Short lives...
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2006-07-07 AMEN ! .... Well ...what can I say . Like the flow of well thought out and meaningful passages . No gimmicks here ... Worth the read ! G
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Try
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2006-07-07 WOW ! Thanks for that K . Been away for a while ...but now I'm back . Great read !
May The Fire In Your Heart
Always Burn
Cheers ! G
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With A Simple Kiss
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2006-07-07 Hi ! I agree with Alexander and Damon .... YES ! I can feeeeel where you are coming from , and I guess more importantly , going too .... Like it ! G
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Amanda: An Inventory of Being
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2006-07-07 Well ...welcome Apanda ... I ... I . I mean Amanda . Least now I know you better . This was rather good . A fun way of introducing yourself . Good ! G
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Here We Sit
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2006-07-07 What can I say Amanda ... this is so true too so many people . Like letting go I guess , as well . You put your words together so well in this prose . Such meaning .... and alas sometimes , so true ! Good work G
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3) Dear God
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2006-07-07 Yes ! Agree with Damon and Zoya . God Bless !!! ...... G
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4) Your Rose
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2006-07-07 Ahhh yes my dear Amanda ... Yes . Whether it be arose , a letter , a token of love , 1 cannot forget those times we remember . We do place it back between the sheets , or is it between our hearts ..... mmmmm I wonder . Well done ! G
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5) Love Has Wings
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2006-07-07 So true ! So true ! Lovely piece here. Full of true meaning . G
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There You Go Again by M.A.Meddings
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2006-06-05 This is GOOD ... so short and SWEET ..... Nice touch my friend !! ... G
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Is there Anyone? [song ]
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2006-06-05 Well done Liz ... I feel a foot tapping rhythmic song here ... and I guess much like Meatloaf. Whatever ... I think it's rather good . Won't be surprised if I hear this at the 2007 ARIA awards ..... G
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The Boy by the Ganges
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2006-06-02 HUGS for this my friend ... !! ..... Enjoyed reading this poem so much ... G !
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Gently Do The Whispers Fall
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2006-05-09 Ahhhhhhh such lovely words . Your heart speaks through your hands ...and it's all GOOD ! ............ G
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In Memory.
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2006-05-09 Hi ! ... I LIKE dogs so much , espec mine ...and after reading this prose , LIKE this too !! ... Well done G ......... G !
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Mustard Fields of Kashmir
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2006-05-09 Hi ... Don't hear or know much about KASHMIRE over here .... guess I don't need to ... YOU explained it SO GOOD ! ... A GOOD READ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! .... G
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Come Together
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2006-05-09 Hi Z .... HUGS for this one . Agree in particular KJC's comment. Keep writing STRONG !!!!!! ........ xo G
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Petals falling
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2006-04-18 Well written Rik .... A powerful write here ... Enjoy your work ... Cheers ! ... G
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Let Bygones be Bygones
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2006-04-18 Yes ... Yes .... Yes .... Agree fully with this LOVELY write Z .. Think this happens 2 us all ...we're only human and I guess at times we say the wrong thing , do the wrong thing , etc .... LOVE is so strong ...so powerful .... and that's something that keeps us all so alive and with hope .... GOOD ......... G
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Set her free [ to be truly happy]
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2006-04-18 And I hope U do .... in time you will, L ... A good read again . Liked its thought . G ... ps ... Happy Easter 2 U too .... Enjoy this time of year ..... G
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The girl I used to be
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2006-04-18 What lovely write Pia . Guess I know where U are coming from too .... Good thought out and written prose .... G
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Chrushed
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2006-04-18 What a lovely thought out and written piece here . Rather touching actually . Enjoyed this read a lot . It has meaning !! ... G
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Springs Rebirth.
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2006-04-18 You describe the season so beautifully , P ... It all rolled through my head so good when I read this ..... G
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Daisies by M.A.Meddings
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2006-04-18 Well written and thought out . Rather touching ..... GOOD ........ G
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Still Waters.
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2006-04-18 Well done Penfold .. LIKED this prose so much . GOOD feel about it ... G
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My Sweet and Funny Friend [Marie]
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2006-04-11 Cute ! ... Nice touch L .......... G
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Caring and Sharing
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2006-04-11 Ahhh Z ... Oh so sweet . This poem also works both ways , if U know what I mean . Think TRUE LOVE is when BOTH SIDES recipacate. G
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I Need You Today
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2006-04-09 This is good . A mother and her child ( is this you my dear Z ) , anyway ... well penned . Yes ...life does go too fast sometimes and sometimes we dont realize how fortunate we are with loved ones . People grow up and move on ... it's LIFE . GOOD READ ........ G
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There was a beautiful Woman from Sweden by M.A.Meddings
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2006-04-07 Hey ..... This is GOOD ! ... Enjoyed this read a lot . Well written and thought out ...... Cheers ! .... G
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'Potato Eaters'
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2006-04-07 Something different from your lovely pen my dear Z .... but it's STILL all good . Won't elaborate , but think that THIS is rather good . Hope all is well .... G
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The Tree of the Evaporated Girl
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2006-04-07 Hey ! ... This is rather good .... Cheers ! G
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My Secret
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2006-04-06 Excellent write here my dear Z ... Well thought out and written ..... G
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How Can You Tell?
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2006-04-06 Well presented and thought out L .... Very enjoyable and though provoking read .... Cheers ! .... G
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We can.....
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2006-04-03 Just to sit and watch time sail by ..... " ...LIKE this one L .... Thought the read touched my inner soul rather well .... and all so TRUE ....... Well done ! G
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Be With Me My Heart
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2006-04-03 Hi ! Malin said it so well , and I fully agree . Touching and thought provoking ... Well done Z ! ... Good read .... G
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A Future lost
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2006-03-31 Very well written and thought out Penfold . LIKE this 1 very much ... and such a sad finish ... GOOD READ ! ...... G
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Recycle Me
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2006-03-30 Yes , my dear Z .... RECYCLE . Our lives are all but that , from the cradle to the grave , the cave to this modern age ...but there's ALWAYS that one thing WE all STRIVE for .... LOVE ...... GOOD READ Z ..... Enjoyed this .... G
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Noodles Fossilized
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2006-03-30 and I do like NOODLES ..... Like this one Z , I guess a tad different 2 your normal proses , but yea , ALL GOOD . One must not always tread the same path , as we will not see what other beauty there is on the other side . G
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Revenge
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2006-03-30 Well written and thought out .... a good piece here . Enjoyed the read ...keep it up ! Glen
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Where will i find you...
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2006-03-30 Excellant RIK ..... Loved reading this 1 . This one I think gives me food for thought in my "pieces of art " . Well written and thought out ...... a great touch . G
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Ganga My Ganga
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2006-03-30 Enjoyed reading this prose , story , call it what U like , WELL WRITTEN and presented . Thought LIAM was spot on in his comment . Glen ...
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I won't Be BEHAVED;-)
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2006-03-30 Ahhhh yes ..... LUCKY guy this 1 ...but anyway .... all good . Needless 2 say all the very best with U both ... may LOVE light both your candles and flicker and shine through many years of peace , trust , good times and bad , but only when you both meet your "maker" , the candle will die. ........Cheers ! G
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Sublimation
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2006-03-30 Thought all below me have said how I feel ... a GOOD read well penned from a pure heart and mind . My proses are so different 2 yours , but enjoy reading yours for inspiration . Well done ! .... G ( Hope to be writing another 1 myself soon ... think I have writers block ..... lol ! )
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Strip Away.
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2006-03-30 Hi ... I think this is fine mate .... head cold or not .... nice read ! .... Cheers ! G
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Lost in Cyber Space (To all my friends on the bay!)
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2006-03-28 My dear Z ... Never mind ... These things happen .... your poems will never be "deleted " from my heart .... G
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My song
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2006-03-16 Hey RIK .... Rather GOOD this ... NICE flow and MEANING ...... the other guys are right 2 .... LIKE !!! ........ G
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YEARS AGO, I HAD CHOSEN...
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2006-03-16 Each and every person who commented are RIGHT in what they said .... All I can say is YES ..... I'm with them ! .... Good stuff Z .... Like ! .... G
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Women of True Love
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2006-03-16 Such a beautiful piece here , Z . A history lesson of love and life . Had to read it a couple of times to fully understand , and ejoy this tale . Well done ! .... G
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Reasons to Smile
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2006-03-06 Hey ! ... Agree with ALL what U said . Nice touch mate ... but your so right though . There are so many songs , and i guess poems , written about that 4 letter word , its amazing . I won't go on , but nice read T .... Glen ( GB )
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My sea
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2006-03-06 Hi ! .. I thought this piece was good . Thought the words flowed beautifully with much thought and love . Hope from this I don't have too wait too long for your next one . Cheers .... Glen ( GB )
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Hard times of self-made srife
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2006-03-03 Well done L with this one .... they say it means something when it comes straight from the heart , from the start to a finish , the beginning to an end , but you know that there's always a friend , someone who's always there . Glen
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Yesterday Today and Tomorrow
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2006-03-03 And YOU are so right .... Remember the past , Love the present , and yearn for tomorrow .... think U say it rather good .
Well done Z ........... Glen
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