| Crocodiles and Alligators
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2011-01-08
love it!!!
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| Music Written Classically
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2010-11-03
great poem, S.,....................
P.S. I find Claire de Lune one of the most sensual works ever
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| The Old Mans Proverbial Black Book
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2010-09-08
...I wouldn't bet on it....
Great stuff!!!
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| The smashed little sweetheart
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2010-09-08
love what you write, absolutely love it all................my favourite would be venetian whores, but no longer submitted, unfortunately..............
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| Seduction
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2010-05-04
....this reminds me of the Swan's Death....dunno why....but it's magical....
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| For The Hope Of Human-kind
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2010-03-02
...love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!, terrific end!!!!!!!!!...
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| ANOTHER SERPENT
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2010-02-01
....very nice....
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| Mad
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2010-01-31
...I know exactly what you are trying to say....I have the same"problem" in me , as well.....always rushing too fast in need to show everything I own, everything I am, to expose all my secrets, all my dreams.......and, as you know, the other party "unkindles" the fire and am left with a scar.....I don t think I ll ever change...am born to passionate for this world....
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| Our own fantasy in preference to someone else's
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2010-01-31
....terrific piece!!!
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| Chew The Fat
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2010-01-31
....brilliant, Coop, always make me smile!!!!!!!
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| fragment
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2010-01-14
...wonderful, short and precise...
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| The heart of my self
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2010-01-06
....this is amazing for me....... I have submitted my poem and afterwards not only saw the simmilar title to mine submitted below but that you talk of your metaphoric trees.........wow.......love you poem very much!!!!!.....
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| A woman is a planet
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2010-01-06
...love this magnificent metaphore....
xx
a woman
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| A poet's epitaph
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2010-01-05
....a modern Shakespeare, truly, so poetic and elevating...
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| A Joy if heaven is perpetually bright!
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2010-01-05
...and I cvould read this wonderful poem, perpetually, dear M....
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| I believe the sky is lit by wasps
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2009-12-22
....fantasy, the poem, fantastically written...
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| SO VERY MUCH AWAY FROM IT ALL
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2009-12-19
...oh, P. , I don't knowwhat ever inspired this piece, but it touches me deeply...thank you for letting me be aware that there are such feelings within others, or even in their artistic, subtle imagination...
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| Lentiginous Lady
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2009-11-09
...love this exquisite style of yours, wonderfuly written...
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| Conflict
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2009-11-09
....visible and palpable write...
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| Loving Purely
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2009-11-09
...how touching....no greater love than the one from the little ones...the purest, the biggest and the last love we have...
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| Be Patient With God
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2009-11-09
...beautifuly written and oh, so true...
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| The Ever Open Door
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2009-10-26
...what a wonderful story and invitation, It flows as fluently as the waters with the use of perfect, yet simple rhyme...
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| Pause Time
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2009-10-26
...the question we often ask our selves, and I've been yearning for that sci fi effect for years and finally have come to grounds and found my self wanting to be exactly where I am now...it s a liberating and elevating stuff, you know....good poem, thanks for sharing...
B
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| Cool Hands
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2009-10-26
...what a powerful hotness in cool...thanks for sharing...
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| when she walks
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2009-10-26
...greatly descibed, beautiful end...
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| Bad timing
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2009-10-26
....there's nothing more I could add after this thorough comment....beautifully written....
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| The Dance
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2009-10-23
...very moving, brilliantly expressed...
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| The Box
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2009-10-22
....don t you love to dwell in memories, even boxed ones, mysterious, painting the faces , the scenes, the words we once heard, the songs we once sang, resurecting our deceased, their love......where everything from back then seemed to be more powerful, more scenting than anything now....love this poem...
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| Lola
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2009-10-22
....love this, so precise and bearing the gravity...
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| Today's Technology
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2009-10-22
...amazingly you're right...thanks for sharing the relevation before patenting it...lol....love this little stuff...
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| This Drowning One - Triolet
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2009-10-22
...what a bitter sweet taste of weltschmerz there...beautiful writing...
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| Encore
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2009-10-22
...what a wonderful write, have reread this many times...
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| Dear Cupid...
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2009-10-21
...damn, girl, you re so good with your writing...
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| Sea of love
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2009-10-15
...if this doesn't win hearts , what does...
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| The most impossible equation
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2009-10-12
...I hear you, again....your poems have changed in a last 2 months, or less, can't know for sure... and I sencesed what you're writing about here.....this echoes a modern version of Nagid's laments(milder version and "approach" to love)...... you are a Ngaid that talks of love...love all your poems, elevating and morose or semi-morose ones...
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| Autumn
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2009-10-09
....and this is an exception, me writing two comments for one poem, but just can't stop reading it, such a marvelous stuff....thanks E. for creating this little miracle...
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| Think me...
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2009-10-06
...mdg., Heidi, I don t even know you and I m so proud of you, your writing...this is exquisite.....just continue and don t leave us dry minded...
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| Autumn
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2009-10-03
....WOW, E., this is my favourite of yours....really , really ove it....such a pleasure reading you....
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| Bottled Treasures
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2009-09-29
...beautifully expressed...we all do keep those somewhere in boxes of our memories...and relish in them while harn rains fall on us...
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| CLOSE TO HOME
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2009-09-29
...this reminds me of good ol' weltschmerz...enjying that inevitable mood...
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| Wuthering Heights
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2009-09-24
...you are so lucky to have such a wonderful soul shelter.....lovely, lovey poem....
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| HER PRAISE
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2009-09-24
....amen....wonderful contribution for your love....
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| Night & Day
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2009-09-22
...haunting piece...well written, S....
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| Night & Day
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2009-09-22
...haunting piece.....well written, S....
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| Pining
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2009-09-04
oh christian, christian, how true your words are...
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| Pining
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2009-09-04
...oh christian, christian, how I true your words are...
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