually find that "Well hello Dahling !! You look absolutely magnificent !! Works quite well. Chances are they haven't a clue what your name is either !! LOL
Hugs,
Dee
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| Steak Pie
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2010-05-04
LOL...Clever once again ! I love your ability to spin a story into a pun.
Hugs,
Dee
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| With apologies to Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
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2010-05-04
LOL ! Love this one. Who knew that you could rhyme Alopecia with teacher ??!! LOL Very cool piece of poetry !1 Fun stuff to read !
Hugs,
dee
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| Grandpa's Ashes
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2010-05-04
LOL....Clever piece of poetry. Very witty.
Hugs,
Dee
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| Fairy Feet
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2010-05-03
Wow !! Love the surprise ending !!! Isn't it great that we can each escape our reality from time to time, if only for a brief moment ? :-) Nice writing !
Hugs,
Dee
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| Ghost on a Lonely Lane
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2010-02-25
Wow !! What a wonderfully crafted piece. You have such a vivid imagination. :-) Thank you for sharing it with us. :-)
Hugs,
Dee
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| A Warning to the Curious
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2010-02-17
Ohhh how the forbidden intrigues us ! :-) Wonderful piece ! A great Halloween poem !! :-)
Hugs,
Dee
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| The Haunted Wood
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2010-02-17
Lovely ! :-)
Hugs,
Dee
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| I Give Up!
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2010-01-27
Hey !! Good for you !!! You only think they're your friends...but they aren't. Very crearive...very enjoyable !
Hugs,
Dee
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| Before it's Too Late
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2010-01-27
This one is too close to home for me. I lost a friend two weeks ago, and hadn't had the chance to say goodbye... Regrets? Oh yes...there were a few.
Hugs,
Dee
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| I know you, you know me..
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2010-01-16
I love the line..."I will dance on the light of the moon"...beautiful !
Hugs,
Dee
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| Barnacles
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2010-01-16
This is fantastic ! I can actually see those poor lost souls on this sunken ship. Geat work!
Hugs,
Dee
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| This Poem Is Kind Of Silly
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2009-11-25
Sometimes...."silly" is a very good place to be !! :-) I like it !
Hugs,
Dee
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| WHEN WORDS ARE NOT READ
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2009-09-23
I never thought of it that way before ! Enjoyable !
Hugs,
Dee
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| FORGIVENESS
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2009-09-23
I really liked this poem. Although it may have been of a personal nature, you dared share it with the world. There are steps along the path to healing and the first is probably realizing that the drinking was in no way YOUR fault. Each of us controls our destiny to some extent. I'm sorry for your loss, sorry for your grief. Well written.
Hugs,
Dee
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| A feather on your pillow ( a cowrite by NSW + Kathy Lockhart)
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2009-09-09
Lovely piece that the two of you have written together ! Nicely done!
Hugs,
Dee
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| Not Catching You
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2009-08-23
Bittersweet....and lovely !! A very touching piece that I can find bits of myself in.
Hugs,
Dee
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| It's In Their Eyes
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2009-08-23
A very pretty piece of poetry. A gold star well deserved ! :-)
hugs,
Dee
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| Welcome
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2009-06-26
Oh sure...ya talk tough !! :-) I've glimpsed at most of your poems and notice a common theme... Intriguing poetry you write !
Hugs,
Dee
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| If I Could Write Like
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2009-06-10
Please do...keep writing...just like you !! :-) Your poems are awesome !
Hugs,
Dee
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| Sleepwalking
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2009-06-01
Elle,
Great poem. I think I lost almost a whole year in limbo...even still I find myself with moments of being off in my own little world, and not fully grounded to reality just yet. They tell me that eventually you find yourself again. :-)
Hugs,
Dee
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| Rwanda's Rue
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2009-05-22
Horror and anguish relived each and every day... I like the smooth flowing style of this poem.
Hugs,
Dee
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| Faithfool
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2009-05-22
The waiting to hear that voice can be painful...exhausting. Then...just when you thought that all hope was lost and even the memory of the voice had faded...there it is.... And you die all over again, with the anguish and knowledge that you never really ever had that bvoice in the first place...
Awesome piece !
hugs,
dee
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| I Close My Door
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2009-05-22
On those days when you are battle weary, I hope you find that inner strength to sooth your soul, regain your focus and continue on. You write very well and have a ton of talent, so please rest up for those battles (whatever they may be...), and continue writing with us.
Hugs,
Dee
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| First Star to the Right
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2009-05-22
A lovely piece. You paint the picture well, and I call almost see him sitting in his swing...waiting for that day when they will reunite. Nicely done.
Hugs,
Dee
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| Perfect For Me...
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2009-05-14
An emotionally difficult piece to write I think... As always...well done !
Hugs,
Dee
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| My Cleaning Lady
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2009-04-30
Perhaps you could send her my way... LOL My family is in need of tuning up...and unfortunately...they ignore me... :-)
Hugs,
Dee
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| Killing Kiln Time!
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2009-04-16
This sounds like lots of fun. If you created the pendant above your poem....it's beautiful !! :-)
Hugs,
Dee
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| Ode to facebook.
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2009-04-03
LOL...I don't know how I missed this superb piece before... Awesome !! It says it all ! I, use mine to show of family and vacation pics, to keep in touch with buddies far and near, and to while away the hours playing Lexulous or Chess, or perhaps the occasional jigsaw puzzle. Facebook is great, as long as we view it as entertainment. :-) Nicely written, loved the sense of humour !
Hugs,
dee
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| Your Not a Hero
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2009-03-10
This poem makes me wonder why you thought at one time that this person WAS a hero. Often we form images in our mind's eye, of the people we want to have around us. Sometimes they're family, sometimes they are friends, sometimes people we haven't even met yet. When reality confronts us, and causes us to question the images we have formed, it can be a painful process to accept. It doesn't mean that those people are any less great, they are just different from what we grew to expect of them. :-)
Hugs,
Dee
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| She Was Lightening, Then She Was Sunshine
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2009-03-10
Brilliant words ! Life IS too short to be spent on not living !! Excellent words from a wonderful 14 year old poet !! Bravo!
Hugs,
Dee
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| Wishes
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2009-03-10
I would wish that we all had soul mates...Just waiting for us to arrive.
Wow...for fourteen you sure are brilliant. I can't tell you how many times mnay of my thoughts have echoed your poem. You write very well. You say it like it is, you sepak your mind, and should be congratulated for that !! Great work ! Keep writing !
Hugs,
Dee
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| Bikini Bowling
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2009-03-09
LOL ! Yikes ! I can just picture this funny scene ! :-) Cute poem !
Hugs,
Dee
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| The Large Square Peg In The Little Round Hole
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2009-03-05
Bravo !! Excellent piece ! A similar dilemma is where a teacher refers to the "gifted kids" in the class, thuis making all others by default, feel not terribly brilliant at all...sad...but true. Teachers need to realize that each person carries in their DNA, different strengths and weaknesses. If only teachers could actually spend the time to build on those individual strengths of students ! :-)
Hugs,
Dee
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