Kshiti Dubey

2022-01-18
This poem is beautiful and heart breaking at the same time. Thank you for sharing.

2021-12-23
You are a strong woman with extremely strong ethics Vaishnavi. I'm glad you're on poetbay and like me, you too will have a safe place for letting emotions and creativity flow. I'm looking forward to reading more from you.

2021-10-20
Hi Ken!
This was a wonderful poem and quite true. Books enable us to not only go back and forth in time, but also transport us to fantasy worlds as well (this coming from a Harry Potter fan).

2021-10-20
This was a wonderful read! Reminds me of Dr. Seuss!

2017-06-12
Ken! It's been a while since I've got back on poetbay and this was a lovely surprise! :) And every line is true! We should like ourselves as who we are and only then will others like us back. If they don't then they aren't important.

This is a lovely and beautiful poem!

2016-08-26
In the midst of all the wrong things happening in the world, it is necessary to keep the good in us alive. Only then can we, one day rid ourselves of all the wrong happening in the world. Wonderful write Ken. :)

2016-08-26
How wonderful it is to fall in love! Such a beautiful poem. :)

2016-08-23
This sums up all kinds of people. Good write Ken! :)

2016-03-29
Words are more effective than guns any day! :)

2016-03-22
Unfortunately we've come to a time where we find people filming calamities or accidents rather than helping people out. Their self-worth is dependent on how many likes they gather on social media.
You have depicted that so well in your write. :)

2016-03-22
I saw a scene play out right in front of my eyes. It made me wonder what series of events led him/her there in the first place. Well written!

2016-02-11
This is such a wonderful poem! :)

We humans never do seem to learn from the past. We keep pushing ourselves into the same ditch again and again. You've expressed this in a very effective way through your poem.

2014-03-20
War is a sad game that the rich play, and its the poor and innocent who die.
I liked the text a lot. I could literally see the scene play out in front of my eyes.
And for some reason I imagined the officer to be this fat stout man with a permanent frown on his face.
Good write and well done! :)

2012-10-09
I love the way it rhymes. It's true that when freedom is taken away the strong become weak, and it is freedom which brings out the true colors of an individual.
Applauds!

2012-10-09
Very well written. I sometimes feel sorry for the soldiers who might be living with the same regret of having their hands stained with the blood of all the people who they have killed.
Applauds!

2011-08-22
losing someone you love is a very hard thing to go through. this piece of writing touched me and i wish i could go and hug that little girl myself. :)

2011-08-22
It's sad how the world solves it's problems only through violence. The so called leaders only look at what they're gaining, not how much they are losing. Other people have to pay the price of their decisions or whatever grudges they hold against someone. The emotion is very clear in your poem and it forces people to think about the topic. I really like it!

2011-04-29
This one was more like a story. It had my attention from the start till the end. But I think the guy in this needs a good spanking for treating the girl that way :)

2011-04-26
I agree with mayamiko. You paint with your words. It was as though I could see a silent movie playing in my mind :-). I liked it a lot.

2011-04-26
It's a very nice poem. I like the message it gives out, of never giving up and to keep trying no matter what the obstacles may be. I loved it. Kudos to you and Galateus

2011-04-26
Pyar ek aisa ehsaas hai jo jab ho jaaye toh sab kuch khaas aur aacha lagne lagta hai...har mamuli cheez nayab lagne lagti hai... mujhe aapki kavita bahaut acchi lagi :-)

2011-04-23
Everybody has had a feeling of not fitting-in at some point or the other in their life I guess. It's what makes us human; the feeling of wanting to belong. And your poem is a good interpretation of that feeling. :-)

2011-04-23
Wow! For a moment I actually felt as if I was there! It's simple, sweet, short and beautiful. :-)

2011-04-23
A very nice one indeed amandeep. And I agree with StanCooper that "Longing" would be a very apt title

2011-01-12
I like the lines --

I'm here and you're there.
There just doesn't have a clue.
I'm here and you're there.
How lucky there is, to be with you

Your poems have a very nice rhyming scheme.
Thanks for sharing them with us.

2010-12-22
Wow! Tis' a strange feeling when someone hurts you. You really do feel as though you are internally bleeding. I like the way you write, a beautiful and intelligent poem.

2010-12-14
You are an amazing writer! I love reading your texts.

2010-12-11
Wow! This is so lovely! I loved reading it.

2010-11-28
Everyone deserves a second chance. I'm bookmarking this one.

2010-11-23
I loved the flow of the poem. 'On the musky day that we did see', I felt as though I was watching a scene go by my eyes.

2010-11-15
This is well written and cheerful. I like it very much!

2010-11-14
This is really good! The first two lines got my attention and after that, I stuck to the entire poem.

Kshiti

2010-11-14
This is written very beautifully. It paints a picture in front of eyes.

2010-11-11
It's short, sweet and well written.
I liked it very much...:)

2010-11-11
I love the last line! The poem was very expressive and beautiful. You give me a lot to learn from, in terms of language and how to express myself.

2010-10-30
A beautiful poem, which is very well written. Applaud.

2010-10-30
A lovely poem.....Applaud!

2009-02-14
Wow! these are some very intense thoughts you've penned down there! Good work!

2009-02-10
I love how you say so much in just a few words. Cheers to such a poem.

2009-01-21
I liked it...accha laga, par I think you should translate it too for the people who don't understand hindi.
Kya aap hamesha bichadne aur door ho jaane ke kavita likhte hai?

2009-01-20
its beautiful and inspiring

2009-01-17
Your poems leave me speechless and in the end, I cant think of stufff to write over here!

2009-01-17
Wow? Your poems inspire me. Sometimes I ask myself, why dont I get such ideas?!

2009-01-06
This beautiful work of art just made my heart melt and tingle.
Congrats on such a wonderful poem.

2008-12-31
Quite a long time since you've written a poem but you still haven't lost you're golden touch!

2008-12-23
aatank ek aaisi bala hai jis ka shayad hi koi hal ho.
aatankvadiyo ke na koi apne hote hai bas sabhi paraye.
Sarhado ko todhne ke bajae woh unhe masbuth karte hai.
26/11 ke attacks ne saari duniya ko sharminda hi nahi, gussa bhi dila diya.
I liked your work.

2008-12-23
shayad ye pehli baar ho ki kisi ne hindi mein ek kavita poetbay par likhi ho. Aap ki ye kavita shayari aur kavita ka mael lagta hai.
Mujhe bahut pyaara laga

2008-12-23
I must say this is quite a beautiful piece.

2008-12-23
My!My! It's like I could imagine everything in front of me.
For a moment I forgot everything. This is truly a mighty great work of art.

2008-12-23
Its short and beautiful.
I'd give this a full rating.
Hats off :-)