Dan Cederholm

2011-11-17
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Either poem or just a text I think its
wonderful thoughts good writing!!!

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2011-04-18
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Wonderfuel poem Kathy . . .
I specially love the end lines
that fullfill the poem!!!

Hugs, Dan

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2011-01-18
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Wonderful writing Zoya
all the best .. . Dan

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2010-02-02
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Oh Great 1 . . . and we all are
the clown inside and the clown
outside . . .

Hard to comment the text
beacuse I see myself in it

I love your Clownology!!!
*APLUDS and BOOKMAK*

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2010-01-31
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Hey Zoya this one is out of reach*


it touch me so much girl!!!


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2010-01-31
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A good Questtion M8
'Great 1 Aplauds!!!

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2010-01-03
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Good text Micky very existential
questions . . . life is a long stribe
and nothing is giving . . .
exept the life we have!!

*applauses*

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2009-11-29
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Hahahaha . . . you are one of a kind
a poem that wont disapear!!!

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2009-11-29
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Well done Stan, and the picture
of the text (LOL) we dont fire him
we let him go . . . LOL superb
this is goofy-isms

*APPLAUDS*

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2009-11-27
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Oh Man I laugh so much when
I read this one: Superb!!!

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2009-01-30
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Thanks for sharing your sorrow with us
this poem is very strong and have very
good rhyming!

*APPLAUD*

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2009-01-17
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Wonderful poem Kathy!!!
I love all of the stanzas and the
combination of life, time and
pieces extracting with the words
of water, earth, wind and the fire
from the heart . . .

A sort of cosmic wind carrier . . .

Well thats how I read and think
this beautiful love letter!

*APPLAUD*

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2009-01-09
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Hehehe is this from the muddy banks
well if you collect them all you got much
Alligator skin boats and a Davy Crockett
hat and then you can agitate . . .

with a harpoon in your hand . . . LOL ;)

Funny stuff here I enjoyd the reading!
*APPLAUSES*

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2009-01-04
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Hehehe this whas a clever one
the last stanzas hits hard!!!

*APPLAUD*

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2009-01-04
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My try to the contribution to an
Royal stanza constructed as a
terza rima and two couplets

a-b-a
b-b
c-c

I don't think its perfect but
I have give it a good try and
it was really fun!

Thanks Nep!

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2008-12-21
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A GREAT CHALLENGE FROM A GREAT TEAM!

THANKS TO YOU!!!

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2008-12-19
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oH MY oH MY sTAN

What can I say lovely and I think
the writers on poetbay are truly
writers I can only tell what I know
on the Swedish site there are lots
of turbulence if you know what i say!

*APPLAUDS*

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2008-12-19
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Wow some wonderful rhyming here
and I think Budweiser use the horse
(Clydesdale) as a mascot . . .
Clydesdale is a very rare horse
there aint so many left!!!

So your poem have a monumental
status of all living creatures who is
slowly dying out . . .

and the rattlesnake , please don't
let it out the are going insane if
you keep one in your home!!!

Wonderful poem NSW I like it A LOT!

*bookmark and APPLAUD*


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2008-12-17
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Hehehe . . . this was funny . . .

HO - HO - HO

*APPLAUSES*

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2008-12-13
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Verry good (gummisnodd) as a
JoJo . . . the words goes on and
on . . .

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2008-12-06
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I think this is a good idea and take
away that old uggly pictures up in
the right corner and replace them
with peoples exhibitions . . .

its on time now, not a day too late!!!
We have to profile poetbay and change
some things a little stepp at time beacuse
poetbay looks like the Swedish poeter.se
to much . . . we have to create poetbay
not the sister site of old poeter.se!

I think that if we can do that if the site is
going to grove . . . and it should be a great
thing if we could handle videos on the site
beacuse we are living in a media age and
it is not so hard to make it work out!!!

Oh and why could we not se whos
been on my page any more???

Lets make poetbay to be a place for
groving and creation

All the best to the hard working team!

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2008-12-01
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I love your point of wiew here Chris
and terror is and never going to be
something that people look up for
I think Ghandis anti violence is better
when they have killed us all are they
going to kill each other after that . . .?

*APPLAUSE*

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2008-12-01
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Muahahahaha hihihihehehe - - - ;)))

I think aWood chuck could chuck
12 old oaks and 9 god helthy Redwood
and after that the Wood Chuck going
to sleep under the Mullberry bush till after
New years evening . . . zzzzzzzzZZZZzzzzzz
oh by the way his name is Chuck!!!

*APPLAUS*

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2008-11-12
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Great poem my friend . . .

Look at the november sky
and made a Blue Blues
out of this . . .

*APPLAUDS*

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2008-10-25
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"Come on baby light my fire"
with Doors it sounds tahat it is
the song after above . . .

or INXS "Beds are burning" . . .
hehehe . . .

real nice work here with the blues girl!

*APPLAUSES*

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2008-10-02
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I realy like this text, it have
something new, refrhesing
in the stanzas and the words
and the lazy feeling . . .

I think you have realy fun when
you write and I se the joy!!!

All the best, Dan

*APPLAUSES*

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2008-10-01
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This is outstanding
good and wonderful
poetry Kathy . . .

a giving heart and a
vounerable soul
Thanks for your wonderful
sharing wordsmy friend!

*APPLAUSES*

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2008-10-01
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This poem is outstanding great!
I love it . . . the words . . . the
touch of the thoughts . . .

*APPLAUSES and BOOKMARK*

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2008-09-06
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Hot, hot HOT is this hehehe

*APPLAUSES*

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2008-09-06
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Thanks Phyllis I just need this
one . . .

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2008-09-01
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Wonderful reading my friend
I love the short form in this text
and there is no word to much

*APPLAUSES and BOOKMARKED*

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2008-09-01
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Wonderful beauttiness in the arms
of L I F E

*APPLAUSES*

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2008-08-31
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WoW this is wonderful Zoya
I have looked at this mystery
many times and wonder if it is
someone who is speaking to me

Thanks for the words my friend

*APPLAUSES*

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2008-08-31
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Hahaha . . .
wonderful girl, wonderful!!!

*LOL*

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2008-08-23
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My dearest friend I guess you
never stop writing . . .

This text takes my breath away
up on a new levell . . .

The sky is not a limit, univers
is a smal stepp when we open
up our doors . . .

*APPLAUSES and BOOKMARKED'

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2008-08-23
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Oh my GOD . . . you are realy back
in your writing my friend . . .

this is breathtaking . . . XXX:)

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2008-08-23
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FAR OUT . . . this text is fantastic!
You have a drive in your words . . .
like a golf player on the fairway when
you hit the ball . . . there it goes . . .
long, long away . . . Far out . . .
hits the green and you do it so well!
BRAVO Kathy I love this text!!!

*APPLAUSES and BOKMARKED*

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2008-08-22
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TTtttttssssssssssssssss . . . . .
Blow my mind girl!

Im so sleepy . . . go girl
this is fantastic . . .

I love it!

*APPLAUSES*

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2008-08-01
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A wonderful poem Christian . . .
it takes the breath out of me
The moment I read Michaels text
today was a hit in the chest . . .
I thought . . . He is still here . . .


*APPLAUSES*

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2008-08-01
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Dear Kathy I can feel him too
verry confusing . . . it is like
he is still living . . .

All the best my friend, Dan

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2008-08-01
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Heartbreaking . . . death is one
of the things we have to go thru
and its not easy to walk that
road . . . where life is one of our
guides . . .

*APPLAUSES*

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2008-07-09
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I Love this text Christian . . .
while I know something . . .
death only feels the vibrations

I know I have dance with one of
them . . . but vibrations is music too

*APPLAUSES*

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2008-07-05
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Wonderful writing of a beautiful
friend

Words from the heart!!!

*APPLAUSES*

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2008-07-05
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Wonderful writing and the two
last stanza is superb!!!

*APPLAUSE*

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2008-07-05
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Wonderful words and pictures
my dear, dear friend . . .

*BOOKMARKED and APPLAUSES*

and you know . . .
"there is an eagel turning in the wind"
(Mike Batt)

All the best, Dan

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2008-05-18
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Wonderful, great and with so much love
Mike had so many strings on his guitar
birdwatcher and a nature lover . . .
well and he loved to goo fly fishing and
hes interest of flamenco music . . .
the list is long and of couse his interest
of history . . .

Long live the memory of Michael!

*APPLAUSES*

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2008-05-17
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Well done, and well said . . . words
we need in moments like this . . .
Thank you for sharing your thoughts
and welcome on poetbay, welcome
to the family with no limits and a
Writing life with the evaluating point
too share and read, discus and
find new honorable friends . . .

WELCOME

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2008-05-16
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Great, right and fine words to
the memory of Michael as we
knew him . . .

Thanks for sharing your thoughts
here with all of us who is in a
state of shock right now . . .

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2008-05-16
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This one goes too my heart and
the memory of you Michael . . . .

Always in our memories . . .

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2008-05-16
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Love never dies . . . so true!!!
All the best in time of sorrow!

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